Treasure Hunter, Sailing on the Blue Sea

I have some thoughts about the protagonist's spell "Mirror", 1'The protagonist can shoot lenses, the glass fragments are still very sharp, and wouldn't it be better if the material of the glass could be changed? 2'Can the spell be engraved on the lens? 3｀Mirror space is similar to a storage bag (I think it is very important, because the spell in the article needs to be engraved on some kind of material. Storing this material in the mirror space and engraving the spell on the lens can make the idea of ​​2 more reasonable) 4｀I hope the author can see it and help me, brothers.

The background setting is quite interesting. It's just that the story is too bland, Goldfinger is too strong, the adventure elements are not reflected well, and there is a lack of suspense. Come on, I hope things will change later

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The protagonist's power system is quite innovative. In the end, he suddenly changed the situation and thought he was going to create a world.

Did the author intentionally ignore the treasures in the sea? Because most of the world is sea, there should be much more sunken treasures in the sea than on land. It seems that the protagonist has never been seen digging out sunken ships. Basically, sunken ships can be obtained by finding a place. There are also murlocs in the team. Basic map You can get it directly when you see it on the website. It turns out that except for the golden treasure in the sea, it seems that nothing about the sea has been written about. Even if it is a deep sea, there are always shallow seas. It just happens by chance while sailing. It is like picking up money. As a result, after being in the dark place for so long, it seems that I only look for it on land and not in the sea.

I like this kind of treasure hunt, the ocean, the captain, the magician is extraordinary, it's perfect, it hits all my points, write it well and don't be tj, come on, I'll recommend everything to you

I just like this kind of extraordinary adventure. Don't engage in any fight for hegemony, unification of the world, or an invincible battle fleet later on. That would be too cliche and boring.

I feel that the transformation from the protagonist to the savior is too abrupt. He suddenly wants to save the world in an inexplicable simulation. Especially the period of sinking and grief is written as if the protagonist has been forcibly brainwashed by the world.

A good author who never stops updating his first book and whose character is trustworthy

I like the protagonist traveling alone. With others, all his teammates always die. He feels like a disaster. I really sympathize with Andre. His daughter is lost and his arm is broken. To be honest, this plot is not well written.

Why is a new plot starting again? A very powerful person appears out of nowhere. The protagonist has no resistance at all.

I've read the latest chapter, and there are two things I can't stand. One is that the dream is too long and not exciting. The author's description of the treasures and spells is boring. Apart from the novelty at the beginning, there are almost no highlights in the subsequent battles or treasure hunting. To put it simply, treasure hunting is just like picking up treasures. You never stop using treasures. I have stopped researching, but there have been no highlights, and it is stinky and long. For example, the protagonist's initial rune mirror is nothing new after seeing it. The strength is not strong and the ability is not weird enough. I skipped to read the rest because to be honest, the plots are similar. The latest chapter does not seem to save the world, so I saw this.

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Record of everyone's treasure information "①Holy Grail ②Scepter ③Crown" Updated to the finale chapter Alka "①Dream Catcher ①Imitation Mirror ①Lucky Silver Coin" "②Small World ②Six Element Card" "③Stealing Power" Xia Dai Mention "① Ring of Light ① Pressure Gloves ① Speed Earrings" "② Galaxy Ring ② Pale Moon" "③ Moonlight Divinity" Lucilia "① Team Flag ① Space Blade ① Soul Control" "② Cursed Sword ② Shape the Body" " ③ Afterlife Power" Jason "① Dragon Girl ① Contract Link ① Fusion Ring" "② Power of Sharing ② Cloud Staff" " ③ Power of Hope " Ululius "① Ritual Strengthening Crystal" "② Cloud Staff" Pororo "① Winter Flower ① Thorn Shark Belt ① Invisible Arm Armor " " ② Shattered Armor ② Ring of Lightning Storm " ③ Power of Disaster Julia " ① Twin Coins of Fear ① Amplified Piano ① Gramophone " " ② Necklace of Vibrating Sound ② Induction Cane " ③ Power of Nature Huan Lu "① Hungry Stick ① Bite Ball ① Sloth Ball " " ② God of Cookery Kitchenware Set ② " " ③? Simon "Hallow Precision Hand ① Mechanical Index Finger ① Mechanical Mecha ① Energy-Gathering Arms " " ② Puzzle Cube ② " ③ Mechanical Progress Materissa " ① Epidemic Treatment Needle ① New Sprouting ① Water Control Bottle " " ② Potential Stimulating Bracelet ② The Power of Repair " ③ Natural Healing

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The protagonist is a bit too Japanese. Personally, I feel that the author wants to portray a Western libertine like Drizzt or Arthur. However, the author is inspired by the anime image and the protagonist is very Japanese in daily life. It is like wearing a Western skin but wearing Kaito Kid's clothes. It is very coquettish and divisive.

Why do I feel that the Alka treasure synergy is not very systematic? There is no synergy. Compared with Xia Dai, it seems like a random match... The mirror and the dream catcher are also synergistic. The lucky silver coin has no sense of existence. The one in the small space just brings a bunch of scientific research talents and is of no use to the individual. The six elements also feel that they have no connection with the others. How does this come together?

It's been boring lately, no fighting or treasure hunting. Studying dolls all day long

According to this rhythm, the main plot in the early and mid-term is to save the world? There's nothing wrong with that, but it's best for the protagonists to avoid plots where their temperaments change drastically. This can easily become a poisonous point. Compared with gradual changes, sudden changes can make people very uncomfortable if they don't grasp the degree. There is also a problem with the portrayal of the supporting characters. When Julia has a problem, her first reaction is to question her friends. You can write that she expresses her thoughts and ask everyone for their support, but you should not write that her temperament changes drastically and she wants to drag everyone with her to destroy the world. She suddenly changed from the character of a gentle big sister to a dark and cruel villain. It was a bit difficult to break down.

After the first order, I personally suggested that you shouldn't always write about finding a person's treasures. Keep digging for this person's treasures will only make this person unqualified, but the author also wants to write that this person is awesome, which is a bit contradictory. For example, in One Piece, there is only one piece, which makes it look awesome if you can't touch it or see it.

The plot in the first few dozen chapters felt good, and the world view was well constructed. I thought the protagonist would gradually improve himself and become the captain himself, but the subsequent plot was too cliche, like a mindless hot-blooded comic. I couldn't stand it anymore when that elf appeared.

It was okay at the beginning, although there were some minor flaws, but it got a little weird in the middle. It deviated from the theme of treasure hunting and focused more on describing the changes in strength. The sense of expectation was gone, and treasure hunting became a process-based thing, which became more and more boring.

I've seen more than fifty chapters, what should I say about the clown? The plot looks rather fragmented and weird! It feels like the protagonist's IQ suddenly went off the charts.

How can there be so many treasure hunts, unless the world keeps producing a large number of treasures, just like the dungeon keeps refreshing equipment skills. Or there are ways to create treasures and magic equipment to upgrade them into treasures.

I vomited. Did you change the writing style like this? The previous style is completely gone. Where is your foreshadowing? Purely by prophecy? No wonder there are so few people in the discussion forum

The writing style is really bad, there are no detailed descriptions, all are generalizations: "Highlights his tenacity" "Shows his strength" "The atmosphere of this place gives people a XX feeling" It feels like you are writing a Chinese reading comprehension question, not like writing a novel. It's so dry that I can only read it by filling in the details with my own brain It's just that the creativity is better. If there is no creativity later, forget it. After seeing the comment section of the author's last few books, I feel that the author's writing has not improved at all and I am drunk.

To be honest, the name was delayed, otherwise I think the results would have been better, the name sounds like the one from the studio. .

There is no post-production in this book, it ends directly, and it doesn't feel as attractive as the previous one.

The back part is too watery, it doesn't feel like there's any content at all.

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