Yuzhu Xianchao: I Can Design Evolutionary Forms

Even if the protagonist has no partner and cannot be favored, the protagonist's father can still be favored.

Put your pen and ink on the important characters Write more about beast control

First of all, the author is definitely not a newbie, and novices cannot write these things. However, although this book is new wine in an old bottle, it currently seems that it is not a simple homogeneous, formulaic set of beast control and evolution. It has its own set of things. At least so far, its world view has not been fully developed. Then there are the biggest features of this book: delicate emotions, rich details, well-drawn characters, and good writing, but the price is slow heat, which is often called water, and the slight awkwardness and literary youth brought about by slow heat. I highly recommend it to readers who can adapt to this slow pace, have enough time to appreciate the novel, and like the beast-style novels. It is definitely a masterpiece in this genre. At the same time, I would also like to say a few words to readers who like to read purely refreshing novels. As we all know, most of the fun points of the beast-style novels are in evolution, but this book is slow to gain popularity. The characteristics of it lead to the evolutionary cool point that it has been preparing for a long time but has not been able to wait for. It has even been pulled several times in the middle, which will greatly wear down the patience. At the same time, the big cool point that can be expected in this book, the first evolution of beast control and the resulting ascension of chickens and dogs, is after forty chapters, and the chapters of this book itself are better than other chapters. The book is longer, which means that under normal circumstances, it is equivalent to reading sixty or seventy chapters of other books before you get the first big hit. Because of the delicate enough characteristics of this book, the depressing and relatively dull character interactions in life before that will occupy a relatively large space. Although there are some small fun spots mixed in, to be honest Words are better than nothing, which is enough to show that it is not a mainstream way of writing cool articles, so it may not be suitable for readers who only read cool articles. If these readers want to get into the trap, I suggest waiting for a few days, at least until the first cool point is finished. At this time, you can read the first cool point in one go, and then judge whether it suits your taste. But in any case, I recognize the potential and level of this book, and I sincerely recommend everyone to try reading it. If you can accept this writing style, then it is a rare masterpiece.

The author is a very literary person. People who have read his books will probably not forget it. This is the first time I have seen such a literary person.

The theme of the entire route outline is good, but the content is a bit watered down. There are too many literary and youth things written, and the initial writing is too depressing (the protagonist is too miserable). After it is released, the pace is okay. You can subscribe to take a look. If you want a monthly pass, you can still check out the rest of the writing.

I ordered dozens of chapters, and it felt like watching a live broadcast to deliver goods. Family members, please support me. There are young and old at home. The children need money and are crying for food. My father was injured and his waist can no longer function... Ugh... Ugh. My brother's back is also hunched. He cannot afford to marry a wife. It is too difficult. I have to be strong for this family and my family.

I was so pissed off. I really thought I would find another good book on Beast Control, but it turned out that I couldn't wait to write Lao Hei's gratitude and my classmates' help on every page. Even the senior Fengque was finalizing the idea of ​​finding food for him. How many times did you write this? Is it necessary to write gratitude in every chapter? Who should be educated? How many times has Xiaoxuan appeared recently? This is a beast-control article, not your gratitude article. Who can show you so many psychological activities every day? The things about the master and the master of the beast that I just wrote in the first few chapters are brought out again after a few chapters, and new insights emerge. Is it interesting?

It seems to be a way to control beasts, but in fact it is all about human nature and sophistication. Four families control the path of transformation. What other ways do people here have to advance or counterattack? It is all about human nature and sophistication 😅

The setting of Shuangwen is the same as that of literary youth. Looking at this trend, do you want to make a revolution? It's obviously a cool article, but it contains some personal stuff 😒

Everyone wants to see beast control, skills, combat, materials, promotions, and adventures. In the future, these sensational things can be interspersed in the text, instead of opening several chapters to fill in the water.

He's cool and young, if you can accept these two points, it's still pretty cool.

Let's talk about the advantages first. The author's setting and story are very good. I like the handling of various characters very much. The slowness is not a problem but it is real and immersive. But can the author restrain his literary desire to express himself? The description of the characters' emotions and psychological activities is too difficult to read, so cutting off two-thirds is just right. I think that when Mao Ni wrote a book before, he often apologized to readers, saying that he wrote too many hypocritical literary plots. I can understand that the author may feel happy writing this, but it is really uncomfortable to read.

It's enough to use the hydrology routine once or twice. I have even recognized your previous account... Anyone who has read it should know that I used to write about martial arts, and then I updated it once a day and then stopped inexplicably. I like to add what I feel are human feelings and sophistication to the plot, and the words go back and forth. The credibility score is negative, and the writing style makes me angry.

Bengbu is stuck, it is sensationalized over and over again, the number of words is low, and what has been said is said over and over again. Even the author's characteristics must be judged by the readers' opinions. If the author continues like this, he will lose readers just like the goblin next door who relies heavily on him. Moreover, the author of this book is more watery than that goblin, and his facial expressions are serious.

It was the first time I saw such a young Shui Wen at Qidian. I almost thought I was watching the wrong channel. I skipped and watched without missing any of the plot.

The author writes very well. There is true feeling between the lines in the article, and the writing is very smooth. It can be seen that he has injected emotion into it. Although it's good to have feelings, it can also lead to some places being written in more detail, and then seem to be verbose. Just like writing a diary, it's easy to write a lot once you get emotional, but the reader is not you, so you can't empathize with your feelings every day. It seems like you are verbose. I have told the story of Lao Niu to others three or four times, but it seems that the whole story is really confusing. Although I really hope you can finish writing this book, it is difficult to stabilize a good level after such writing method is put on the shelf.

At first glance, it seems that he is an experienced writer from Qidian. In the beginning, he pressed the protagonist into the soil, pressing hard, the bankrupt family, the humiliated landlord, and the cold-blooded reality.

Wen Qing, Hypocrisy, Water If all are changed, the best food and grass

It's too slow. Some people think it's a literary thing, and some people think it's life. So this book is not suitable for people who think it's a literary thing. It's suitable for people who want to read it after reading it. But in this case, the performance of this book will fall a lot, so the author should consider how to balance it.

All that comes and goes is that I owe a favor and I have to pay it back No big deal I owe a favor and I have to pay it back This feeling is very heavy and I must pay it back Trick people in and kill them

Author, there is something wrong with the title of your book. It looks like a fast-paced Internet article and it attracts this kind of readers. No wonder it is disliked by people for being a literary youth. In fact, judging from the slow-paced article, there is nothing wrong with it.

It's true that emotion is king You write the important plot beautifully, and it reads like drinking fine wine How can a person only drink wine three meals a day without drinking water? Push some plot, even if it is dry My emotions are overdrawn, and the threshold is constantly rising It only rises but does not fall It is very high, but it falls far behind.

Water is very heavy and literary youth is not good. If you can accept these two points, it's okay.

"It's not a, it's not b, it's c", a bunch of analysis and then writing "Keep this in mind first", "xxxxx is a little more, just a little, but xxxxx", "At this moment, xxx understands, he really understands" and a bunch of complicated and meaningless modifiers

The old lady's foot wrap is smelly and long! I wrote about the same mentality and emotions several times! Niu's memories, I experienced the same things and wrote them again and again! ! The writer dragged out the plot again and again! I didn't think about the plot below, so I just stopped and polished it slowly! Don't spend the whole day messing around with your account books, your inner feelings, and all these confusing chapters! ! !

No, what do you count every day? How come you don't count the readers? Can you really read it if you are so stupid?

I read many chapters. Why do the main characters, supporting characters and passers-by in the plot feel to me like they are all carved from the same mold? Everyone is calculating an account in their mind, explaining things to you with open and closed mouths, and emphasizing suffering over and over again.

I don't have the strength to write such a flavorful novel.

After reading the latest chapter, it's exactly the same It seems I haven't read anything yet Wasting my starting point coins Help the author return the favor and settle his account

The setting of this book is quite good, but the author has a bad habit of sometimes using too much sensationalism, which has backfired.