Marvel Spider-Man: Starting from a Parallel Universe

It feels like the main world is just ordinary. For many astronomical protagonists, as soon as they become powerful, a large group of demons and ghosts pop up in the main world to cause trouble. There is no book that does not collapse in the middle and late stages. Those authors simply cannot control the rhythm. I have seen too many books like this. I would like to give the author a suggestion. Treat the main world as a leisure resort for the protagonist. It is originally Zhutianwen. There are a lot of worlds waiting for the protagonist to write about super powers. There is no need to bury yourself in the main world. Big holes that you may not be able to fill in the future.

Gwen Spider-Man, the most perfect one.

The author, Spider-Gwen only started to be Spider-Woman after the death of Lizard Peter Parker, just like Peter Parker started to be Spider-Man after the death of Uncle Ben, otherwise Spider-Gwen would not be able to go to the Black Spider's universe as a senior. This is mentioned in "Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse", And if you want to fine-tune it, why not set the age of Little Black Spider to be 16 years old and a freshman in high school, and Spider-Gwen to be 18 years old and a junior in high school, so that they can meet in the same school as Little Black Spider. In that case, you only need to change three years to three months. Spider-Gwen can graduate from high school and be found by the protagonist, and then continue the plot.

I am really speechless about the post. The author, you can actually be silenced by someone changing the concept in the post. Let me educate everyone here. Some heroes don't kill criminals not because they are afraid of becoming murderers and being imprisoned, but because they are kind-hearted and don't want to kill. However, it is absolutely fine to kill criminals. As long as the criminal carries a weapon to carry out the crime, the hero can kill him at will. The right of self-defense is granted by the law. Even an ordinary civilian can kill him. We all like to talk about Spider-Man so much, let's take a look at the reactions of all parties after Zhang Parker kills criminals in the comics. In Ultimate Spider-Man, Zhang Parker always kills criminals, and Zhang Parker who kills criminals makes the people applaud. In the fifth episode, after a criminal with a gun was killed by Zhang Parker, the media praised him. The surrounding police also greeted Zhang Parker with a smile, and even the surrounding civilians asked Zhang Parker to shoot him. It would not be illegal to see a hero killing someone who is committing a crime, and no one would even regard him as a murderer. Let's take a look at the reaction of the Avengers, because Zhang Parker has been killing criminals. The reaction of the Avengers after seeing this was to take Zhang Parker away and check to see if he was a Skrull pretending to be a Skrull. When he found out that he was not, he immediately released him. Black Widow also said that Zhang Parker will come to her to talk to her when he encounters troubles in the future. Yes, you read that right. The Avengers don't care at all whether Spider-Man kills people. They only care about whether Spider-Man is fake. So after a hero kills a criminal, he becomes a murderer. This is pure legal nonsense.

How about these suits?

Gwen Spider

There is a problem with the pace of this book. I wanted to say it several times, but I forgot about it when I was busy Let's put it this way, most of the plot settings, whether it is the original plot setting or the plot setting of this book, are almost paragraph after paragraph, whether it is narration or character dialogue, it is as if the focus is on telling the plot and setting. I wish the protagonist was watching the drama and talking about it. The progress of the plot for half of the story requires both the plot changes of the original work under the influence of the protagonist, and the author's own original plot changes, not to mention the fights and battle analysis that the superheroes themselves have to bring. Two chapters a day, most of which are about the plot and setting of the original work. It is my own thing and the story to be told. In the extremely compressed situation, the battle scenes seem to be just a taste of it. I haven't finished it yet. Is there anyone who says it is superficial? It seems that I am writing a detailed outline, or is the writing method of the book itself just about the setting? I saw that the comment area is talking about some comic plots, but few people are talking about this book. To me, the rhythm and proportion are really wrong. In my opinion, we don't have to worry about setting, plot advancement, fighting, and even emotional plots. We need to write more and expand more. I feel that there is a lot that could have been written about these movies, but they always neglected to mention the past, expand it, and make the plot fuller. I just feel that just looking at the plot settings of the original work, the progress of the story is not enough.

Marvel's two favorite beauties

The first one, Spider-Woman, Gwen Stacy, from the Marvel-65 universe Earth is one of the protagonist's girlfriends The second one, Spider-Man, Peter Parker, comes from the Marvel-92131 universe Earth is the 94 version of the cartoon Spider-Man is one of the protagonist's friends The third one, Spider-Man, Miles Morales, comes from the Marvel-1610 universe Earth is one of Spider-Man's friends in the Spider-Man animated movie Parallel Universe The fourth one, Shadow Spider-Man, Peter Parker, comes from the Marvel-90214 universe. The Earth is Spider-Man in the 1930s and is one of the protagonist's friends The fifth one, Spider-Girl, Penny Parker, comes from the Marvel-14512 universe. The Earth is one of the genius girl's best friends The sixth one, Ultimate Spider-Man, Peter Parker, comes from the Marvel-12403 universe. The Earth is a S. H. I. E. L. D. Agent and one of the protagonist's friends

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