Naruto: This Uchiha Wants to Return to His Ancestor Otsutsuki

Let me talk about the introduction first (the author does not need to pay attention to this small comment). "Limited pupil power" is a secondary setting created by a genius author, and then accepted by some authors and readers. The original work, for the settings of the Mangekyō Sharingan, are: ①The cost of using the pupil technique is that the eyesight will decrease and eventually become blind, which means that the more you use it, the blurr your vision will become until you are completely blind. [Reference: Itachi, Madara, Sasuke, Kakashi, they all have performances] ② When using the pupil technique, the eyes will hurt and bleed. [Reference: Sasuke, Itachi, Kakashi, Obito, Shisui and other Mangekyo Sharingan owners all have performances] ③ It will cause a heavy burden on the body, that is, too much refined chakra will cause a certain amount of pressure on the body. [Refer to Itachi, Kakashi, Sasuke] ④ Susanoo is a 'jutsu', and its essence is the materialization of chakra. This requires the intensity of the eye power and the amount of one's own chakra to reach a certain standard before it can be used. [Refer to the formula book, Indra, and Uchiha who have used Susanoo] ⑤ Regular veins can be seen on the surface of the eyeball, which are 'meridians' [Refer to the close-up of Itachi's eyes when using Amaterasu] ⑥Pupillary power = Chakra, or, pupil power' It is "transformed" by Chakra. There is no such thing as "limited pupil power" after it is used up, because its own meridians are all over the body, and the chakra refined in the body will pass through the "meridian system", pass through the "brain", reach the "eyes" and become "pupil power" [Reference: Ka During the meeting between Cassie and the Five Shadows, Danzo used Shisui's eyes to cast his power to influence Mifune. In Ao's white eye vision, Danzo's chakra blue was continuously transported to Shisui's eyes through the meridian system and turned into pupil power green ⑦ What we are talking about is complete The Susanoo body is actually the "Complete body Susanoo", and the "Complete body Susanoo" refers to the "Susanohu" used by Itachi Uchiha in the "War of Brothers" - the third form of Susanoo wearing the Karatengu armor and holding a ten-fist sword and a eight-foot mirror. [Refer to the description in the formula book] ⑧The conditions for using "Complete Form Susanoo" are: ⒈"Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan" ⒉ Eye power trained to its peak ⒊ Huge chakra. Explanation: The Eternal Eye means that the eyes can see far and will not go blind. It is easier to use the pupil technique and the pupil power is more powerful. If you want to meet the condition ⒉, you must first meet the condition ⒈, because the way to exercise the pupil power of the kaleidoscope is to use the pupil technique, and the eyesight of the eyes will decrease when using the pupil technique, and the Eternal Eye perfectly solves this shortcoming, and can use the pupil technique without any scruples to train one's own pupil power until it reaches its peak. Condition ⒊Eternal Eye can also solve part of it, because Eternal Eye means more powerful pupil power, and the rest depends on the training of one's body. [Refer to the formula book and the original plot] ⑨Question: Why can Kakashi use "Complete Form Susanoo"? Answer: Because, Obito Uchiha became the Ten-Tailed Jinchūriki and was the second Sage of Six Paths, possessing the power of six paths. After Obito Uchiha was killed by Kaguya's Ashes, the power of six paths remaining in the space was not Disappeared, with Obito's will still inside, Kakashi was taken by Obito using the power of Six Paths as a medium to give Kakashi the power of the Mangekyō Sharingan. This chakra was the remaining power of Six Paths and was transformed into the eye power for Kakashi's use. This is why Kakashi is able to use the "Complete Body Susanoo": the power of the Six Paths. [Reference to the Fourth Ninja War: The Battle to Seal Kaguya] All the above are from the text described in the original work.

Advice for authors! ! ! Let's talk about the problem of eye opening first. The original book says very clearly that only after receiving love and then losing love will special chakra appear in the brain to stimulate the eyes to change, thus opening the eyes. 1: The current protagonist gives me the feeling that the protagonist cherishes his life very much, which is equivalent to loving himself only. Based on this, the protagonist's anxiety after time travel and the protagonist's panic about the future can be used to open the Sharingan. 2: The protagonist you wrote is an Uchiha with relatively pure blood. Then you wrote about the fright and panic mentality of the protagonist after he went to Uchiha Madara's hometown and was discovered by Bai Zetsu, which can improve his Sharingan again. 3: In the Kingdom of Water, when Danzo sent people to trap and kill the protagonist, the protagonist's anxiety was further deepened. When he was sealed and almost unable to come back, he was able to improve his Sharingan again. 4: In the future, Orochimaru's defection will further stimulate the protagonist's tense nerves. 5: Eye Technique: The truest thought in the heart of a person who cherishes his life is that he does not want to die (for example, Izanagi in the original work. Of course, this ability is a bit strong and can be weakened appropriately. After using it, the eye power will be consumed, or a substitute similar to Uchiha Madara's Tombside Prison will appear instantly to transfer damage.) The second Eye Technique: There is no time traveler who does not envy Obito's divine power or Shisui's other gods. The ability can be set to copy and release. When fighting, you can also obtain information about your opponent in advance during the battle. Of course, this ability must have limitations (for example: you cannot copy the limits of blood stains that you do not have, or you can copy but you do not have the blood stains and cannot release them, but you can understand the information in advance; in Naruto, information is life, and Kakuzu and Hidan are good examples.)

At least open your eyes. Even an ordinary three magatama would be fine. Use illusion to immobilize control. Harvest with shuriken from a distance. The miscellaneous fish glared and flicked their shurikens. Look who. Whoever dies is the image in my mind. This is how time-travelers kill people and laugh and talk with ease. That's what makes it cool.

The first chapter was so speechless. You're a 15-year-old loser who didn't even open your eyes. Not to mention how you slipped out of Konoha, then crossed the border of Konoha and ran to the Land of Iron. Hikaru said that you relied on the transformation technique to not only disguise yourself as Obito but also the Sharingan. Don't you think it's outrageous? Bai Jue can't find it? Why do you think people can collect intelligence? White Zetsu must be able to sense chakra, especially since you not only used the transformation technique to transform into Obito, but also transformed into a Sharingan, and glared at others. Let alone White Zetsu, an ordinary genin can immediately sense that something is wrong with the chakra as long as he has seen the Sharingan of the Uchiha clan. And when Bai Jue stays at home, he will always sense the surroundings. That is, people will find you before you arrive. People find you through chakra, not with eyes. Why do you think you can hide it from Bai Jue? Especially if you have never seen Obito, even if you have seen the anime, but this is reality, can you become exactly like Obito? Then how to disguise chakra? You've never even seen Obito, let alone pretending to be Obito's chakra. You don't even know what Obito's chakra looks like, so how can you disguise it? Xiaobaiwen.

How did you come up with the idea of ​​exchanging ninjutsu with a tailed beast for its chakra?

Madara's body is in the family cemetery? Madara's body was in the hands of Black Zetsu. When was it in the family cemetery?

Damn it, what was written before is pretty good, and then I have been waiting for the opening of the eyes. The Kurama clan said that they were going to open the eyes, and that they might be able to achieve kaleidoscope in one step. Now the latest one said that they want to integrate the genes of kaleidoscope. I can only say that it started well, and then it got more and more... Forget it, let it go

As for fandom, I don't want to see the original female protagonist at all, she might as well be single. There are also some subordinates. The one with good talent is very fake.

It's a bit confusing. As of now, the main character seems to be very strong, but also seems to be very weak. The major events are a bit sloppy, and the emotional scenes between men and women are unclear.

I can't read this book, bye bye

Some of the original heroines written by the author are terrible, but other plots are very good.

In fact, there is no need to use special kaleidoscope pupil techniques. Normal time and space pupil techniques will do. Various other pupil techniques are very awkward and second-rate. To be honest, I hate forcibly creating weird pupil techniques.

Ancestor of Otsutsuki

I can still survive being cut in half. I don't remember Danzo having such strong recovery power. It's better to use Iginaxie.

Original characters are a failure in writing fan fiction

The Otsutsuki gene is the Byakugan! It should be the divine tree gene, right?

Boruto has come out. It's time to change the setting. It's time to phase out the Eye Bloodline era. It's time to get some tattoos or something about wedges. There's no need to grow, just use them to decompress.

The writing is a bit average, and the plot is average.

Is Nikko Naruto real? Collect it first, keep it and then see if you are selling it as dog meat.

Immortal Danzo

Just follow the example of Escape and create an Uchiha or Hinata heroine. Really do it.

Everything else is okay, but the plot is dragging and feels watery.

The writing is okay, I hope it won't be boring. What I saw was too cold.

I feel that the writing is very messy and miscellaneous. It makes my head hurt to read it, so I gave it up.

It's definitely a mess or a eunuch. Supporters, you have finished writing.

Is this volume coming to an end, or is it almost finished?

After reading Chapter 11, I can't find the main plot 😢

Two protagonists with the same name

The author has a poor grasp of details, and it feels like he just started writing after watching some anime.

The more I write, the more boring I become, and it makes me uncomfortable to read.