I Pick Up Cards in Detective Conan

The author seems like a novice. In the early chapters, the constant use of psychological descriptions and authorial dialogue wasn't good, as the excessive jumps between ideas fragmented the story. It only improved in the last two chapters. Furthermore, the author needs to strengthen the character development.

I'm reminded of all the scenes where Gin is persecuted: car thefts, bomb planting in his car, people openly mocking him for his white hair from catching undercover agents, and gossiping with other Black Party members about whether he wears a hat because he's bald...

This introduction is absolutely hilarious, it's like something out of a novel! Do we also need to have failure be a constant throughout one's life?

6. This description is too absurd.

Red is guaranteed to win; Black doesn't even have the right to fight Red, as Red is backed by a powerful thug. Who's behind Black? But there's never been a Red. Gin is using someone else to do his dirty work. Is the Distillery's intelligence network more powerful than the Five Great Men's?

I suggest avoiding fanfiction that doesn't feature a female lead and only focuses on stories with other characters. Also, I suggest avoiding romantic subplots, as most fanfiction with female leads doesn't have well-developed romantic relationships.

Ah, that's the taste, it's definitely the taste of Leziren. You can't fool me, you Daoist master. Hey, look, he believed it, he believed it! I'm dying of laughter!

What's your relationship with the newspaper-buying young man?

Clicking on it reveals my sister Bei 🤓🤓

I was just about to check it out when I saw the update date was three days ago… Was it cut? Or is there some other reason for the hiatus?