The Arcanist of Hogwarts

I hope that the protagonist in your novel is really studying magic seriously instead of following a group of children around. I hope that the protagonist is learning knowledge in school instead of playing a game of heroes vs. Villains there.

To be honest, Dumbledore is definitely responsible for half of Voldemort's problems, except for his own reasons. For example, when he was in the orphanage, Dumbledore used magic to light the wardrobe. He used this method to force Voldemort to return those toys, and used the facts to tell him that power is absolute and that he can use violence to solve things instead of guiding him. When he was in the academy later, Dumbledore did not guide him correctly, but had the opposite effect. What did Dumbledore do? He said I will keep a close eye on you. After graduation, he also refused Voldemort to be the Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher. Dumbledore's influence on Voldemort is definitely greater than imagined. I am not whitewashing Voldemort, but Dumbledore did not have any educational effect on Tom becoming Voldemort, or even very helpful.

To be honest, Harry Potter's magicians are closer to warlocks than wizards or wizards. Really, they are completely squandering their talents, exactly the same. Without systematic organization and study, it is just a competition for talent. Although I don't deny that they still have some knowledge, but overall they are more like warlocks.

I hope you don't mess with Sirius and James. I was so angry after reading the original novel that I really wanted to kill them for Lupine and Snape. Lupine was also blind and became buddies with these people and sold it to you. He framed you for murdering a classmate and asked you to die in his place. My blood pressure is high.

Hogwarts cannot lose Hermione, just like the West cannot lose Jerusalem🤫

HP Wizard is actually difficult to explain using a DND-like system, and requires a lot of patches. The first is the spell slot. Although the little wizard does not know difficult spells, he can practice spells for several consecutive lessons; the wizard can use all the spells he has learned. In this way, a HP wizard is similar to an arcanist who can regain mana very quickly. But it cannot be explained that the power of some spells changes with emotions, will, etc. The process of learning spells is just to recite the spells correctly and perform actions → the advanced step is to cast spells silently and without a wand.

To be honest, I don't want to spend money to read a newbie book because it's too easy to read. This book seems to be okay so far. I really don't have any newbie books. Now the author doesn't talk about martial ethics and eunuchs anymore, so he's just opening a new one. I'm speechless.

This is a reflective post. During this period, I have seen many readers who have made suggestions. I would like to thank you all in advance. Most of your suggestions focus on the lack of details and dry reading. There are indeed some such problems. When I was writing the plot for the first grade, I was too eager to write out the plot quickly, so I neglected some details. In addition, basically nothing happened in the first semester, and the protagonist could not leave school to cause trouble for the time being, and many things could not be unfolded. The plot advanced very quickly, and the first semester was also very short. This will no longer be the case starting from the second semester. The protagonist has more things to do. I will also work hard to enrich the details to make the book look less dry. This is my first time writing a novel. I have indeed neglected some aspects in these aspects, and I will actively improve them when I write in the future. If you have any other opinions, you can raise them, as long as they are raised normally. Finally, I would like to thank all readers for your great support. Tiantian would like to thank you all.

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The bragging is too much. Although the hard power is relatively awesome, it is far from the standard of making trouble. It is a little bit more than half the bottle. In this case, you want to make trouble but don't dare to make big things. If you don't make big things, you can't have a climax in the story. But if you do big things but the level is not good enough, it will be very uncomfortable. You can only witness it as a participant. This leads to insufficient participation of the protagonist and a weak sense of substitution. It's difficult.

The setting is very interesting, but it is a bit dry. You can refer to some of the most popular HP fan books to add more dialogue and interaction, and the writing style can be more interesting (in fact, those two books plus a sniffing pet are very classic

To be honest, author, you write very emmm fast. After reading other DND novels, I wouldn't be surprised if the protagonist becomes a level 9 mage in one year. After all, he is a protagonist. But in your book, I feel that the protagonist upgrades too fast. With 33 chapters, he can become a level 9 mage in less than a year. What is the concept? You can work as a spell consultant in most cities in DND Other people's novels can have 200 chapters a year, but yours has been condensed into 30 chapters a year. The lack of details makes people think that you are reading an outline. The subject matter is very good, but the writing style needs to be improved

How is this book? Is Shennong there?

This book has a lot of settings, but it doesn't affect reading. It's a breath of fresh air among HP fans. I hope there won't be a female protagonist in the end.

I have to say that your introduction and book title attracted me, but a problem has arisen. Fortunately, DND has a formal novel carrier and rule book after all. In the case of wow, it can be said to be a DND-like setting. The version after WLK has some signs of stepping out. Now the classic level 60 version can be said to be completely separated from the DND setting and create a new setting. (Referring solely to arcane spells, after all, the mages in WOW seem to have three arcane systems, ice and fire, but in terms of background, they are actually arcane spells. Ice and fire are just two mimics of arcane mana. On the contrary, SM's spells are directly called from the elemental world.) Especially the theory of the six forces proposed in the previous version. This needs to be integrated well which is quite difficult.

Undead 10 Underworld 10 Dumbledore = Summoning Sister, believe me, it will be interesting to write like this, and the safety of the protagonist can be completely solved at once

It is completely impossible for dnd arcane and hp wizards. . . One talks about science and the other talks about metaphysics. . . Why don't you get a DND warlock or psionicist?

I hope I won't be a nanny again

I hope the author can write in more detail. Reading this book is just like reading an outline. The book is still very interesting. I have collected it.

I don't know why it was so hard to watch before. I felt like I was talking about academic issues all the time without any plot advancement at all😰

After reading the recent chapters, I feel that the combination of arcane magic and Hogwarts magic is not very good. Now it feels like the protagonist is only fighting with arcane magic, with the alchemy in Harry Potter as an auxiliary. Others rarely appear and don't have much effect. Especially the recent plot of Ravenclaw's inheritance makes people feel very disconnected.

If such a God of Death really exists in the world of Harry Potter, then it must have no shortage of believers. No matter who it is, they will believe in this God of Death after death. According to the DND system, it is at least a medium-level divine power. Modern magic in HP is more like magic net casting, like it comes out of an assembly line. However, ancient magic is not like modern magic. So who established modern magic similar to magic net. I find it hard to believe that ancient wizards (similar to the Four Giants, etc.) Died like this, but if they went to enjoy the blessings in the afterlife (the kingdom of God), then it is relatively reasonable. If you, as the God of Death, want to select the elite believers, then the life of a mortal is the best way to select them. The magic system in the Harry Potter world is actually very strange. The artificial flavor of modern magic is too obvious, but it does not say who established it or how it was established. The ancient wizards were very powerful, including the four giants of Merlin, but they did not live long. Going to death calmly is not enough to describe it. Later, Lao Deng also said that death is a great adventure. The saying about Horcruxes is also very strange, saying that they can only be trapped in the cracks of life and death. However, this price is acceptable, unless everything is not empty after death. The form of power expression is very low, but the level of power is very high, and time and space are normalized. There is a legend of death, but no death appears. So, I guess the world of Harry Potter hides another world with a very high power system, which can only be accessed after death.

As for HP wizards, they can probably be regarded as a special kind of DND warlock.

GKD! GKD!

Characters and the relationships between characters should be written more, otherwise it will look like an outline or explanatory text.

To be honest, I don't think a Ravenclaw is suitable to be the protagonist.

By the way, what version is your mage from?

When are you going to visit the Qiuzhi Pavilion underground in the forbidden book area? Ancient magic, the power of emotions, magic that can turn goblins into dragons, and the knowledge of the five bosses. The emotions stored underground can also help the protagonist to charge most of the arcane book.

I couldn't catch him any longer and I was saved to death! The dog doesn't even look at the daily watch

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