True Thousand-Armed Buddha: Pacifying the Age of Chaos from Konoha

The opening was poorly worded. As the last male descendant of the Senju clan, he was exempt from missions. In the anime, he insisted on going to the battlefield and died. Consider the Hyuga main family; they don't need to go to war unless it's a matter of life and death—it's an unwritten rule of the bloodline families. Besides, doing so would only anger Tsunade; nobody's a fool.

The beginning was well written, but there was a small flaw. I think people who understand the plot wouldn't believe that pretending to be a useless person could escape persecution from the higher-ups in Naruto.

The first few chapters were really awful. Nawaki, as one of the few remaining members of the first and second generations of the family, was forced into this state. It's a bit mindless to go for the sake of the protagonist's suffering and the "trash-to-hero" trope...

The beginning of the story was really good. I thought the protagonist would defect immediately after awakening Wood Release, but he ended up returning to Konoha and scheming against the Konoha F4. So the later plot was just okay... I've noticed that in Naruto novels, whether the protagonist transmigrates into a powerful clan or a commoner, they always seem to clash with the Konoha F4.

Don't those who write Naruto conspiracy theories understand one fact? The Third Hokage wanted to retire eight hundred years ago, okay?

After reading only two chapters, this premise is really hard to believe. Tsunade isn't dead yet, and with the protagonist, Kyouka, already dead, who in Konoha would dare force him to do a mission? This Hokage order could easily demoralize the entire village.

The author's timeline is problematic. At this point, Minato is only 12 years old, Kushina hasn't become a Jinchūriki yet, and Mito is still alive. If this is the starting point, much of what the author wrote becomes illogical. Furthermore, Kushina had already been kidnapped at age 12, so she should have liked Minato, yet the story still portrays her as thinking he's effeminate.

Other writers depict ordinary ninjas being persecuted by Danzo and abandoned by Hiruzen. You write about Nawaki Senju and treat him the same way, even worse. He doesn't enjoy any advantages, but suffers countless disadvantages. Even Sasuke was able to grow up normally in Konoha. The Senju clan isn't extinct, and Tsunade, Orochimaru, and even Jiraiya are Nawaki's supporters.

I know why this book didn't do well. It started with the same old "crushing the mainstream" trope. No matter how exciting the rest of the book is, it's useless if it's just a ten-year-old opening.

I think it's normal for him to take Tsunade in; after all, they're a bloodline family, and intermarriage within the clan is common. 😃