Hunter X Hunter: I Really Don't Want to Be the Leader

So many transmigrators have made their abilities so complex, but their intelligence just can't keep up. Why didn't the author choose something as simple and straightforward as enhancement or emission abilities? A protagonist with low intelligence trying to outmaneuver those geniuses is truly overconfident. Given the cunning intelligence of characters like Hunter x Hunter, it feels like no author could handle the narrative effectively.

The idea is great, the creativity is great, but the characters' intelligence seems a bit lacking, I mean the kind from the original work. In my opinion, the most appealing aspect of Hunter x Hunter is its diverse and unique Nen abilities, novel settings and world-building, and most importantly, the intellectual battles and strategic combat between its characters. You don't seem to have captured that aspect.

Although this is a rare Hunter x Hunter fanfic, I still have to say, the protagonist is utterly despicable. His personality isn't exactly likable; he talks about wanting a peaceful life, but in reality… (although this is a common trope for protagonists on web novels), and he even goes so far as to give away women (betraying others to save his own life, and even giving away the loyal and affectionate female lead to the Phantom Troupe).

From a character development perspective, I found Bissi's portrayal quite strange. Firstly, she's a two-star Gem Hunter, a successor of the Heart Source School, and a Transmutation-type Nen user. However, in this side story, she comes across as a kind-hearted, muscular older sister. The Hunter x Hunter universe is generally realistic but leans towards darkness.

It feels like it was written by a female author; I wonder how many readers were turned off by the Phantom Troupe section.

The subject matter is appealing, and it's clear the author intends to write a novel that differs from the typical group-following genre. Judging from the opening prophetic poem and the concept of shooting ability, the author is willing to write something original, but the author's writing style is somewhat unable to support the concept.

The dungeon was entered too quickly. I wanted to see how the leader played, but after reading a few dozen chapters, it was over. I recommend focusing on the interaction between the church and the main characters, innovating while maintaining the original plot, and creating new storylines through the collision between the church and the main characters. The arena scene was a complete failure.

Living under someone else's roof, being raised and kept like a pet, what makes the protagonist feel safe?

The flaws aren't major, just minor ones. But even if the protagonist is capable, why does a two-star hunter like Bischilly constantly ask for his opinion? The protagonist isn't even a hunter yet. The author could at least make some adjustments. Don't lower everyone else's intelligence just to highlight the protagonist.

The concept of materializing Nen through equivalent exchange is indeed well-designed. Its limitation is likely a lower potential and lower aura compared to normal individuals. The ability allows the user to replenish their Nen with the aura of others and to engage in equivalent exchange.