Samsara Paradise: Assassin's Legend

I can only explain why it is the same trial world as Baiye and has the same tasks. It's really unnecessary. It's easy to get criticized. If you ask me to change the mission to kill all the ministers, wouldn't it be better if you change the ring to a side mission?

Since the author writes fanfics about Samsara Paradise, you should know that basically the data of the fanfics about Samsara Paradise are not very good. I hope the author can persist and be optimistic about you. Come on!

Can the author add a melee master? Same as Brother Xiao. All kicks. I really like Brother Xiao's direct kick. And the damage is still high. And I think the adaptability of the assassin is better than that of Su Xiao. I just sneaked over and kicked him, then used a damage-increasing skill like backstab. Direct damage explosion. And it's still level A

I came up with the entire meme on a whim (I just used the ones I've seen and which are more in line with the table. I like the picture Yile 😥. I hope it will be less "toxic", please) (Scarlet reincarnation has been cut off, and the update time of Silver Moon is uncertain)

As a loyal reader of Samsara Paradise, I am very happy to see fan works. Many times, a large number of fan works will start with the hunter as a template. In fact, writing from the perspective of a regular contractor is also a good starting point. Su Xiao in Mosquito's novel uses a large number of examples to enrich the character's image, and due to Su Xiao's character, he avoids the big The small description of a large number of characters opens up a new world view through a large number of equipment and native worlds, etc., And the writing is smooth and easy to read. What is very important is what the readers want to see and what they are attracted to. For example, I was attracted by the career development structure of Samsara Paradise, the novel and interesting equipment, and the interaction with the internal zoo. Even so, In the early days of the park, the popular anime-derived world was introduced, which attracted early readers. It will be gradually expanded in the future. After reading the author's works in this book, I would like to make some suggestions. I hope that some familiar worlds can be introduced as a premise and gradually pave the way. In addition, it focuses on the description of the career development of assassins. I hope to learn from the author's From this perspective, I can see a different reincarnation paradise. Another small point is that I hope you don't attach too much importance to various passive abilities and easily fall into Su Xiao's character template. You can consider the transformation of Master in reincarnation, that is, analyzing skills, mastering the essence of skills to break skill limitations. I look forward to seeing the display of an assassin-type master of skills in the author's writings. 🌹

Look what I found, another reincarnation fanfic. But how many words can this write?

As an assassin, the protagonist's main attributes are obviously charming. What's even more outrageous is that the author himself wrote that the main attributes cannot differ by 3 points, and the charm is only 6 points. Don't you think it is contradictory? Are you writing 3 main attributes or 4 attributes?

The protagonist who grew up in an orphanage has a sister who the director of the orphanage said is his biological son. After coming out of the first world, he asked a beautiful teammate who had formed several teams in the past to take care of his sister. . . This sister is probably going to have an accident to promote the plot. If nothing happens, she will be used to feed the daily life. If she does not promote the plot and is not suitable for daily life, I really can't imagine that the author wants to write about this sister to feed the readers💩?

... Originally, your first world and mission are the same as Su Xiao's, and even the plot is basically the same, except that the name of the protagonist is changed. The same opening, gangs fight at the door, and then someone breaks in, and then beats up and asks for information. The same, kills the black market businessman, disguises himself as a black market businessman and enters the city. The same, enters the escort team, kills the captain of the escort team, completes the minister's mission and arranges for the Creek pirates, and arranges a fake mole to open the door for Creek... 😅

Author, apart from other things, whether you have an outline or not, don't write and stop writing.

I'm from Tieba, come on, future masters! Let's invest in it😁

Because I am a fan of Samsara Paradise, most of my fanfics follow Samsara Paradise, and the good ones are all brainless and uncharismatic 😳😳

The protagonist doesn't improve his physique? Isn't physical fitness important? If you have the strength to lift a hundred pounds, but your physical fitness is too poor, will you be directly overwhelmed by the one hundred pounds? Or were the muscles and bones broken under the weight of this hundred pounds? When the protagonist killed someone in the later stage, was it possible that his hand was shattered and fractured before the knife was handed out because the force was too great? I like logical logic when reading books, so I can only say goodbye.

It's well written, but there are too few updates.

Who is the serious person who writes and saves the manuscript?

I won't talk about the first world, but I really didn't understand the gods or anything in the second world. I didn't watch the original version of Samsara Paradise, Sea of ​​Death, so I at least know why things didn't happen. But I really didn't understand the second world and I wrote so much about it. You don't think it's well written, but you keep hitting it without explaining everything clearly and giving you a goal, right?

One chapter monthly pass? ! 129 Is still being updated? ! Not on the shelves? ! The author writes in his free time after get off work? ! (Not the main business?) Side business? ! Is the update stable? ?

Brother, I don't even have the desire to read this update.

I found that there is no good fanfic, let alone one that surpasses the original work.