People in Konoha, Sign in Makima Template

The writing is quite interesting, but it seems weird that Makima keeps calling herself 'he'

It's so messy. It's just her who is a girl. She's sometimes him, and it's uncomfortable to watch.

There are too few novels about the starting point transformation or the version and character of Makima. I hope the author will write more and give the author a little suggestion. This Magima is not scornful enough. I think Magima should be more fun and twisted. After all, everyone is pursuing pleasure 😃 Of course, the novel is still quite young, and the author may not have laid out the plot yet. Anyway, keep going!

The protagonist's starting point is too high. The daughter of the fourth-generation Hokage and the third-generation apprentice/advisor are revealed to be the hokage's deceitful character written all over her face. Personally, I think the Rebel Ninja or the Little Ninja Village Magima would look better, Mizukage Ninja and Kazekage Ninja Magima should also work.

What Obito said is clearly worse than trash, why are you such a scumbag

Many words are not fluent, and there are many typos.

Investors, please wait a moment. I have lost my ID card. I may need to get a replacement after the year and then change the contract status.

The contract has been signed, everyone can come and invest, just pay some coins for free, and after the investment is completed, the contract will be signed and the status will be changed.

Just do a search and you'll find it! Okay, okay, looks good

The protagonist's ability is a bit perverted, not only perverted, but also very perverted

The plot is okay, but the text is a bit unclear.

Come on author, you can do it! 😆😆Don't stop updating! 😆😆😫😫

Can anyone send information about Ma Qima? What is this template? Not the same thing as the devil?

How about setting up a book club... It seems useless, after all, there are very few readers.

The author is currently considering whether to kill everyone he dislikes