After Achieving Financial Freedom, I Became Devoted

I still feel that the author's writing skills are definitely good, but the overall writing style is a bit weird, and it's not very enjoyable to read. Maybe it's just not refreshing enough. I feel that the author will change his writing style when writing the next book, and it will definitely be more attractive.

Wow, it's so uncomfortable to read. Does it feel like a campus romance novel written by an urban tycoon? I read more than 500 chapters, but I didn't see a single happy point. They were all about daily love affairs with girls. Lots of nonsense. The happy points about career were skipped directly. The happy points about life were skipped. The cool points brought by the cheating system were not there. They were all inner monologues and narrations about love. The personal style is so strong that you can describe a female supporting role in 30 chapters for dating. If you use too many words, it will make people feel confused and confused. Do you want readers to read it with the attitude of reading and comprehension when reading a great article? The start is really amazing, but it's a pity that it starts high and goes low. The writing is also good, but it makes people more and more uncomfortable. I'm really going to vomit blood.

The writing is good and the setting is good, but it doesn't feel like a cool novel. It's a bit literary and youthful, and the plot is a bit messy.

The college entrance examination of Chapter 140 is over, and the results of Chapter 320 are out. It's not a big problem to write 8000 chapters in such a simple way.

It's so procrastinating. A date with the heroine An Ruo actually took 15 chapters. The 300-chapter storyline only progressed for two or three months. The plot advances too slowly. If you write 2,000 chapters this way, it won't even end.

In the process of writing about one woman, the other women all disappeared, and even their names did not appear in dozens of chapters. The plot was written in such detail. I only reached chapter 140 before the plot progressed a little. I feel like I could write this book in 10 million words.

It doesn't feel smooth, and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch.

After reading the free chapter, I was a little confused. What is this talking about? What's even more amazing is that I can't remember the previous part after reading it!

To be honest, it really annoys you writers who think you are self-motivated. One person said it and two people said it. So many people think there is something wrong with you. Do you still think there is nothing wrong with you?

The writing is very strange, hard to describe in one sentence😕