
Douluo Dalu: Heroes of the Present
斗罗之今朝英豪
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 3.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
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Reader comments 31
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Let me prove that your propaganda works
If you dare to write about Dou San, you are still anti-Tang San. This is hell mode. After all, Dou San's Douluo Continent can be renamed Tang Family Continent. The will of the planet is Tang San's parents.
I don't understand, a Douluo fanfic put two original male characters in the protagonist team, and teamed up with the original characters for cp😅. Although it is not incomprehensible, Yun Qing estimates that the author's real-life friend, Wu Zaiyin, probably is the author's true spirit, or is still a friend. But you, the author, need to understand why some articles are written by novices, their writing is poor, and they reject them when they see a girl, but many people read them and still make a lot of money, because they cater to the market. Nowadays, novels are not considered works, they can only be said to be products. If you bring in two supporting characters for yy, you think what you are writing is a work of art 🙂. In fact, your writing style is better than many other novice fans, but the number of chapters in the more than 200 chapters of my novice novels is less than half of yours, and your popularity index is more than five times as high as yours. This is only obtained by you promoting it everywhere. You are really a clown. You want to write a long story, and you are a bit ambitious. It can be seen, but now. . . . .
Author, I have briefly read your book. How to say it? I feel that your writing style is a bit biased towards martial arts, and it feels like you are writing according to Douluo's world view. But Douluo's worldview itself is very imperfect, and the development of this world into modern society makes me feel very strange. His entire social structure is very problematic. It doesn't look like it's capital, it's not even close to being a republic, and it's even less worthy of socialism. This is more like the ancient social background and current productivity, but he doesn't mention the contradictions in between. As for the author, you have expressed your thoughts about the current hero, so let's do something more awesome, directly kick out the plot, and directly combine the three mountains of imperial capital and feudalism into one, create a Jedi sky, seal off the divine world, force the lower class to directly give birth to republican ideas, and resist the protagonist's government to complete the historical process and start a better future development.
I don't see the use of the protagonist's golden finger at all. The Taoist skills used by the protagonist are not as powerful as the Xuantian Kung Fu. They are really rubbish. They deliberately lower the protagonist's level. They also claim that if you level up too quickly, it will easily collapse. If you want to see such a powerful golden finger, are you afraid of collapse? Qing Shuiwen is better than you. Look, they have been saying in the comment area that there will be an explanation later. The most vicious thing about Douluo Wen is deliberately lowering the level. A person who cheats can practice at the same speed as the dragon set in the original book, or even slower. Do you want to laugh me to death? Is this just a genius? Do you know what a genius is? Using the fewest resources, rising to the fastest level, having the most solid foundation, becoming invincible at the same level, and having no one at the same level at all. This is a genius. But using the most resources to be at the same level as your peers, and then becoming invincible at the same level is really ridiculous. If the supporting character in this book had practiced the protagonist's skills, he would have surpassed the protagonist by more than 20 levels. It's really rubbish.
I plan to write the novel Douluo: Today's Heroes to more than two million words, and I want to write the emotional drama and plot carefully.
Well, your publicity is useful (otherwise I wouldn't have noticed this book). I'll wait and see when you update it to about a hundred chapters, otherwise I'll always find it unsatisfying.
Author, the male protagonist you wrote has the same double standards as you, and you also said that Tang San Wang has double standards. You and the male protagonist are no better than Tang San Wang. They are both double standards.
I quite like the character of Xu Xiaoyan in the original novel. I can understand why you said that there are several protagonists and you don't want to accept her. If Le Zhengyu was with her, it would be understandable after all. But if you create an original character and pair her up, or even be promoted by the protagonist, you really can't accept it. But I also wish the author to write better and better
Finally
To be honest, in the end, the protagonist doesn't have to engage in any hypocritical trial, and there is no need to talk about justice or anything, just fight and it's over. The protagonist and Tang San are simply conflicting interests and ideas. Flaunting the protagonist's justice is the same as flaunting Tang San's purity. So let's fight vigorously until the avenue is shattered and one of them is destroyed. Let's bring this book to a final conclusion!