The Beginning of Panlong: in the Name of the Father

I came here to read novels, not to learn the history of another world. The good guy started talking about history and immediately persuaded me to quit.

The author begs you to publish a new book as soon as possible, otherwise I'm afraid that I'll want to read it after reading it but I won't. At present, I have read more than 700 chapters of this book, and the story plot has developed until Dong Bo Lie has just become a second-level heavenly god. I really like the plot of this book so far. Although some people in the book reviews said that the author's writing is verbose, but I think it has a tomato-like feel and is very well written. At least I like to read it. Moreover, there are many original plots in the book that are different from the original story lines, such as Ji Yichuan's Tianshi Palace plot and Dong Bo Lie's Time and Space Temple plot. The settings are very rigorous and do not conflict with the logic of the original work. The author must have worked hard to set the above. The only drawback is that typos and names are often seen.

I don't know when the author finished the story of Panlong. Before he finished it, he went to write other stories.

After reading ten chapters, the whole text was rambling. It was clear that the second chapter was at the peak of the holy realm, but after ten chapters it was back to the original point. It also involves the Wild Age and Devouring the Starry Sky. The only thing I can remember about Chapter 10 is one sentence (I traveled to Hogg and Baruch reached the pinnacle of the Holy Realm), and the content after Chapter 11 (I recall my life experiences in the past ten years). It can probably last a hundred chapters.

What was written about how awesome and awesome Luo Liba Suo was before he was reborn. How could he not be able to extricate himself when he was living before rebirth? Tell us, the audience, to watch a hammer

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At the beginning, the protagonist killed the king and snatched his storage ring. He was still at the peak of the holy realm, which whetted his appetite. Anyway, I had the desire to read more when I saw this. But I turned around and put all these aside and started from the beginning to write about the things that had just awakened the memory and had not become the holy realm. It was written in dozens of chapters, and it was also very long-winded. I had no desire to read it at once. . .

Let's change the name. It would be better to call it Panlong Stone Sculptor's Travel Notes on the Mainland.

I couldn't stand it anymore after ten chapters. What could be explained in one or two chapters was forced to go into ten chapters. This made people feel long-winded, and then it became a bit boring to read. The author made a big mistake. I basically know the plot and basic things from reading the fanfic. I don't need so much popular science at all. It will make people feel uncomfortable after reading it.

I have been bragging about it for more than a dozen chapters in my past life as a reincarnation person, traveling through countless worlds and witnessing countless civilizations, so I just tolerated it and just treated it as adding more background to the protagonist. As a result, now that the human form has reached the Holy Realm, after the transformation, it is basically the pinnacle of the Holy Realm, and it has also understood the rules of life. As a result, the reason for losing to Xisai in a head-on battle is that he lacks combat experience and is not decisive enough to kill? Do you want to take a look at what you are writing in the first ten chapters, brother?

Be willing to give up. Only when you give up can you gain something. You are a nonsense person with no main line and no logic. You are simply a bastard. You should know what kind of old lady nagging style the author has by looking at the title of the book. I am superficial.

180,000 Words of substantive content, up to 80,000 words, 😑What kind of pen

After reading ten chapters, the main plot consisted of chatting with the boss of the Dawson Chamber of Commerce for a few words, and the rest was all about lying around. The author's soliloquy was really convincing.

What will open a new book😭

There are too many irrelevant contents, Momojiji, see you again in the future.

It's too watery. Are you picking on readers? Goodbye, we are not in the same place, it is really frustrating to watch. Just a big water monkey

The author's design of Tao is very thoughtful. Whether it is the Tao of Black Water in the early stage or the six strongest Tao of Chaos in the later period, you can see that the author has put his heart into it; In terms of plot routines, it is relatively ordinary or bland. There are no big poisonous points such as breaking off the engagement or the gangster-like son-in-law, and there is no passion, complaints, or repairs. Highlights such as Luo Chang; The supporting characters are relatively stereotyped. No matter what kind of practice they are, they feel the same in fighting. The protagonist has no bright spots. There are more dialogues, but they are all dialogues that are not nutritious. They are all dominated. The dialogue is actually like this:

The author's wives are not very well written. They only come back to speak sarcastically to the protagonist after he has gone out to practice for a long time. They usually don't have much support and warmth to get along with him.

There is so much nonsense, especially in the last few chapters. Each chapter has to change its ways to emphasize that the future has changed. Worrying about this and that can only be said with a broad brush.

This is the most clumsy and verbose children's book I've ever read.

So becoming a god inside the body is simply Tomato's stupidest setting. He wrote down the potential of becoming a god inside the body as worthless. It's so stupid. The rules of heaven and earth specifically ask you when you become a god, do you want to become a god inside the body or outside the body? Why do so many things? Wouldn't it be nice to just set it to become a god outside the body? Therefore, fan fiction should make a big fuss about becoming a god within the body, breaking through the limitations of Tomato, and slapping Tomato in the face. This is what a good fan writer should do. Speaking of which, let me just come up with a wild idea! For example, the physical body of a god who becomes a god in the body is particularly powerful, or the probability of achieving Dzogchen is higher (the author is thinking about how high it is specifically), and then a setting is added that after completing Dzogchen in one system, you can then cultivate other systems, which is equivalent to having multiple godheads in the body and strengthening the body multiple times. Don't the main themes of Coiling Dragon like infinite lifespan? Then follow this main theme and give some benefits to those with less talent (Didn't Panlong always emphasize the flow of genius? Then most of us who read novels are ordinary people, don't we miss it? I'm going to counterattack, okay!). As long as you have great perseverance, becoming a god inside the body will eventually be very strong. At least it can compete with the multi-system Dzogchen of becoming a god outside the body. This is the final correct solution! Since ancient times, Taoism has focused on cultivating itself. It makes no sense that the clone flow is stronger. Xiao Huangshu's clone flow is still poisonous, right? Actually, I am not optimistic about the clone flow at all. The main body is the best and the human race is the master of the world! ! ! ! ! ! Otherwise, wouldn't the Rules of Heaven and Earth ask you specifically for the behavior of an idiot? Oh, just to tease you and give you a trap? Is it necessary? It has no emotions. Isn't this setting stupid? We can think of it this way, that is, the plot of the multiple clones was already figured out in a flash of tomato brain (easy to write), and the god in the body did not waste any effort to set it up (the pit was not filled in)! So what the fan author has to do is to help Tomato go further, and at the same time make himself famous for once. As long as your writing skills are good and the plot design is strong enough, this will be another masterpiece! It's a pity that many people are afraid of trolling (are they afraid of trolling because of the original work's party setting? Haha, readers are just following the crowd and have no brains. Do you understand? As long as the author writes well, some people will praise you and be afraid of it). I want to say that you will never become a great author if you are afraid of trolling!

What can I say about this book? There is no sense of enjoyment at all. It is all dry explanations of practice. What you did after you became successful in practice is explained in a little bit. After a paragraph, there is another explanation of practice. I have a strong sense of enjoyment when reading the original work. What else can I read if fan fiction does not make me feel refreshed?

The author writes about various worlds in this book. In my opinion, it is far inferior to the previous book where he wrote about the Wild Age and Swallowing Starry Sky separately.

It feels better than the previous one, maybe because it brings in the excitement of being reborn with memories.

I just want to know if there are any fans who finally sanctioned the Temple of Time and Space. I really don't understand it. This kind of battle is so powerful and the power to force others. It doesn't matter that most of the people kidnapped in the original work are "mediocre" people. But so many protagonists of the fan fiction were also kidnapped. In the end, most of them did not intend to take revenge. Instead, many of them even became disciples of the Lord of Time and Space Island. I really don't understand it. Even some of the protagonists in the novels were already very strong before coming to Lord Snow Eagle, and then they still have so many masters. I don't understand it. When the benefits are not so great, why do they find so many fathers for themselves? Looking for someone to be your father?