I'm Really Not Immortal

After reading about 30 chapters, the museum feel is quite obvious, and I quite like this genre. However, I feel that the writing is a bit poor, and the dialogue between the characters is difficult to bring in. It would be more realistic if it could be closer to reality without a lot of text (depending on the scene). I just read some comments and they said you can come back and read it after you finish writing. It makes sense! Maybe the author will write better in the future, but I haven't read it yet.

The spiritual energy was revived. Although there were some minor problems before I became a disciple of Xunzi, it was still interesting and did not affect reading. After that, I changed my writing to another person, purely to feed the readers💩.

I really can't watch the back part. It's completely different from the front part. I can only say that if you want to watch it, proceed with caution.

Personally, I think the pace can be slowed down a bit. It would be a bit too rigid to fill in the gaps right after laying the groundwork. I feel like it could add some daily life. However, the author couldn't handle shaping the protagonist like this and then adding an emotional line (although I really want to see the emotional line 😥). Moreover, the protagonist's strength is increasing at a rate that makes me worried that the combat power setting will collapse in the later stage, or that it will completely deviate from urban fantasy to immortality or prehistoric times. Isn't this a bit abstract 🤔

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At present, the author has more than 200 books, and I will write a short book review. First, let me introduce myself - full subscription plus monthly pass, so I have read this book seriously, so I have some say. Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. As a similar book to the Demon Suppression Museum, it is commendable that its combat power has not collapsed. 2. It can be seen that the author has the idea of ​​​​taking his own way. 3. There is a clear style, and there is no inconsistency in the world view or character image. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. It is obvious that the author wants to reflect the mystery of the protagonist's background, but it is too much. Too much text focuses on "mystery". Once or twice is fine, but more is a bit uncomfortable. At the end, it gives people the impression that the author understands a little, and the protagonist also understands a little, but the reader feels that he is in the fog and understands nothing, as if he is as pale and powerless as "what he knows". 2. The writing style is a bit novice. To put it figuratively speaking, the text is straight forward without much change. It will be obviously refreshing at the beginning, but it will become boring later. In general, the author's articles have surpassed many of his peers. Although there are still shortcomings, the author's great efforts can also be seen. Although I can't continue to travel with you, before I leave, I would like to sincerely wish the author to reach a higher level.

The unknown woman invites the protagonist to dinner, but the protagonist refuses, and then Li Yu "looks strange, why refuse, looks like a fool, sighs softly" four times. This chapter says "A straight man of steel, single based on his strength, I'm afraid you won't be able to find him, this kid is hopeless" Fourth Company. I wonder if a woman is trying to be courteous, do I have to agree? The protagonist somehow managed to win the top prize, but is he afraid of being single? Is it 100% acceptable for male friends to find women for dinner? The world of boiling sheep makes me, a proud man, very unhappy 🤔

Whenever you meet a woman, she must be a beauty. I wonder if you writers can't write novels without women?

I paid two coins specifically for this book. New readers should pay attention when reading this book. Chapter 10 starts with the plot. It has a hard twist. He takes responsibility for no reason and his mother's heart bursts. The author also famously said that it's okay if he gets into trouble. Attention, those who have Shennong's constitution, you can give it a try and withdraw first.

Drawing cats cannot be compared to dogs. I want to follow the style of a museum, but I don't have that level. It's really a failure.

I always feel bad that this type of book has a female protagonist.

It's interesting, very interesting. It doesn't matter whether you have a harem or not. Personally, I suggest that you don't be too much of a stud. You can't just be a beauty. If there are too many characters, it will be difficult to flesh out the character. There is no arc. If you are simply obscene, it is more interesting to watch the H-story. There are often ancient stories in the plot. When people appear, it is better to be more cautious in dialogue and character, otherwise it is easy to cause drama. Lao Zhu writes well, and you can tell by looking at his imperial edicts. He speaks plainly, curses, has a bad temper, and shouts and kills at every turn, but he attaches great importance to farmers Write well, hold on, come on! ! !

Hmm... If you say I'm short, there's no need to leave a message. I know I'm short. In addition, the update will be much better after it is put on the shelves.

Just feed you the ten-point coin, I rely on this early in the morning, why do you give me Seoli for daily poison induction? I originally thought that my poison resistance was high enough, but after seeing it, I still have to go back to the female channel to practice. I am really not as good as the author's loyal readers. Chapter 17 is my 🙏🙏 limit.

The first half is a masterpiece, and the second half is 💩. When the moon comes back, it feels like everyone and their souls have been taken away! Except for the names, it feels like two novels. After reading more than 200 chapters, I almost vomited. It felt like I was reading another novel entirely. Combat strength plummeted. The plot line is also completely messed up. The Eighteenth Son is gone, the Panlong Pei, a bunch of treasures are not used, and he will fight with Wuzhi Qi to death. When you encounter a ghost, where is your Heavenly Master's Thunder Method? It doesn't matter to you whether they have dragon-slaying veins or not, there are many of them anyway! In the first three hundred chapters, why did you go to the moon to lie on Kunlun and go to the ancient tomb? Ho, bah! This crappy book won't make it onto my reading list. Not worthy!

The previous writing is really good and interesting. The characterization and relationships are all very comfortable. Since the revival of the spiritual energy, the return of the moon, and the apprenticeship of Xunzi, the writing style has become even if it is broken, even the writing style of Tomato can't stand it. I hope you will stop your losses in time.

First, I feel that none of the women in the author's works are normal, and it would be better not to have them at all. Second, the protagonist held an expo, and then his father stopped all his cards, as well as all the channels for borrowing money in his circle. It was outrageous to talk about experience... Lao Wang gave Xiao Wang more than just a small goal to train. It is recommended that the author write a small copy of the obsession item and write less things that he does not understand but has something to do with reality. It is easy to make nonsense.

There is a substitution. You don't need to read it later. The person who replaced it just wrote it without even looking at it.

This author can be blocked. Starting from August 21, 2023, the front and back were separated. The subsequent writing was extremely poor, and all the previous settings were discarded. There is no need to read this author's new book or this one. Just block this author directly.

Start high and go low, the beginning is very good, but in Chapter 18, the female drama starts to be added, and you can almost guess the plot later, which is quite vulgar. I followed the rules of the antique industry in everything, not wanting to be exposed, and all money and goods were cleared. Chapter 18 was too abrupt. Let's not talk about the fact that the protagonist suddenly turned into a super rich second generation. On the premise that the money and goods were cleared in the previous article, this woman happened to come to teach as a substitute. She also openly pointed out the protagonist's purchase of antiques in class. No, she ordered it to be given to him. The protagonist didn't have any big reaction? ! The plot of Good Guys is a three-vulgar idol drama. Later on, it happened that the two mothers happened to be customers of a beauty salon. They happened to be getting beauty treatments together at that moment. The two mothers happened to be anxious to get their grandson married. They were brought together in such a vulgar way. The protagonist is 18 and the female graduate student is at least 22. The author is deliberately disgusting. Most of the people who subscribed to this book did so to write reviews.

It opens falsely high and goes low all the way. It is suitable for people who are not experienced in the world.

Before becoming a disciple, the protagonist was calm and calm, but after becoming a disciple, the protagonist became panicked. He would be horrified when he saw a scene, and his fighting power would collapse. As the book friend said, the relationship between the characters was blurred and it was hard to watch.

The person has been replaced a long time ago. Didn't you notice that the author didn't speak? The group has been deleted, I hope everyone can see it and don't step on it.

You don't need to read Xunzi anymore, it's disgusting

Newcomers avoid pitfalls, they are extremely toxic, and the character's personality is completely separated in the early and late stages. 90% Of it was written by a different person.

Well, it feels quite similar to the Demon Suppression Museum to me.

The writing is pretty good, both the setting and the worldview are somewhat conscious. But... I would like to give you a suggestion: don't change your character... One second, Li Yu is cold and cold except for archeology, and the next second he is curious about the straight male protagonist on the plane. One second, the protagonist is written as a rich second generation who casually takes out five million in pocket money. The next second, he is given a sports car like he wants to be with a rich woman...

Look no further. I haven't read half of it, and the preface doesn't match the postscript. Forget about changing people, don't even read what has been written before. Just writing blindly.

How disgusting, after the moon comes back

Halfway through writing, I changed people, but luckily I didn't order all of them.