Lonely Rock: My Wife Is Poch-Chan

Ah, although it would be cool to be the male protagonist, it would still be too cruel for Yili. He would be transported to an unfamiliar world and forced to live with a pseudo-Nite who is nearly 10 years older than him. Obviously I have made friends and joined the band, but now it's like this😨😨😨. It hurts for one mile and three minutes

I compete with xxn online every day, and this is the first time I want to use the word "bottom" to evaluate someone. This protagonist is a real dickhead😅

How to put it, Lonely Rock is suitable for the two-dimensional light novel style, but this novel is in a very strange, even embarrassing position. Pochi-chan herself is a two-dimensional character, so the author wants to bring her out completely authentically, but the male protagonist is indeed a three-dimensional character. A normal boy with a Yuan style, even has the same mentality as an otaku who picks up a two-dimensional figure that he likes. He seems to be very protective, but in fact he is not. No matter it is psychology, routines, or dealing with things, he always behaves too hastily, with the feeling that I will get you soon. The above conditions are true, but the setting of opposition is too strong, but it seems a bit stiff. As we all know, two-dimensional fan fiction is mainly about emotional delicacy. Starting from the details, the main character is Asasi. Of course, this is a metaphor, which means that the heroine is copying it too much, but it cannot be integrated with the heroine who is obviously three-dimensional, and it feels like going through the motions. The description is not detailed enough and delicate enough. Although there are many psychological descriptions in anime, it is better to translate the psychological state into a novel and express it externally, so that the interaction is more interesting. It would be a bit nonsensical to completely copy the psychological description. There is obviously a big difference between novels and animation. The text requires a lot of details to be imaginative and fascinating. Animation is all pictures, and naturally you can use all kinds of nonsensical comedy to express the psychology, because the pictures themselves are there. Of course, this is just a personal opinion and does not represent the public. I really like lonely rock

My dear friends, this book will be finished. It will be updated twice a day, and occasionally three or four times. The purpose of writing a book is to make money, but what I write is an anime fanfic from my childhood after all. I heard from others that it is easy to have copyright issues, so it is good if we are not tepid and constantly update and do not supervise. I am doing a good job, and everyone enjoys watching it, which is good! I hope that those who keep books will set up update reminders, and then scroll to the last page. With this, it will be easier for me to work hard and code faster. Please, dear friends!

What about the character of the male protagonist? I feel like he is not worthy of Porchi-chan. Furthermore, it is too cruel for a social fear like Porchi-chan to go to another world. There are also some behaviors in the character setting of some male protagonists that are really mean. I still think that someone as gentle and reliable as the sun is more suitable for Porchi-chan, and if the relationship is gradual, it will be better for a social fear like Porchi-chan.

Byd, it turns out you copied "My Wife Comes From More Than A Thousand Years Ago". I told you where I had seen this plot, but you copied it exactly the same in the early stage.

It feels very interesting. Compared with other Porchi fanfics, I think this one is better.

I don't know where to start, so I'll just say it casually The biggest problem with this book is that the description of Porchi-chan's heart is seriously lacking, commonly known as not enough details. I can imagine why Pochi-chan likes the protagonist: she travels to a strange world, meets a male protagonist who is willing to help her provide a place to live, and then takes care of her meticulously. In addition, the male protagonist protects her in several subsequent crises, etc. But the problem is that I don't know what Poch-chan thinks. Why does she like the male protagonist? What is her psychological journey like? I don't know any of this. What's even more outrageous is that in recent chapters, Porchi-chan has almost no inner monologue. At the same time, because of this, I felt a sense of disobedience as Pochi-chan accepted more and more excessive hands-on behavior and liked the male protagonist. Because in my understanding, their relationship has not developed to this extent at all. So the key is to write it down! Let the readers know that they regard both parties as people they like in their hearts! This way we won't have any sense of disobedience. If you want to write a good emotional line in a novel, how can you not write a good description of the hearts of both parties in love? In addition, the word "hum" is too misused. "Humph" is more suitable for the kind of arrogant and tough little girlfriend, and is not suitable for the weaker Pochi-chan. Also, in the original work, I remember that Pochi-chan had the goal of getting rid of social fear, becoming brilliant and popular. The author's Porchi-chan didn't make me feel this at all. The only thing that can be praised in this book is that the author can grasp Pochi-chan's social fear, such as the fear of being watched, the fear of being in crowded places, etc., And has been restored to it. (I won't talk about the imaginative expression techniques in anime) So I can only say that the author should work hard. When writing a novel like this that focuses on the relationship between the male and female protagonists, the emotional details cannot be careless. 😡

I was tricked into reading it by a book reviewer and died of poison in less than two chapters.

Dear friends, please use your little fortune-making hands to help click to add to the bookshelf. Dear readers of books, please also set update reminders and turn to the last page in advance before adding books. My traffic is a mess. If you continue to support me, I will die. Thank you for your support!

There are some problems with parents' shaping of this aspect

Urgent, I think it's better than other fics, but I'm a little sour after eating lemon QAQ

I always feel awkward having to have a Chinese male protagonist in a Japanese setting.

At the beginning, it seemed like my wife came from a thousand years ago

Well written, those two guys succeeded in making my fist hard and I am looking forward to the follow-up

If you can change this paragraph into an introduction to your work, you will definitely attract a lot of people to watch it😆

I am confident that I can trick Pochi-chan home in ten minutes.

…6, I haven't read it yet, but I really didn't expect to find Lonely Second Creation in the novel section.

No... Are there any fans here? It's only been a few months! So efficient

I'm About to Get Married. It's not on the shelves yet. It's the first time I've seen it.

Damn it, I read the novel every day, but I forgot to like the character card.

Brother, this book has too much YY content. The first few chapters feel weird.

Will Porchi-chan return to the original world later?

This book has no exposure at all

What did the author think of when describing the character Jianyang? It looks weird

Why does it feel like the writing is a bit similar to "My Wife Came from a Thousand Years Ago"?