Spiritual Master's Manual

I hope no iron-eating beast appears. This thing really makes me vomit when I see it. Eight out of ten books have this thing.

After reading a few chapters, I felt the protagonist was a bit greasy.

I've been having trouble keeping up with my nutrition lately, so I'll just do the second round on the first floor until I die.

I don't have much money, so I'll just do it on the first floor until I die.

I hope everyone can follow this appropriate pattern: Name: Attributes: (Order, Chaos, Instigation, Element, Pale, Tranquility, Knowledge, Shadow, Darkin, etc., The rest of the attributes will be announced later) Racial Potential: (Safety Level, Negative Level, Restricted Level, Danger Level, Disaster Level, etc., The level classification will be announced later) Racial Skills: Strength: Introduction:

You can't develop copyrights by writing fan fiction, but you can make a lot of money by writing original works, but this means losing money.

I have always felt that in animal control novels, animal pets should be powerful and majestic and cute. You told me that a pet cat can kill a Siberian tiger. Do you believe it? To use an inappropriate metaphor, this is a bit like eating a peach and being more handsome than Peng Yuyan, which is an aesthetic deformity.

After reading dozens of chapters, do you think the financial system has collapsed? The protagonist goes to the edge of a knife to lick blood and exchange his life for money, just a few thousand dollars? Why doesn't the protagonist run away from Didi?

I would like to read everyone's evaluation of this new book. I hope it will be objective and specific. Thank you.

The first one is the cutest~

Good-looking means really good-looking, short means really short

I just went to the "Qingsuan Liuxiang" next door, the author of "Pokémon Master", and I saw that he, like you, started out as a Pokemon fan. Although he has been writing similar ones, he has now stepped out of the fandom. Not only is he original, but he has also succeeded in original creation. Now he has created his second book, still writing the "beast control" type. He has gone his own way, and what about you? You created something, and you were killed directly. The first step was over. You died before your master was born. Your heart is as high as the sky and your life is as thin as paper. Remember to go next door and have a look when you have time. I'm not asking you to read other people's novels, but I'm asking you to read other people's data. Got it! So that you know what despair is

I just want to say something and advise the author. In fact, Jinmu, I really think that you should stay in the fandom. You are very different from others. That is, the fanfics you write are really good-looking and very popular. It can be said that your fanfics have a certain status in the entire starting point of light novels, similar to Yu Wangzhi, you want to break away from the fan circle, but you are self-defeating and become the second clear spring, not as good as him, and even do not have much popularity in many beast control articles. I am not knocking you, but this is the fact. Your fans can dominate the list, but what about this? This attempt was definitely a failure, but maybe that's how you are. After you finished writing your first Pokémon book, you switched to Naruto not long after. Naruto didn't write too well, so you returned to Pokémon. I hope you'll come back after the end of this book. There are many fans who like the fanfics you wrote are waiting for you.

Le, why did I write about Pokémon and all the original beasts?

I haven't read the back yet, but I feel that the current Yuju-ryu novels are too gentle. Fortunately, it was a genre that favored life-style and warmth, but since the unscientific book became popular, the TM ones seemed to be limited.

Why do so many authors successfully write a Pokémon fanfic and then immediately start a self-created Pokémon novel? I want to ask you, do you have the ability? Do you have the money? It is difficult to describe the appearance of the elf in the self-created elf literature using words. You need to find someone to draw it so that readers can know what it looks like to have a better sense of reality. And you can write Pokémon fan fiction. The success is not because of how good your writing is, but because of the popularity of Pokémon and your not-so-bad writing. Basically, you can become popular. Then the next step is to start writing your own creations. Nine out of 10 will fail. Who gave you the courage to Pokémon? It's not that you can't create your own. At least you have to do all the various things to set up the elves' habits and world view, and even draw pictures, in order to write a good self-made elf novel. And those readers who think that changing the world and changing the name of the elf is like a cat or a dog, it is difficult for readers to imagine what the elf looks like. Those who are popular basically rely on fans. Like the author of the Elf Master, his new book is all supported by fans and novice readers. After all, there is basically no difference between the book circle and the rice circle. A good book may not be popular, but a bad book will definitely be popular as long as it has fans. Don't look at the quality of the book, just look at the author's name.

Is the end of the Pokémon novel all about creating your own monsters?

This book could have been successful, but the author gave up

Why don't you write this book? I don't think The Spiritual Master is as good as this one.

If I don't write that I want to give up, can I make a statement? . I've been waiting for a really long time

How to say it! The writing is quite good, but I couldn't stand it after seeing the second spirit beast! Let me talk about what I think is good first. It can be seen that it has borrowed some things from Lord of Mysteries. It feels good. The setting is good, there are losses and gains, and it is real! Easily obtained power must have its hidden dangers! The tools are also interesting! The emotional drama is also quite full! Everyone has their own personality, and the supporting roles are well described! Let's talk about the bad points: it grows too fast, the time is too short, too many things happen, there are too many loopholes, things are too coincidental, and the characters are too stupid! The first is the setting. There are a lot of monsters outside, and there are troops stationed in the third-level city. They have to be cautiously defended every month. As a result, a large number of rich people don't have the power to protect themselves? Do the children of rich people keep spiritual animals as pets? I am also drunk with this setting! What kind of organization is Serenity? What are the main responsibilities? What are the benefits? You don't know anything, but when you ask someone, they say it's confidential, so you join? So careless? It turns out that many rich people know, what kind of secret are you keeping? I just made a contract with a cat and went on a mission, acting very smart and matching wits with the murderer. First of all, there is the issue of the security team. As an organization similar to the police station, it is dispensable in the plot. The country's own processing agency feels like it is washed away after the fact! Even handling the case was lost to a rookie who had just signed a contract! He didn't even participate in the battle! If there is no spiritual beast, then there is no gun? The author's description of the battle scenes is average. Why do you say that there are many against one? Newbie, just contracted, previously studied history, good at deciphering words! There are a lot of things that can be unearthed in this matter, including the black market, ancient literature, missing persons, the purpose behind it, and what exactly is the situation with the red blood thread? There seems to be a murderer, but in reality it is all a mystery. Is the protagonist's intelligence in arrears? Then came the beast tide. Five people stopped the beast tide? The fight is extremely difficult, where is the support? Where are the defenses? Where is the backup force? It's like a joke, the captain is missing, the deacon is late, and there is nothing. Five people are defending the entire west side. Is this the city or the alley in the west side of my house? There are many other things that will happen later, so I won't go into details one by one. It is worth mentioning that with so many things happening, the middle and upper levels of the organization did not respond at all. The whole background was just adding settings and plots as needed! The kingdom didn't respond at all! It only took two months for the protagonist to gain strength, knowledge, and connections. He has done a lot of things, and the levels involved are still high! The main theme is wandering on the edge of life and death! There are many coincidences. I just stopped watching the second spirit beast in the contract. The first spirit beast also said that it was an equal contract. The second spirit beast felt forced and was no longer a human being! Overall it's good, but not for me!

This book is such a pity. Instead of writing the following fanfic, I might as well rewrite this one.

As the author, you can read Tomato's Pokémon Masters. I feel like your Dark and that one are the only two masterpieces. Pokémon writing is basically for love and does not make money. However, if you write well, it will attract a large audience, and you can also transform into other books. I hope you can pick it up and want to read good books.

I'm back. Keep writing. If you don't want to write, you can just make a statement. I just found out today that you have opened a new book.

I saw in his Wood Cat Keeper that the new book was about the world of elves

The hard thing is that a book is so heart-warming! I've been waiting for you to be healthy again!

The writing is actually very good. Please go on more

I only read this one of the novels you wrote, but you ended up failing it

Damn it, you still haven't corrected the typos?

After reading ten chapters, I don't quite understand the plot… I've been having a bunch of awkward and childish conversations with that broken cat.