Hong Kong Crossover: Starting with Raging Fire

If you really want to make a lot of money, just capture Ding Hai and fleece him every day; you could become the richest man. That's the basic strategy in the original story: the protagonist controls Ding Hai and makes him choose stocks and horse races. 😁😁

Has anyone seen it? (*^ω^*)~(￣▽￣~)~

There's always been a problem with the "Grumbling Major Crimes" case: in a special department like the police force, where risking one's life is paramount, if Master Yip betrays five teammates for a kidnapper, who would be willing to risk their lives for him? If something goes wrong while he's out on duty, will he betray his subordinates again? Such a person would be eliminated by his own people immediately; for him to become a leader is a joke.

Stop bringing up the protagonist's human limits. Constantly pushing the boundaries of human capabilities, and then the human limit becomes being a world-class athlete? That's ridiculous. You should just say his physical abilities have been greatly enhanced. Every time I see something that pushes the limits of human capability, it challenges my urge to abandon the book.

The author doesn't even address the issue of the young master's character, and then there are always chapters about making movies. It's really boring. If you want to write about movies, you should write entertainment stories. Why write about Hong Kong variety shows? You could have just briefly mentioned the movie aspect. I came here for the Hong Kong police and gangster stories.

Others can wreck cinemas, but you can't retaliate? You just know how to react to every move and wait for others to slap you in the face?

This book will be ruined during my trip to Thailand. If you're writing a wish-fulfillment story, don't mix in your own self-righteous sentiments. Isn't it satisfying to just kill everything in your path? Why insist on showing some humanitarian concern? This is a village full of scum who sell organs, and you're going to let them go? And even show them concern?

( ﹡ˆOˆ﹡ ) Surrender, Ah Zu. The readers outside all call him Jackie Chan.

This was written way too hastily! It's faster than leveling up in a game and changing maps. It's just putting several movies together, copying the plot, and then starting the next movie. The business warfare was like a daily log, without any climax. It was a turn-based system where someone would attack once, you would spend money to retaliate once, and then you would wait for someone else to attack you again.

I suggest avoiding writing about Black Mask, The Lantern, or My Date with a Vampire; those are too surreal and difficult to handle.