
Qingdong
青冬
- Status
- Completed
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- 3k Words
- Genre
- Short Story
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Short Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
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- Qidian
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{"TopicId":"847969658145144832","TopicName":"The lawyer painted today"} Ah, they all painted well, it must be because they painted well, and they took pity on me, so they praised me a few words. Ah, I am so envious!
Chapter 2 Non-daily life experience
[When I, Deng Yilin, was still a small employee in the company, I was determined to reach the top of the world's richest list. Now! I did it! The sound coming from the old TV stimulated a man's nerves. He couldn't help but retching when he looked at Deng Yilin's proud smiling face and the disgusting faces of those applauding and cheering guys on the flashing screen. Ten years! In the past ten years, Deng Yilin has become the richest man in Shanghai and even the world! Why! What on earth does he have? Lei Minghui picked up a bottle of wine from the messy table and drank it in one gulp. "Cough cough cough! MD!" Lei Minghui choked on the wine and became even more angry. He slammed the wine bottle in his hand to the ground, adding another piece of debris to the already dirty ground. Lei Minghui sniffed, covered his greasy and curly hair with a hood, turned off the disgusting TV and stood up. After finally wading through piles of garbage, he came to the door of the room and put on the worn and yellowed sneakers. It has been ten years since he was fired from his job. These ten years of life have been like a disaster to him! After he was fired, he applied for a job in Shanghai more than once and was rejected! Looking for a job! And then get rejected again! Are you that Lei Minghui? Sorry, you do not meet our company's recruitment requirements. Why! His ability is not bad! It must be Deng Yilin who caused him harm. It was all Deng Yilin that made his life so miserable. To put it bluntly, if he had not targeted Deng Yilin back then, he would have been... "Alas... MD!" Pushing open the broken door of the dilapidated apartment, Lei Minghui put his hands into the pockets of his coat. The cool wind hit his face so hard that he couldn't help but sneeze. Although the cold winter has passed, the weather in early spring is not friendly. It is still cold when it should be cold, and it is bitingly cold. Lei Minghui curled up his neck, woke up his nose, and quickly left the apartment. This apartment is so bad that it deserves to be demolished. He walked to a nearby busy street and planned to get some drinks, but seeing the passers-by talking and laughing on the street, Lei Minghui gritted his teeth and became even more unhappy. In addition, there are advertisements endorsed by Deng Yilin posted everywhere on the streets. This is the most intolerable thing for Lei Minghui. Lei Minghui spat on the ground, and then he came to a window with an advertisement for Deng Yilin's endorsement and kicked the window glass violently. "Hey! What are you doing!" The shop owner ran out when he saw the broken glass. Lei Minghui cursed angrily when he saw the situation and ran away quickly. He didn't know how long he had been running. He only knew that he stopped in front of the window glass of another store. The glass reflected his tired and slovenly face at the moment. He was obviously only in his thirties, but he looked anxious and looked ten years older. The old green coat he was wearing still had oil stains on it from eating instant noodles a few days ago. Just talk about how people can be like this! Lei Minghui looked at himself reflected in the glass and couldn't help but recall his previous appearance. How majestic I was at that time, how could I have imagined that I was so down and helpless now... "No! I have to settle the score with that bastard Deng Yilin!" Lei Minghui gritted his teeth and clenched his fists. He raised his head and looked at the tallest building in the Magic City. The anger in his eyes was about to swallow him up. ——■■■—— After Lei Minghui rushed into the Glory Building in the Magic City, he was going to go directly to Deng Yilin. Seeing that he came with a bad intention, two security guards blocked his way. "Sir, do you have an appointment?" A security guard thought that the sloppy beggar in front of him had an appointment, but he still asked out of professional requirements. Lei Minghui shouted with red eyes, "Get out of the way!" "Sir, it will be very difficult for us if you do this!" As he said, the two security guards were about to carry Lei Minghui out of the building. But at this moment—— Alert⚠️Alert⚠️Unknown ■■■—— The two security guards and Lei Minghui, who had not yet figured out the situation, arrived on the top floor of the building in the blink of an eye. "What is going on!" A security guard let go of Lei Minghui and ran to the nearest window. He looked at the brightly lit street outside with a look of disbelief on his face. Another security guard pointed tremblingly at the darkness at the end of the floor. "There is... Something over there!" Lei Minghui also opened his eyes wide and looked towards the end of the floor. The space is distorted, and the dark dots are constantly expanding, as if something is about to rush out of the dark vortex. Lei Minghui realized something was not going well and hurriedly threw away the security guard around him and ran downstairs. He knew that Deng Yilin's office was on the 66th floor, but he was now on the 124th floor on the top floor. He wants to go down and take revenge on Deng Yilin! But just when Lei Minghui made a move, a large and slender hand stretched out from the black vortex at the end of the floor. I saw that hand suddenly grabbing the security guard standing next to the window. The next second the security guard turned into red glass beads under the pressure of the claws. "Weird... Monster!!!" Another security guard also shouted at this time. His legs and feet became weak and he collapsed on the ground. Just when he was about to crawl towards the stairs, long black hands quickly reached out and grabbed his legs, which naturally caused the same result as the previous security guard. Lei Minghui did not dare to move or make a sound. He knew that the long-armed monster was behind him. He had clearly heard the screams of the security guards and the sound of falling glass beads just now. There were even a few red beads rolling to his feet. Lei Minghui swallowed, his eyes widened, his forehead was already sweating and his hands were shaking unconsciously. The atmosphere was oppressive, and he could hardly hold on anymore. The black monster seemed to have completely grown out of the whirlpool. Its slender arms even touched Lei Minghui's feet. Lei Minghui could see it clearly just by looking slightly sideways. What on earth could this be? Alien? Monster! What the hell is this disgusting thing! Lei Minghui could no longer think calmly. He even hated himself for not being able to kill Deng Yilin before he died. Just when Lei Minghui thought that he would be eaten by the monster, the monster actually made a human-like sound from behind him. What kind of smelly thing affects my eating! Get out of here—— Before Lei Minghui could react, someone else appeared on another floor. He raised his head and saw the sign on the 12th floor. Was he rejected by the monster? That's pretty good too... What the hell! ! Lei Minghui looked at the red glass beads on the ground. He knew very well that there were monsters like the one just now on this floor! But what if there are monsters? Can he be defeated? If the monster found out, he would be dead. Lei Minghui grabbed the red glass beads on the ground and stood up tremblingly. He is not sure that he can defeat the monster. He plans to leave to save his life first and deal with Deng Yilin later. Maybe Deng Yilin has been killed by the monster now... No, Deng Yilin is not dead. A strange sound came from Lei Minghui's ears. "What are you! A monster?" Lei Minghui did not dare to speak loudly. He was afraid of disturbing the monsters on this floor. The weird voice paused and said again, [I will help you deal with Deng Yilin, how about you help me eliminate "them"? "What do you mean?" I can't tolerate your rejection! It's coming! The strange sound guided Lei Minghui to look towards the front of the floor. The monster with a bloody mouth was rushing towards it! Dead! Absolutely dead! Don't despair, baby~ You just need to raise your hands! Hold on tight! Grab what you want to grab! After the weird sound disappeared, Lei Minghui's hand waved uncontrollably, and he slashed towards the monster as if he was grabbing some weapon. Then chop it down! ] "No! I don't want to die yet! I don't want to die!" Looking at the monster's terrifying face, Lei Minghui yelled in fear with the strange voice and words. He closed his eyes tightly and slashed down with his hands. "Ah!!!" As Lei Minghui let out a loud roar, the disgusting monster with a big mouth was split in half by a piece of A4 paper. Crash—— The monster instantly turned into a puddle of black liquid and gradually disappeared, leaving a golden glass bead where the monster died. Lei Minghui opened his eyes in shock. He couldn't believe that he actually killed the monster, and he still used A4 paper... [This weapon looks too weak. After Lei Minghui calmed down a little, he took a big breath to calm down, and then a boy with short black hair and shorts appeared in front of him. The young man picked up the golden glass beads left by the monster with his slender white hands, and then swallowed them into his stomach. He said in the weird voice that Lei Minghui heard just now, "You are indeed the human being I like, and you are still very powerful." It just smells so bad. As he spoke, the young man pinched his nose and waved the air in front of him. Lei Minghui looked at this incredible young man and didn't know what to ask for a while. The young man saw Lei Minghui's confusion and explained, [Did you see these glass beads on the ground? This is their job. The more glass beads they have, the better their performance will be. It's just not normal for you humans. And my job is to eat the core in their bodies, so I chose you. Because you have a lot of resentment in your heart. I like your resentment and know that you are not a pure good person. You don't have to worry about saying anything to me, you just need to listen to me and deal with them. They send a lot of people to work here, and the competition is also very high. It's the end of the month and I'm rushing to achieve results. Except for this building, there are screams and glass beads outside. You no longer have a peaceful daily life, so please enjoy your extraordinary life. As soon as the boy finished speaking, the red glass beads on the ground rolled towards the boy. After a while, those glass beads turned into smoke and were all absorbed by the boy. Lei Minghui moved his body vigilantly, and he stumbled and fell directly to other floors. The young man naturally followed him. Ah! Fell to the 72nd floor. The monster on this floor is a bit tricky, and I don't know if you can defeat it. Lei Minghui frowned while lying on the ground looking at the young man's delicate smile. He asked in a hoarse voice, "Why don't you deal with these monsters yourself?" I will also be expelled for violating the rules. Oh, by the way, honey~ Let me remind you, the monsters on this floor cannot be easily killed with the piece of paper in your hand. ] "Then what should I do next?" Lei Minghui felt that something was approaching him. But the young man gradually became transparent and seemed to disappear in front of Lei Minghui's eyes. Observe more, each monster will have specific weaknesses. If it doesn't work, just run away and shout for help, haha. As soon as he finished speaking, the young man disappeared. ——[Two Sticks] Eighty-Six Meridians Tiandao Luren {"TopicId":"847956397190414336","TopicName":"Pulsating Story Solitaire"}
Forgive me for my nonsense and some shallow opinions. If you are offended, please delete the comment. After roughly reading it, the first two chapters have the feeling of Haruki Murakami. To be more detailed, it has a lonely and cold atmosphere. If it is regarded as the so-called golden three chapters of online articles, it is actually quite attractive. However, the next few chapters do not have a full plot, but they are not like prose. Let me focus on this plot. When "my" paintings were appreciated, "my" heart fluctuated. In fact, I felt a bit "hypocritical" (not malicious, I can completely understand the delicate thoughts of girls.). Then I continued reading. After reading one chapter, the suddenness was gone! It feels like the author hasn't finished writing. To sum up, an amazing first two chapters are worthy of being praised, but the subsequent dry plot cannot afford the pig belly (speaking of this number of chapters, I should have noticed it when I flipped through the book and looked at the table of contents). The above are some self-made criticisms about this book, but I am mainly posting this to say that the author's writing is very spiritual and thoughtful, but he lacks some experience and mature creative skills and materials. The latter is accumulated with age and creative experience. Most writers struggle to pursue the former but cannot find it (this is why poets are called Brahmins in the field of literature. They are born with talents and are gifted by nature). This is your talent. Just be sure not to live up to it. Don't say anything, don't listen to it.