Lord of the Mysteries: The Fate Fairy

Regarding the scene where the protagonist and Miss Justice kiss, and their subsequent behavior, not only were they embarrassed, but I also found it awkward to watch. It was incredibly toxic; they're best friends, yet they're having a romantic relationship, and the process was extremely crude.

The battle between the three Kings of Destiny is quite interesting. The Great Serpent has two Sequence One characteristics, the Small Serpent has Sequence One plus Uniqueness, and the special Sequence Two of the Destiny Path can accommodate Source Matter. In this way, the Destiny Path can create three Kings of Destiny, and they'll fight each other!

If you're going to write a fanfic about the supernatural, at least don't make the protagonist a low-IQ loser. Would something like that survive three chapters in the supernatural world? Besides, the plot is so clichéd it's like a typical urban fantasy novel. Please, don't tarnish the supernatural genre.

Let me first state my criticisms. Audrey saw the Wheel of Fortune tarot cards. The protagonist, tricked by the unlucky fairy, pounces on Audrey. I'm not against romance. But I find this portrayal awkward; the protagonist is like a clown, standing on a stage being manipulated. Audrey wasn't a naive and innocent character. I don't like to focus solely on her beauty and silly behavior. I admire her strength and courage, which, ironically, makes her seem more heroic than delicate.

After reading a dozen or so chapters, the subject matter is alright, but there are many problems. The issues aren't with the plot or, as some have mentioned, the female lead. After all, the book barely touches on two plot points, and the female lead doesn't even exist.

On the surface, it seems reasonable, but upon closer inspection, it has many flaws; it's only acceptable if you don't think too much. It's impossible for the Night to support Antignus. If they were on good terms, they would be on the same side, not enemies, in the Fourth Age. Furthermore, the Heavenly Mother was made into a vessel for divine descent by the Night. If Antignus had the chance, he would definitely beat the Night to death.

They're already best friends, and he still wants the female lead? And it's fucking toxic!

I want to understand one thing: the Celestial Venerable can never lose; suppressing him temporarily is useless. Kelvin will eventually erode humanity over time, but the Celestial Venerable will live on forever.

The author really needs to change the protagonist's name. It's been over ten chapters and it's still Qin Ming; it's so distracting! And the "Fairy Miss" character is definitely some pink fairy from Honkai Impact 3rd, right? Absolutely!

The latest volume's setting feels incredibly toxic. Using one's own clones as bodies—and the reader next door is doing the same, using doll clones of their own women, it's like NTR'd themselves! I remember reading another cult book before that used the same thing—using one's own clones as bodies of their own women. Seriously, please stop writing this kind of thing; it's disgusting.