The Walking Dead: An Esper in the Apocalypse

Author, what you wrote is basically the same as the original work. When I read it, I felt like I was reading the original work.

After reading a few pictures, I felt more and more familiar with it, and then I looked at the chapter names. Isn't this just a plot of The Walking Dead with an extra person? Maybe the author is not strong enough to write something that is too out of touch with the plot, but I still have to give some advice to the author. Most people who read fanfiction hope to change the fate of some characters, which is similar to making up for some regrets in the original work. The protagonist who has a second-hand copycat version of Cyclops feels like a member of Rick's protagonist team with some lines has been added to the TV series.

The writing is a bit rough. Basically nothing has changed. Why not just start from Alexander?

The most disgusting thing about reading this book is that it's okay for you to write about this TV series to gain traffic, but you got into this movie and TV series. I have never watched this TV series. It's boring to keep following other people's plots.

Just like a running account, it doesn't feel like a novel at all but like a script, with no sense of immersion at all.

I can't say it's one lump💩, maybe two lumps

The name of the protagonist is just a bunch of stuff. If the starting point allows you to write it down, just thank the editor for not knowing what happened in the past.

Dale is still dead! The death of this old man was my biggest regret when I watched The Walking Dead!

He actually wrote his girlfriend Erica to death

Can you update two chapters tonight?