The Mythic Empire of Civilization

I hope the protagonist has an overwhelming aura of dominance, a powerful and charismatic leader, not some emperor or lord who's constantly thinking about chasing women. All that romance is so annoying! Look at history, how many emperors were like that? These days, so many novels are written like TV dramas, insisting on including love scenes in every genre, even on the battlefield during the War of Resistance Against Japan. It's just so frustrating! 😅

Submission civilization Civilization: Naga Civilization Energy: Tides (control of water, storms, lightning), enslavement of sea creatures Bloodline System: Ten-Armed Naga (Descendant of Gods), Eight-Armed Naga, Six-Armed Naga, Four-Armed Naga

I haven't watched it yet, but I heard there's a female lead. I'm just saying this to those who support the idea of ​​no female lead. Furthermore, the power of bloodline and family is immense, especially in a story about conquering an empire. Even if an emperor were immortal, it would be absurd to not have a harem or descendants...

The description tells you it's a hodgepodge; it's either incredibly awesome or incredibly terrible. Let me know when you get awesome!

Calling it "Great Qin" always evokes images of the historical Qin state, but the protagonist has absolutely no connection to Qin. It's jarring; "Yu State" would have been a better name.

Your novel is bound to run into problems sooner or later. It's too disorganized, jumping from one thing to another, making it difficult to establish a cohesive main system. It's a jumbled mess. While it might seem useful now, it's not sustainable. Reduce the amount of things like mines, the Five Witches, and other random unit types.

Writing a civilization-themed game with overpowered abilities is uninspiring.

The leaps from primitive times to high technology are too large, and the risk of collapse is too high. If the outline isn't revised soon, this book will be ruined.

Was the author designing it based on the novel "Civilization: Lord of All Realms"? It's a pity that book had a terrible ending. I hope the author can avoid it falling apart in the middle; that book started to collapse in the middle, especially after the war with Hades, which was completely incomprehensible. Good luck, author!

Please reply in the comments section about why you didn't build a wooden fence sooner. 1. Time is tight and there is no time. 2. Transportation between the tribe and the forest is very slow. 3. Logging in the primitive era is inefficient. 4. We need wood to survive in winter. 5. There is not enough wood to build a wall. 6.