The Red Sun Is in the Sky

The opening chapter is not muddled, and the style of what the characters say is very similar to that era. It is very appropriate and the plot is compact. Come on, don't give up 😄

After reading more than two chapters, it felt so bland. A little bit of insight is as follows: The protagonist of the first chapter of the first chapter said that he was an ambitious man, but I didn't feel that he was ambitious at all. He looked like a child who had not grown up. And the protagonist actually said this to a palace maid, even if she changed it to a personal maid, it feels a bit like being distracted. In the second chapter, the feeling of dullness was strong. The author suddenly turned the conversation to the protagonist's father. Let's just change it. The introduction is very lengthy, including the person next to his father, his father's palace and so on. I feel that I don't need to write these at all. I just write the conversation between the two in a random location and it's done. Then came the third chapter. As soon as I turned the page, I thought I had gone somewhere →_→The conversation between the protagonist and his father suddenly disappeared. When I turned the page again, I suddenly realized, oh~ it turned out to be here...

The assistant is here. Come on, boss.

The assistant came and took a look. The author's writing is good. I wish the new book a success.

I wish your new book will be a hit. It is highly recommended. Your words flow slowly like water, and people can always feel the ups and downs inside.

Hey hey hahahaha, I am from a writer's assistant, please support me hahahaha, come on!

Come on, keep updating every day.

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