The Beginning of Panlong: Across the Three Realms

I read dozens of chapters and it was very uncomfortable. All the logic was confusing, the preface did not match the follow-up, and there were a few typos and the word order was confusing. It was completely up to the reader to straighten it out in order to read it normally. One was the fifth senior sister and the other was the sixth senior sister. Couldn't the author read and check it himself after he finished writing?

I thought it was a high-quality product, but I didn't expect it to be of average quality. Time-travel is not time-travel, and it's half-assed. Do you think that in a world where low-level martial arts are not enough, the exercise method will be useful in the extraordinary world? Even if you just say that the Tao Te Ching can help you understand the mysteries, it is better than this. The reason why the protagonist of Jiuding can practice martial arts is because it is a civilized system. You are a magic system person here, and you can write it like Jiuding. Moreover, it is about time travel, which is much better than yours. It looks awkward. You either devour the other or be swallowed by the other, and you have dreams again and again. Can you not be so naive?

Why don't you fool me? One prop actually has two or three different names, and there are all kinds of typos throughout the article, all kinds of characters that have no beginning and no end, and all kinds of inexplicable plots. I know that the author wants to write an original plot, but to write it in such a perfunctory way is not as good as faithfully copying the original plot line. I still haven't figured out which clone of the protagonist is in the Three Realms, which clone is outside, and what kind of cultivation level the protagonist has now? I just finished practicing the Thousand-Body Sacred Scripture, and when I went to the secret realm, I was a true god. . . After two chapters, it inexplicably became the world of mental flow. . . It was so sudden. Instead of doing this, why did you write the Thousand Body Sacred Scripture? And what exactly is the main character majoring in? There are formations, gun paths, Minghui Avenue, and space in a mess. . . Do you know what you are writing? Either stop writing for a few days to change your mind, or just become a eunuch and become more and more messy as you write!

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This is the first time I have seen a Panlong fan write so much before the Holy Domain, and also wrote about the real power of the army. The idea is very good, but I would like to remind you that the most fundamental thing about Panlong is the mysterious law, so the Holy Domain is the beginning. Although the previous ones are exciting, they can only be foreshadowing.

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After reading the entire novel, I feel that you are really doing a disservice. It doesn't matter that Lin Lei changed from the controller of Hongmeng to the Great Perfection God. After all, he became the controller because of the accidental mutation of the four souls. But as for Ji Ning, he slowly climbed up step by step. You directly transformed him from the controller of the chaotic universe to the supreme one. Good guy, when you came here, I didn't get any benefits, and it got even worse.

I really feel that "Sacred Code of Thousand Stars" is a trap, and I won't be happy if I don't complain! It is mentioned in the original book that the greatest use of the Thousand Stars Sacred Scripture is that at the World Realm stage, the mana can far exceed that of the same level, and even reach the level of a First-Level Dao Lord, but can't the ninth level of Chaos Restriction be achieved in the same way? Also, the cultivation of the Thousand Stars Sacred Scripture requires the assistance of a World Heart. If the World Heart was easy to obtain, the Heart General in the original work would not have been lurking in the Three Realms and Two Chaos Epochs and was killed by Ji Ning's explosion of the small universe. This shows that at least at the level of the Great Mo Eternal Realm, the World Heart is not common. Finally, all the clone methods are useless at the Dao Lord stage. The Dao Lord must unite all the clones into one, and cultivate the realm of Tao and the power of Tao. From the moment I saw the Thousand Stars Sacred Scripture, I can't hold it in anymore. It feels like it's really slowing down the progress. What do you think?

I really can't bear it anymore! ! ! I want to know how the heroine, a lower-level god, combined with some mystery, can be comparable to a six-star demon! ! ! Don't tell me what Qinglong Essence and Blood is! ! In the original work, Lin Lei became a six-star demon when he started to integrate the third type of mystery when he was a middle god! (The section on Miluo Island has been written!!!)

I feel that the Coiling Dragon universe is no worse than the original universe of Devouring. Although the Coiling Dragon is not as good as Devouring in terms of spatial breadth, the time span of the Coiling Dragon is trillions and trillions and Devouring is trillions. The Lord God should be no worse than the strongest.

What is "The Wilderness" written about? Why does it have to be arranged in a world where the world is excluded and the true spirit is damaged? Why didn't this happen in the first two worlds? Did the mastermind behind the scenes do it on purpose? Why do you have to do this? Moreover, the understanding is forced to be lowered than that of ordinary people, so it must be disgusting, right? If you don't do this now, you won't be able to write a book, right?

There is a very obvious gap in Panlongli's strength.

I read it a long time ago, and now I'm reading it again. The level is considered very good even now. It's a level where the more you write, the better it looks. Let's not talk about the writing style, but in the middle and later stages, the essence is really expressed.

The author has almost finished writing the rough chapter of the Panlong chapter, and plans to start the Devouring chapter The author's name is useless, I hope everyone can give me a little help, after all, this novel is really powered by love

Convinced, each of the original protagonists has not reached their original heights. Lin Lei's soul has no mutation, Luo Feng's 100,000 times gene is gone, Ji Ning's ultimate way is gone, what, the original protagonist is blocking your way, right?

After reading the Panlong chapter and the Swallowing chapter, I really couldn't stand this book anymore. Panlongli turned Lin Meng into the Great Perfection God. Luo Feng Baba Tower's Golden Horned Giant Beast was robbed in Devour, and there will definitely be no Luo City Lord in the future. Why can't I write a book if I don't follow the original plot? Grab everything

I seriously suspect that this book was copied and pasted from various sources! The time, environment, settings, etc. Are all confusing and unreasonable. Not to mention comparing it to the original work, even comparing it to the previous paragraph, I can't even connect it! Author, I suggest you read it yourself!

Good guy, one book was written by several people, and I saw four names for one weapon, including guns, swords, and sticks. The time before and after is inconsistent, the plot before and after is inconsistent, and the currency system before and after is inconsistent. Sorry.

In the review of the book by Immortal Ju Hua, I saw some people criticizing it and saying that this is the only book I can read. Immortal Ju Hua couldn't even read it, so I came here to read it. It just stained my eyes. I couldn't finish the free chapters, the sentences didn't make sense, and there were so many typos. The protagonist lost his wits as soon as he entered the battle. As mentioned before, his fighting spirit reached level seven, when he was blacksmithing, it became level two, and when he was assassinated, it turned to level six. This fighting spirit is really crazy. I can change it any way I want. In addition, writing a fanfic like Panlong actually changed the name of the mystery. It would be great to write a book by yourself if you have this ability. What kind of fanfic should I write? After reading dozens of chapters, I was poisoned and died. It wasn't that I couldn't finish reading, but I almost didn't get out of it.

The author's setting of the heroine's strength is too invincible. I feel that the heroine is the pig's trotter, and the pig's trotter may be incidental. Moreover, pig's trotter, as a time traveler, has not made good use of the knowledge of the two worlds. The knowledge of Chinese civilization is completely useless. The thoughts and theories of various schools of thought, the modern scientific and technological knowledge system, how can the pig's trotters transcend the Panlong after the three lines of mutation? Why not just use the four elements, light, darkness, water and fire, to create the transcendental coiled dragon with the two paths of yin and yang.

Against the flight of the Coilosaurus. 1. "What kind of realm do ordinary strong men in the holy realm need to comprehend?" What Tomato wants to express here is that the ultimate warrior does not need a realm to transform and break through to the holy realm, and he can fly without a realm, while ordinary people need a realm to break through to the holy realm and then fly. This is the foreshadowing for the protagonist in the following article to transform into the holy realm at the ninth level and fly. The talent here is that you can break through the physical body and reach the holy realm without the need for realm. 2. You said that the ninth-level warrior has cognitive limitations, so why can't the narration be regarded as Tomato's deliberate guidance? And the author has not yet realized what Tomato wants to guide. 3. Let's talk about babies. Don't believe that babies are born in a state of power and have mastered the rules at birth. What's more, flying itself has nothing to do with power. The author also ignored all the words about the holy realm. There were many words in the article about the holy realm being able to fly, but he ignored them all. He just struggled with a sentence that was not clearly expressed, and misinterpreted it to mean that the holy realm needs to feel the power before it can fly. But Tomato spent an entire novel saying that the Holy Land can fly, but was ignored by the author. This is not a matter of personal opinion. I am afraid that the author feels that there is something wrong with his logic. He has to use countless lies to complete all kinds of lies. You are similar.

Did the author forget again? ! ! The latest chapter, are you really being punished by heaven? ! ! Maybe the protagonist is the reincarnation of a fake Zhulong! Are all his Taoist friends from his previous life dead? ! ! Also, the sword has the power of the sword. The fifth level is the sword god realm. The sixth level can even directly break through to the world god. The strength is stronger than those who have broken through through the path of chaos! ! And it's not just the way of swordsmanship, it's the case in all avenues! The protagonist's power of the stars and the power of the universe can continue to be deepened and improved, and the author seems to have forgotten! I only know how to understand the way of heaven from Guangbo! ! To understand the multiple ways of heaven is actually to understand the avenue of chaos! This is not the only way! ! !

You've seen the ending of the Coiling Dragon part. You're not kidding, can a non-light god recognize the reincarnation pool of an angel?

Why do you keep writing about the earth? Do you really think others care about the feelings of family and country?

What kind of rotten fish and shrimps come here to write a book?

Follow the protagonist's path and leave the protagonist with nowhere to go. Among them, there is a clone of Dao Lord in the Manghuang Ji Chapter. This is an error and it still appears.

Not very good, the details are too different

I have read Panlong novels many times, and am a fan of many Panlong fanfics. I have many questions in my mind, and I would like to ask everyone: For example, if the Redbud Lord kills a Dzogchen, the Dzogchen Godhead is Perfection, and lets his son Leisjing, the middle god, refine the Dzogchen Godhead. After refining the godhead, is the Laisijing a Dzogchen Godhead?

In the entire novel, the Devouring Chapter and the Wilderness Chapter should be cut out into separate books. These two chapters are considered to be above the standard among the fans. Forget about Panlong.

The swallowing part of this book contains the strongest myth of tomato