I'm Really Not Immortal

The unknown woman invites the protagonist to dinner, but the protagonist refuses, and then Li Yu "looks strange, why refuse, looks like a fool, sighs softly" four times. This chapter says "A straight man of steel, single based on his strength, I'm afraid you won't be able to find him, this kid is hopeless" Fourth Company. I wonder if a woman is trying to be courteous, do I have to agree? The protagonist somehow managed to win the top prize, but is he afraid of being single? Is it 100% acceptable for male friends to find women for dinner? The world of boiling sheep makes me, a proud man, very unhappy 🤔

Whenever you meet a woman, she must be a beauty. I wonder if you writers can't write novels without women?

I paid two coins specifically for this book. New readers should pay attention when reading this book. Chapter 10 starts with the plot. It has a hard twist. He takes responsibility for no reason and his mother's heart bursts. The author also famously said that it's okay if he gets into trouble. Attention, those who have Shennong's constitution, you can give it a try and withdraw first.

Drawing cats cannot be compared to dogs. I want to follow the style of a museum, but I don't have that level. It's really a failure.

I always feel bad that this type of book has a female protagonist.

It's interesting, very interesting. It doesn't matter whether you have a harem or not. Personally, I suggest that you don't be too much of a stud. You can't just be a beauty. If there are too many characters, it will be difficult to flesh out the character. There is no arc. If you are simply obscene, it is more interesting to watch the H-story. There are often ancient stories in the plot. When people appear, it is better to be more cautious in dialogue and character, otherwise it is easy to cause drama. Lao Zhu writes well, and you can tell by looking at his imperial edicts. He speaks plainly, curses, has a bad temper, and shouts and kills at every turn, but he attaches great importance to farmers Write well, hold on, come on! ! !

Hmm... If you say I'm short, there's no need to leave a message. I know I'm short. In addition, the update will be much better after it is put on the shelves.

The first half is a masterpiece, and the second half is 💩. When the moon comes back, it feels like everyone and their souls have been taken away! Except for the names, it feels like two novels. After reading more than 200 chapters, I almost vomited. It felt like I was reading another novel entirely. Combat strength plummeted. The plot line is also completely messed up. The Eighteenth Son is gone, the Panlong Pei, a bunch of treasures are not used, and he will fight with Wuzhi Qi to death. When you encounter a ghost, where is your Heavenly Master's Thunder Method? It doesn't matter to you whether they have dragon-slaying veins or not, there are many of them anyway! In the first three hundred chapters, why did you go to the moon to lie on Kunlun and go to the ancient tomb? Ho, bah! This crappy book won't make it onto my reading list. Not worthy!

Just feed you the ten-point coin, I rely on this early in the morning, why do you give me Seoli for daily poison induction? I originally thought that my poison resistance was high enough, but after seeing it, I still have to go back to the female channel to practice. I am really not as good as the author's loyal readers. Chapter 17 is my 🙏🙏 limit.

The previous writing is really good and interesting. The characterization and relationships are all very comfortable. Since the revival of the spiritual energy, the return of the moon, and the apprenticeship of Xunzi, the writing style has become even if it is broken, even the writing style of Tomato can't stand it. I hope you will stop your losses in time.