Travel Quickly to the Front Line of Melon-Eating in the World

Regarding the author's use of the word "one or two" I listened to the book all the way, and it felt like there was a "one or two" every other paragraph, just like a speed bump from time to time while driving. Among them, there are 31 "ones and twos" in chapters 1-10. The most dense of them is in Chapter 10, as shown in the figure. There are obviously many replaceable words for it, such as: a little, a little, a small amount, a few, a little, slightly, if, some, some, a little, some, a few, geometry...

In the past, similar articles were about the protagonist fighting with his opponent, with deep interaction Now, he is standing on the dry shore watching the opponent flutter, and of course he doesn't mind kicking him if it happens by chance.

I was deceived by Douyin and thought it was similar to the one in Douyin. Then I came over to check it out. They said it would be great if they only had a house, and they were not allowed to do anything else. Then they had to make trouble for themselves. I don't understand why you have to let a junior scold you for fun, and you don't rely on him to support you in old age. Besides, the heroine is just a task keeper. I don't understand why she has to go back to help move and make trouble instead of running away.

I'm sorry, this book is too good. It doesn't matter even from chapter 20. Let's talk about one thing. Chapter 7.8 Is good, not to mention that the author is like a primary school student. His writing style is so bad. He always makes one or two here and one or two there. What nonsense!

Oh my god, she's so cool...

The writing is really rubbish😰

There is water difference, but I don't know why it is so recommended.

It slipped away. I really can't stand it anymore. The plot is too overwhelming, right? I've been grinding and grinding, I've read more than a dozen chapters, and I haven't moved on yet, my God. I couldn't hold on any longer, so I left, and the software was uninstalled.

The book is quite good, suitable for relaxing or listening to it, and you won't miss the plot for at least half an hour. I won't know after half an hour. After all, I didn't watch it.

The comments are all praising, and I want to take advantage of the novice protection period to have sex for free. After reading a few articles, I really can't stand it anymore. It is understandable that the author wants to highlight the fact that the heroine gradually changes the character of the original heroine (client), but I really feel that every time I find various reasons for the heroine's resentment, one moment "I will do my own thing and let them work on their own," and the next moment "I will do this, otherwise, so what," I feel tired. Reading the article, I think most people are acting on their own behalf, right? There is a tag on the label "pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger". I didn't see "eating a tiger", maybe it is at the back. After all, I gave up after reading a few articles. "Pretending to be a pig" is obvious, and I always find various reasons to make people believe that these are "for a reason". I can't accept that "I" (acting as the heroine) says no matter one second, and works hard the next second. I have to find excuses everywhere to prove that I only think about myself when things are done.

The subject matter is fine, as is the description of family trivial matters. There are too many typos, and a large number of repetitions of one or two words make people feel disgusted. Regardless of whether the sentences are smooth or whether the lines are applicable, one or two must be used. Why. The plot is protracted, there is a lot of fluff, and things that could obviously be written in a few chapters are written over and over again. The characters are too facially drawn, and it is impossible to tell the difference between several brothers and sisters. If you really want to see it, don't bring your brains, or even your eyes. Can't stand it at all.

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Basically, every chapter has several one-two chapters. If I didn't want to finish the first story, I wouldn't have read it at all, but I still gave up because I wanted to curse when I saw one-two again.

How did you get on the list with so much nonsense?

Author, please remove one or two, it's really annoying to watch.

The author's plot is very good and I like it very much. However, the writing style could be improved a little more. Too many repeated words will make readers tired, but the plot is enough so I can continue reading.

What the hell

How can I put it this way? This novel is a bit long-winded. The story is good but there are too many of them. If you are a little impatient, be careful not to read too long.

The stories are quite good but there are too many typos 😅

The whole text was full of one-two-one-two words, and the vocabulary was poor, so I was persuaded to quit.

I think this book is very good. There is no suspense in the plot. It is just talk. It is very suitable to listen to and fall asleep. You will not be unable to stop listening to it because the plot is so good. You don't have to worry about missing something after listening to it while you are asleep, because you will know what happened before you read it.

How on earth can some people praise such a stupid article with their eyes closed? I'm speechless.

Oh my god, I can't stand it anymore. It's an assembly line fast food article written by a studio. The writing is as bad as it gets. It's all gibberish. The jumbled sentence fragmentation is a very poor experience, and there are so many grammatical errors. If it weren't for the money, I wouldn't be able to hold on for even one minute. But that's it. I'll change it.

Author, after thinking about it, I would like to suggest one or two, that is, your work can be a little less one or two, or you can directly replace the one or two, and repair it, so that the readers will feel comfortable, and the work will improve. This is really too much. Well, what about your observation?

So many things make me feel that the author's writing style is really bad, so I advise him to quit.

To summarize the first 10 chapters, the heroine wants to move away, but the brothers don't want her to move away because there is no one to do the housework. No more, I wrote 10 chapters without stopping...

There are too many typos and grammatical errors, and there are many, many unclear and unclear semantics. The article is too cumbersome, and many sentences that can be expressed concisely are repeatedly expressed in long-winded sentences. The plot also narrates the same thing repeatedly. The heroine's decision to buy a house appears repeatedly in the article. Then there is the plot. To be honest, I thought it was an interesting book at first, but after reading it, it was too frustrating. The heroine said mentally that I will be a guest from now on, and the work at home will be divided between the sister-in-law, the eldest brother, and others. I have to work hard to make money to buy a house. These things have nothing to do with me. In reality, I was only obedient, and my previous thought was to divorce. I was very busy at work, and I couldn't help with the moving. But when my sister-in-law told me, I decided to go back and help for the whole day on Saturday. It was a bit too incompetent. I felt that it made no difference whether I changed the taskmaster or not. The method basically remained the same, so I might as well write it as a rebirth. At least when I was working, I could have an excuse that I had always done this in my previous life and didn't know how to refuse. And when Zhang Yi said those words to her, she was also very aggrieved. I think if you feel it's nothing in your heart, then don't reply and treat it as if it doesn't exist. If it's time for you to reply, it's because you care in your heart and it's a bit inconsistent. What you said to Zhang Yi was a bit too gentle and unnecessary, so it's better not to say it. Regarding the matter of quarrels, I always believe that the main purpose of retorting is to make yourself angry, and the second is to make the other party angry. You make me feel that you are putting the cart before the horse. Are those words possible for a normal person to vent his anger? The above are the thoughts I have seen so far. I will not continue reading. I am posting them to explain my thoughts and to avoid thunder for readers like me!

Why do you still need money for such an ugly article?

At first glance, it's a trash book. No wonder I spent money to post on station B. It's highly toxic. Nothing but water is water. "One or two" throughout the article.

All water, all in water. There are many typos and the plot is draggy. The content of the short stories is roughly the same. After reading the first few stories, almost every mission involved getting married and having a baby. Is this time traveling to do a mission or to use a fertility machine? ? AI writes a book! Infinite matryoshka