Blackwind Stronghold Chief: I Have a Summoning System

If you can't write female characters, don't write them! Are you deliberately trying to disgust people? A summoner-style character is decisive and ruthless; not being a simp is a prerequisite!

Wow, in the martial arts world, why make it so complicated when the strong can rule everything? What's the point?

Instead of focusing on robbery, you devoted so much space to romance and love, and in such a childish way!

The romance scenes are a complete mess. If you can't write them, don't write them at all. Writing them only makes people feel awkward and gets you scolded. Why bother?

The author ignored advice; if you can't write romance, don't write it at all, or just gloss over it. What was supposed to be a ruthless bandit leader has been turned into a womanizing, sycophantic lackey. There's a reason the story didn't do well.

Since you're a knock-off, I hope you won't summon anything like crashing into a mountain peak or Wang Chongyang; that doesn't suit your style. Summon more, like the Blood Blade Ancestor, the Starry Sky Immortal, and the like—the more sinister the better.

I hate this ambiguity. If you're going to end it, just end it directly! Why write several chapters of ambiguity instead of just getting straight to the point? Ambiguity doesn't suit this kind of ancient martial arts novel, and ambiguity generally doesn't appeal to most readers! Especially since it involves summoned characters!

The culture of simps has become ingrained in their minds.

Never seen a woman? Then you should write more about women to satisfy your fantasies and not get too pent up.

Having read up to chapter 22, I'm certain it's not about bandits, it's about a sycophant. Goodbye.