Hogwarts Night Watch

(May be suspected of spoilers, read with caution!!!) I am very happy to see the new non-human protagonist HP fan! Said earlier: Very well written, read it quickly! (The last book I gave a long review was Hogwarts: Chasing the Storm, but that book was written crookedly and seriously watered down. I am still waiting to see if the author plans to continue writing.) Because it is only Chapter 95, the plot development is not long after entering Hogwarts, so it is not very easy to see the subsequent development. Although the number of words in the last chapter is not that many, it is good to keep it updated twice a day. Stay steady. The author's writing style is quite good, and it reads smoothly. There are no typos, and his writing power is enough to control the worldview. So there are only two points I want to discuss or remind, one is the rhythm issue and the other is the setting issue. Let's talk about rhythm first. As a werewolf, the protagonist is not a super-standard magical creature, and his special features other than being able to control himself have not yet been shown, but this also means that it is difficult for the plot to go astray. The classic werewolf and vampire feud, friends turning against each other, a bit of Underworld, and the vampire clan is more or less born out of WoD. What I want to say is that Underworld and Dark World are both relatively mature and classic world views, which are not very consistent with HP. I don't know how much of the author's inspiration comes from classics, but I can see the author's detailed description of the vampire meeting, so I think the author is very careful in setting up vampires. The problem is that the author is familiar with his vampire setting, but the readers are not. My feeling after reading it so far is that the author assumes that we have seen Harry Potter. The description of the wizarding world as the protagonist is relatively brief and related to the original work, but the introduction of vampires accounts for a larger proportion. As a work from a non-human perspective, it is inevitable to describe the society of dark creatures, but I hope that this kind of narrative can have the same number of words as the work, slowly unfolding the magnificent picture, rather than trying to show the entire society of Vampire Day through a banquet or a trial. The banquet chapter gave me the feeling that I was watching Underworld while running a WoD group, and a character from Seraph of the End (Young Elder) was mixed into it. When I looked at the title, hey, it turned out to be Harry Potter. In other words, there are too many elements mixed in at the same time, or because there is too much information, people cannot feel the unique magical atmosphere of Harry Potter, but fall into a rabbit hole. So I think there is a little problem with the rhythm of the opening chapter. You are too eager to throw out the setting, which makes the length of the chapter a little unreasonable, but it doesn't hurt, it's just a small reminder. In contrast, the setting of the protagonist werewolf is very handsome, and the setting of the younger sister is also very stunning and even romantic to me personally. The protagonist's behavior and logic are quite excellent and reasonable in my opinion. The changes his appearance brings to the plot are also logical, and even give people a sense of pleasure like watching a movie and discovering easter eggs. High emotional intelligence, thirst for knowledge, courage, insight, and a mysterious family background. Except for the lack of magic power, I would like to call him the perfect protagonist. I don't know how you want to solve the problem of magic power, or whether you want to solve it. If the protagonist never has magic power, it will be a poisonous point for some people, and the method of obtaining magic power is too bizarre, which will also be a poisonous point. For now, it is indeed very innovative to see Hogwarts from the perspective of a squib, and the professors' reactions have their own characteristics. However, if things continue like this, some Charms and Transfiguration classes will not seem very engaging if they are completely turned into theoretical research. I hope the author has already written the outline (laughs). By the way, speaking for myself, I would like the protagonist to have more inhuman characteristics. After all, the gimmick is not to be a human being, but the transformation seems to have no effect. Strong strength and a keen sense of smell are both good entry points, so please continue to maintain them. Regarding the vampire setting, I still say the same thing. I hope that the style of painting should be as consistent as possible with the HP world. As for the current personal feeling, it still feels a little bit fragmented. Another thing is, I don't know whether the author wants to write about a harem or a single female protagonist. I can accept it myself. But at present, I always feel that there is a slight suspicion of stock speculation or ambiguity. This may also dissuade some readers. It depends on how the author develops next. If you want to write a love line, please be neat and not too ambiguous or bloody. Speaking of other things, I just don't know if my sister will change into a human later, and what is the way to change into a human. I hope it is more reasonable. A cute and sensible sister is also a bonus. The other settings are the werewolf tribe and family secrets. I believe the author must have his own ideas. In short, the purpose of writing this review is just to remind you. The only thing I want is for more people to read it and the author to write more, so that I can read more... The author's book is currently ranked in the top ten among the HP fans I have read. It's just that it has not been long since I wrote it, and the results have not been reflected yet. Maintaining the current level, I think this book's popularity index will definitely reach tens of thousands, please keep reading... Novels with non-human protagonists are too hard to find... HP novels with non-human protagonists are basically the only survivors at the moment... Don't go astray, don't add water, don't disappear, don't give poison to the end, if you can finish it, you will be my favorite HP fanfic 55555——! (Author, you are the god of HP fandom in the non-human world——! Please fill my brain with more updates and plots and wolves——!) (Insanity) (Crazy) (Rolling) (Crawling) (Look at me, look at me) (Put down your phone and sleep) (Close your eyes)

Yes, the author is really writing about the world of HP, and he is also really writing about Britain at that time. Many details can be seen For example, the details of walking around the streets collecting old goods in exchange for goldfish and small toys, I saw it in an old British movie

This book is really satisfying to read 😍 1. The plot must have a plot: it sticks closely to the original work everywhere, but it definitely doesn't always hang around the trio like other Harry Potter fans (I'm really tired of reading it). This is too difficult to achieve 2 Be creative and creative: This is definitely not the first time I have read a HP fanfic where the protagonist is a Muggle, but it is definitely the first one that combines the three elements of a Muggle protagonist, a vampire, and a werewolf (and it seems that the protagonist obviously wants to be a vampire mixed with a werewolf). It is both fresh and does not go beyond the scope of the original work, great 👍🏻 3 The writing must be well-written: not only are there several descriptions that are particularly beautiful, in this book I can even see the classic reading comprehension questions 😠 in the Chinese language exam, which is simply amazing! This is not the way to write an online article. It feels like a real novice reader. Don't read it 🤭 4. You must have fans: For me, this is the most important point, that is HP's world view! ! ! Reading this book, there are details everywhere telling me that this is the HP world, even if the protagonist is still living in Muggle society! ! ! Come on, author! Can you write more, it's not enough 😫

The text and everything are very good, but it's reached this point and the main character can't use magic, so it's not my cup of tea.

Today is also a day without news from the author. . .

Two HP fan authors on my bookshelf have lost contact. Did they go to Hogwarts?

I feel that there are a bit too many vampire plots, which are not mentioned much in the original work. Even if you want to throw them out, you should do it slowly. Don't throw them out all at once. It feels a bit vague. Everything else is good.

Very realistic, but unattractive. Everyone knows that it is difficult for Muggles to be extraordinary. The setting of turning into a werewolf and still maintaining sanity is no problem. The author is very careful. After all, the protagonist is too bad.

I just read a few chapters and I think it's okay. But in the Harry Potter world, you don't have to be a wizard. Maybe you can go to the Holy See? After all, the original purpose of Hogwarts was to protect ordinary little wizards who were being persecuted. Since the witch eradication movement can be launched and has achieved certain results, it means that there must be other extraordinary forces.

The heroine must not be Hermione... Almost 9 out of ten books are. As soon as I saw that the heroine was Hermione, I immediately gave up.

I really haven't read a fan like this that is a squib but does not have a golden finger. I passed by it three times and saw that someone recommended me to check it out. I feel that the recommendation from many people is reasonable The advantages are: the writing is good, the plot is well arranged, the subject matter is novel and the details are careful and consistent with the original work But the disadvantage is that the protagonist is a squib and does not have a golden finger, so it is difficult to attract readers, especially the gray wizard next door who writes very good descriptions of magic, which makes people I want to read more about the wonderful and ugly story of the struggle of the protagonist without magic The author really wrote this book with great care. As long as the rhythm is maintained, I personally feel that it will become a masterpiece, but the author may have to seize the opportunity to put it on the shelves. After all, it is difficult to stick to readers in the early stage without magic and cheats. It is best to arrange some big scenes and pretentious plots to stick to readers. Otherwise, most online readers are used to fast food literature and should give up after it is released.

I like it very much. Everything is good so far, but I am afraid of being stabbed in the back by some authors' emotional scenes. I want to ask whether it is no cp, single heroine or harem. I don't have a problem with the first two, and if the harem is well written, it's actually no problem, but I always feel that it's a bit strange to include a harem in such a worldview, especially since the original work is considered children's literature (it seems to be?). I hope the author can answer it. In addition, I hope it won't be cut and try not to collapse. I will keep chasing.

This is the first HP fanfic I've read. Chapter 65 hasn't even entered school yet.

It's well written but the plot progress is too slow.

Check in. The author didn't just say that a relative passed away a while ago. He didn't deal with it so quickly. It will take a while. Anyway, if you still like this book, just wait for now. There will always be news later.