Zhe Tian: in Charge of the Jade Dish of Creation

The heroines are Yan Ruyu, Zixia, Fire Linnu, Dragon Girl, Golden Goddess, Yaochi Saint, Yueling Princess, Yi Qingwu, Yao Xi, Fairy Eye Weiwei, Xia Jiuyou, An Miaoyi, Princess Shenchan, and Fairy Qingshi. Taking the path of sword cultivation

Originally, I read this book mainly for the harem, but now that I wrote about how it became the eunuch cultivation stream, the unique features of this book are gone. Nowadays, the girl has no interaction, no details, and runs around every day, which is simply forcing readers away. If you want a harem, write it well and don't create a fake harem or a real eunuch. Let's look at the requirements of the eunuch training stream. I ran around without knowing anything, and I didn't improve much. It didn't reflect the golden finger's ability at all. The protagonist has a tendency of losing his genius to waste training, and he didn't write the taste of covering the sky at all. The author of the eunuch training stream is not the material at all. It feels like a running account. I may have to run away. What does the author plan to write next? Can you tell me the direction? In this way, we also know whether to continue reading or not. It really feels like your condition is not as good as before. 🙂

I know that some people don't like it because there are too many female protagonists, or some people think that if there are too many female protagonists, it will easily destroy the performance of the book, and it will definitely be bad. What I want to say here is that it is impossible for every book to meet the needs of everyone. I regretted reading the book Zhetian. I must have a bias when writing the book. I can only say that it should be as non-toxic and harmless as possible. Some people will definitely like it and some will not. This is normal. If this book is indeed not to your taste, it is not a big deal. You can choose to have other people who are the same as Zhetian, because there are many people who are the same as Zhetian. But I just hope you can stop using a threatening tone. If you write like this, I won't read it. I don't think it's necessary. Isn't this just a book? Everyone reads books for happiness. If this book cannot bring you happiness, just give up on it decisively. There is nothing to say. It's impossible for me to force everyone to subscribe and watch it. I still say that from writing this book to now, many people have asked me questions, whether it is typos or some errors in the plot. I will correct them if they can be corrected without affecting my outline. But there are some things that cannot be changed or go against my original intention of writing the book, so I have no intention of changing them. I will also explain the situation very well, so please don't just use strong language to vent in the comment area, okay?

1. Hunyuan Fairy Sword (main killing, ultimate attack) 2. Tai Chi Moon (has the power to suppress Yin and Yang and stabilize the universe)

I collect a lot of treasures and never use them in fights. Every time I fight, I either beep beep by myself or listen to others beep beep, and I always wait for others to make a move before taking action. The halo of the protagonist is there, otherwise he would have died early, and the realism is not good, so it is not fun. Overall, it is a collection of treasures.

I have seen many readers' suggestions about what shape to cast for the zodiac sign. I know that people don't like it, but I just want to say that considering the protagonist's current situation, casting a sword is not a bad thing, because the protagonist does not lack the power to protect. Casting a sword is just a simple killing weapon, which is in line with the protagonist's current situation. As for the various weapons that everyone talks about, such as the casting of immortal palaces, the casting of tripods, and the casting of some innate spiritual treasures that existed in the prehistoric times, I can only say that they are all available. This is related to the subsequent plot, because after all, the protagonist is not a native of Zhetian, and the protagonist can forge more than one natal weapon. I still say that the plot will not be pushed to the later stage, but the protagonist's cultivation path will be written in detail. Because of the special nature of the protagonist's cultivation path, everything is included, and there are all kinds of weapons.

Emperor Zun has used formations to create a fairy land since ancient times. You just broke through the sea of ​​suffering and reached Mingquan and went out to take the bus? Is Beidou's environment better for cultivation? The cultivation environment of the Immortal Land is such that you can become an emperor even if you stay there. Before level 4, there is no way to accumulate resources. Only after Level 4 do you start to come into contact with Tao. Even if the Jade Butterfly becomes an Immortal King inside, it is only a guarantee. Moreover, the total number of places outside the earth is equivalent to that of an immortal land. I can understand if you say that you sucked up all the aura of immortality in order to shape your body, but are you doing it for the plot?

The purpose of reading fan fiction is to change. You don't have to listen to the cause and effect of their actions. The protagonist can actually travel through time. That achievement is definitely no lower than that of Huang.

It's silly to write about harems in fan fiction, especially this kind of thing. Writing about women is of no use except slowing down the pacing. A female protagonist has to appear many times as a whole. Once there are more female protagonists, it will appear that the book has been writing about women. You have no need for female characters in Golden Finger. Generally, women who can push the plot will not appear obtrusive when writing.

To be popular, harem-style works need to have more pornographic details, which is boring.

There are too few heroines! At least twenty or thirty! An emperor-level ruthless person! Queen Mother of the West! Fairy! Nuwa! All collected! And Liu Shen! Too many!

It's almost 300 chapters and you're still fucking in the Great Sage. Your plug-in is of no use.

I read this book before when I was writing Dual Cultivation. I used to read and subscribe to it frequently, but then I basically stopped reading it after it was written as Eunuch Flow. I didn't expect to read it again. It feels like time passes very quickly.

This book is written in an outline style. Usually there is only a little dialogue between the characters in seven or eight chapters, which is pitiful. The rest is about what the pig's feet are doing and what they have done.

It's too poisonous. The protagonist seems to have no such thing as IQ.

It's too much like the stand-alone version. It only highlights the protagonist, and the protagonist's character is not distinct. It's too boring.

Because I know here that some readers do not understand the protagonist's physique, I will reply to explain the reasons. The origin of the first protagonist's physique: the protagonist's physical body is shaped by the jade disc of creation, and the essence of his physique is the manifestation of the power of the three thousand avenues and the laws of the ancient heaven in the jade disc of creation. Therefore, the world that covers the sky will reject the protagonist. Without the recognition of the world, it is impossible to practice the secret method of body seed. Therefore, it is necessary to absorb the constitution of Zhetian's native people to offset the rejection of the world's laws and obtain the qualifications for cultivation. The second is the physical strength of the protagonist: the protagonist's physique is too heaven-defying, so if it is in a complete state at the beginning, the protagonist's strength is too strong: for example, if the protagonist fights against the Chaos Body or the Innate Sacred Body Taoist Fetus of the same realm, and the protagonist goes up for a second, it is impossible to write. If the protagonist has a complete physique and fights back and forth with Zhetian's several physiques, it will be too cheap. Of course, some readers say that one can continuously transform and improve one's physique through methods such as Xiao Cheng, Dacheng, and Perfection, but the main reason is that the protagonist's physique is not incomplete in fact. It is just because he is excluded from the world and cannot truly reflect it, so he needs to absorb the weakened physique of Zhetian's native land and this rejection. Some people may say that the world that covers the sky can exclude it to this extent, and that the jade plate of creation is too useless. First of all, it is said that the jade plate of creation is not in a complete state. And the essence of this rejection is the world rejection of the overall grand world of the Shetian trilogy. Therefore, in the current state of the Jade Disk of Creation, there is no way to fight against such a majestic world.

I see a lot of comments in the comment area about what kind of path the protagonist will take in the future. A response to the question of whether the protagonist will follow the route and system of the Great Desolate Current First of all, there is a major premise. The jade dish of creation is broken and reorganized. It does not have all the functions. It only has some basic abilities such as: protecting the protagonist. Enlightenment provides help to the protagonist in establishing his own cultivation path, and helps the protagonist to make perfect use of heavenly materials and earthly treasures such as the fairy fire of creation. On the jade plate of creation, there are only the engravings of the Three Thousand Avenues and the Laws of Heaven about the prehistoric world. There is no prehistoric practice system. The protagonist will only develop his own practice based on the Zhetian system and create something similar to the prehistoric practice. But the realm is different from the original prehistoric world, so there is no need to compare the realms of Zhetian and the prehistoric world, and there is no need to start a war. As for the protagonist's physique, the protagonist's chaotic creation body is the final physique. Chaos includes all attribute powers, and creation includes all creation and evolution. The reason why the protagonist absorbs the constitution in the Zhetian system is because the protagonist is an outsider in the Zhetian trilogy, and is suppressed by the laws of the great world encompassed by the entire trilogy. The reason is very simple. The protagonist's physique is too heaven-defying. Therefore, the chaotic body of the suppressed protagonist is incomplete, so other physiques in Zhetian are needed to improve itself. Finally, regarding the protagonist's Taoist companion, I can say clearly that the protagonist has no worries about resources, no worries about power to protect the Tao, and no worries about not being able to go far in practice. He is also a time-traveler who knows the original work, and he is a strong-blooded man, so he will be greedy. As for writing it this way and preventing it from becoming a high-quality book, that is my business. If I choose this way, I will continue to write it like this, and I will bear the consequences myself. I will not weaken the essential situation of Zhetian Fighter just because of this. This is Shuangwen, including the shaping of the training system, and I will not be careless. As long as there are readers who are willing to read it and people who are willing to support it, it's okay. If you don't like this type of book, it's okay, just give up on this book. If you have any questions, you can point them out. I have been improving my capabilities. But please don't leave unpleasant words in the comment area. It's really unnecessary. Novels are meant to bring people happiness, not quarrels. Finally, thank you to the readers who have always supported me. I will also work hard to improve my writing as much as possible.

Because this novel will definitely be written to the realm of Immortal King and Immortal Emperor in the future, so I am here to cultivate for the subsequent realms, so I have to lay the groundwork in the protagonist's early cultivation. The new development of the protagonist after each realm has been cultivated to the extreme is to prepare for the higher realm of cultivation in the future. Therefore, the protagonist's cultivation speed in the early stage will not be very fast. All realm breakthroughs must be based on building a perfect foundation. Therefore, it is not about suppressing the speed of cultivation and digging various pits, but everything is for better development in the future.

Dear book friends, I would like to ask, has anyone read a book in which the protagonist used nine immortal golds to forge the sky-opening axe? Please help.

Yan Ruyu

First-grade, a parallel-imported man-made emperor created by the Heavenly Emperor level or even the Red Dust Immortal to resonate with all the ways of the universe. The laws of the Imperial Way are completely perfect, and he has a complete Imperial Way fruition status, but does not have the blessing of the Tianxin mark. I heard that such a person has appeared in the emperor's heaven. Later, Emperor Ye Tian's Heavenly Court produced a large number of such parallel emperors. Their combat power and lifespan were between the alternative enlightenment and the genuine emperors. With sufficient energy and blood, their combat power was comparable to that of the Forbidden City Supremes who were depleted of energy and blood after restoring the Imperial Path. But this kind of complete imperial path ripened by external forces is basically the existence with the lowest basic combat potential among emperors and emperors. Second level, you don't need at least a Heavenly Emperor-level powerhouse to help you stir up the world. You can trigger the Great Emperor's Tribulation by yourself. However, if there is no one to support you with blood transfusions and full preparations, you will not be able to survive the Great Emperor's Tribulation. Therefore, you must make careful preparations in advance. For example, the master who has beheaded himself as the Supreme comes out of seclusion and uses an immortal weapon to suppress the Tianxin Seal to weaken the Great Emperor's Tribulation and protect his disciples from becoming enlightened. And prepare a large amount of supreme essence and blood, nine-turn elixir, etc. In advance. While going through the tribulation and transforming, he will take medicine to replenish his blood and survive the weakened version of the enlightenment tribulation. In the early and middle stages of mythology when resources were abundant, there were more than a dozen cases of such enlightened beings supported by people. However, since the later stage of mythology, the world has become increasingly dry and withered, and resources are scarce. Such weak enlightened individuals who pile up resources are almost invisible. Third level, there is no need for teachers to repair the imperial path status, go out of the restricted area of ​​life, hold the immortal weapon to immobilize and suppress the mark of Tianxin to weaken the power of the emperor's punishment, which is the enlightenment tribulation with normal power level. However, you still need to prepare a lot of healing and replenishing divine energy such as nine-turn elixir, divine spring and even elixir fruit. Some enlightenments in the mythical years have short lifespans and only live one life. This is the case for many of the practitioners. During the terrifying Enlightenment Tribulation, they were cut to pieces, and their condition was extremely bad. They used all means to save their lives and replenish their divine energy, as well as imperial treasures and forbidden weapons to prevent the calamity, and death puppets. This kind of enlightened people were more common in the mythical era. In the later ancient times, the resources of heaven and earth became more and more scarce and became more and more complicated. Such parallel-imported enlightened people began to become less and less. In the increasingly barren and dilapidated ancient times, they were almost invisible. Forth level, the strength, blood, Dao foundation and other monk elements are much stronger than those of the third level. Of course, they can also survive the normal level of enlightenment tribulation. As for the great medicine for healing injuries and replenishing divine energy, you can bring a large amount with you when you go through the tribulation, but generally you will not take a large amount of medicine to replenish mana after the suffering of the heavenly tribulation. This is the core of the third level enlightenment person. The difference is that they will not consume the elixir of immortality in advance. They still have the possibility of waiting for the life span of the first life to be exhausted before using the elixir of life to live out the second life. However, after they survive the tribulation of the Great Emperor, they are often seriously injured, and they are non-recoverable injuries. Therefore, the lifespan of the first life is very short, often ranging from a thousand to thousands of years, and the condition is very bad. The geniuses of this level, when they were young, experienced the Holy Tribulation, Holy King Tribulation, Great Saint Tribulation and even the Quasi-Emperor Tribulation, although they felt more and more strenuous as they went on, they still did not reach the limit of their abilities. The fifth level can recover injured enlightened people and survive the normal level of enlightenment tribulation. When they endure the enlightenment tribulation, they will be forced to a desperate situation and burn out all the resistance, such as burning longevity. However, the injuries they suffered can be recovered after successfully surviving the enlightenment tribulation, but the burned life span cannot be recovered. Therefore, the emperor's life in the first life is short, often only a few thousand years, but it does not affect the longevity in the second life after taking the elixir, which is basically more than 10,000 years. Level 6, those who have attained enlightenment without losing their longevity, endured a very difficult transformation during the tribulation of enlightenment, and were seriously injured after the tribulation, but with their physical strength and Dao foundation, during the long and painful transformation of enlightenment, they have not been forced to burn and sacrifice their first life span to fight to the death. Therefore, it generally or basically does not affect the first life span of the enlightened person. After attaining enlightenment, it can be recuperated for a period of time. Seventh level, to save human tribulations, a protector is needed. As the vast universe that covers the sky becomes more and more dry and dilapidated, the monks themselves gradually become each other's great medicine. For example, in this enlightenment tribulation, they gradually begin to face more and more human tribulation attacks. While the monks are suffering under the fire of the enlightenment tribulation, they also have to deal with the attacks and interference from the supreme beings in the restricted area. The seventh-level tribulation relievers are just strong enough to withstand the enlightenment tribulation, which will not burn life span, and will often not relapse. Injured, or only slightly injured, but with their basic combat prowess, they often need to concentrate all their energy and strength on overcoming the tribulation of enlightenment. Once at this time, an enlightened person of the same generation or even a supreme being in the restricted area comes to attack, Under the double attack of human tribulation and heavenly tribulation, people often fail to save the tribulation. Therefore, many enlightened people in ancient times would go to the wilderness on the eve of their enlightenment to kill all the enlightened contemporaries who might interfere with their concentration on overcoming the tribulation. As the environment of the world in the ancient times became increasingly bad, and the immortal essences such as magical elixirs and the remaining immortal substances in the major restricted areas of life continued to be consumed, the supreme beings in the restricted areas had an increasing desire to hunt the geniuses who were in the world during the tribulation of enlightenment. Therefore, the emperors in the ancient period basically started at the seventh level. Eighth grade, often before attaining enlightenment, have defeated all directions, are invincible in the entire universe, and have established the position of supreme being in this world. They can survive the human tribulations of the restricted area, the true form of the Supreme Being, and the unborn human tribulations plus the imperial tribulations, which is the common level of the ancient emperors. Ninth level, even if the supreme being of the restricted area appears in person to block the way to hunt, he can often resist or at least escape. After someone has stabilized the throne of the enlightened person, he will often be the strongest among the enlightened people in the past. So the Forbidden Zone Supremes must be cautious when hunting for geniuses of this level. Once the hunting fails, preventing people from becoming enlightened means forging a deadly feud. Tenth level, even if the supreme body has been fully sublimated and blocked the path, the prodigies of this level can survive the great emperor tribulation while facing off against the supreme beings who have been born and at least dealt with. Without escaping, they can fight against the enlightenment tribulation and confront the supreme beings in the restricted area of ​​​​rebirth at the same time. If the old masters in the restricted area do not block the way, they can easily survive the great emperor's tribulation without any injuries. So such an enlightened person can basically surrender without a fight when triggering the enlightenment tribulation, letting the veterans in the restricted area of ​​life know that there is a high probability that they can't stop it and stop blocking the way. Even if they stand outside the Beidou Star Territory to survive the tribulation, it is equivalent to setting off thunder king firecrackers at the bedroom door of the sleeping supreme beings in the restricted area. The supreme beings in the restricted area often just grit their teeth and curse a few words, instead of blocking the way and seeking revenge. So for the genius of this level to achieve enlightenment, the main goal is to achieve it smoothly and naturally. At most, the enlightened generals of his contemporaries who had expelled the throne with him for one life were unwilling to accept it and came to block the way. Of course, the outcome was that they were easily killed without any suspense. Eleventh level, the enlightened ones at this level can already be called quasi-celestial emperors. On the eve of their enlightenment, they basically have unlimited access to the basic energy, blood, and combat power of the great emperor, and the power of the enlightenment tribulation they induce is also obviously beyond the level of normal enlightened persons. After enlightenment, due to excessive consumption of the heaven and earth and the universe, the universe will be in silence for about 100,000 years. The twelfth grade, the ordinary Heavenly Emperor level, benchmarks against Ye Fan, who has become an emperor before others in the first or second year and became a Taoist with the ancient holy body. During the tribulation of enlightenment, the elixir human face is provided as standard to block the path. After attaining enlightenment, the consumption of the universe is so great that it can make the entire universe silent for at least 200,000 years. Thirteenth level, powerful Heavenly Emperor level, benchmarking the enlightenment of the chaotic body or the ancient holy body's original life force and blood after a life and death nirvana, sublimation and transformation, that is, Ye Fan who lived the third life. This is also the initial and strongest enlightened being that can be born in the vast universe of Zhetian.

How come I've listened to more than 20 chapters and still don't have a sense of immersion? I can't stand it without a sense of immersion 😭

One of the two or three people with the highest achievements among the nine holy bodies in ancient times ——The seventh Great Saint He Jiusi This man was a playboy when he was young. His father was a quasi-emperor of the human race, and his mother was also a quasi-emperor of the human race. Both of his parents were mortal bodies. They met Luangu Emperor at the end of his life, grew up together, and returned to Beidou together. This human quasi-emperor couple created a human holy land. The Quasi Emperor and his wife had a son at an old age, and actually gave birth to a natural first-generation Ancient Holy Body. When he was born, he had a rough life and almost all his relatives, friends, children and nephews died, leaving almost only one person. The Ancient Emperor also came, hugged him with his own hands, and soon accepted him as a disciple. But no one expected that this holy body was a perverted person who did not seek to make progress. Call him bad, but he was not a bad person. He was just perverted and did not practice hard. In other words, his personality was very similar to Jia Baoyu. He could not bear the hardship of practice and hung out with a group of women all day long. So his cultivation speed in his early years was far less than expected. He barely became a saint when he was five hundred years old, a holy king when he was more than a thousand years old, and a great saint when he was three thousand years old. Based on his discipleship and family background as well as his personal talents and understanding, this achievement cannot be justified in any case. His master was Luan Gu, the great emperor of the human race at that time. His parents were both quasi-emperors of the human race who had participated in the imperial struggle. He had the blood of two quasi-emperors, and was favored by God, who gave him the origin of the first-generation holy body that was born and raised by the earth. His own talents and understanding are also very good. Among the nine great saints in ancient times, he is definitely one of the best. He is not stupid. The reason why it has been three thousand years and he has not yet achieved greatness, and he is not even a quasi-emperor, is simply because he is lazy. He was very thoughtful in his early years, and if he could spend even one or two points on his cultivation, it would be a waste. He has more than 400 wives and concubines and more than 8,000 children. His lifelong dream is to have 500 wives and concubines and tens of thousands of children. As a result, suddenly, Master Luan Gu was besieged by the Forbidden City Supreme. Although he managed to drag away many powerful enemies before his death, clearing many obstacles for his future growth, he also died in the battle on the mythical battlefield. Both the quasi-emperor's parents died in the battle, and his wife, concubines, and children all died in the dark turmoil. Only he escaped and survived due to his master's advance arrangements. In the days to come, he believed that as long as he cultivated hard and attained the Holy Body soon, and could help his master on the mythical battlefield, the ancient Emperor would not have fallen. Of course, it was more likely that he would be surrounded and killed by the Supremes of the Forbidden Zone in advance, because the Supremes of the Forbidden Zone would never allow a current emperor and a Great Holy Body to join forces for a lifetime. For the next eight hundred years, he fled while practicing hard. As a disciple of the ancient emperor, this man was very good at escaping and hiding. From the Great Sage to the Great Holy Body, it took only eight hundred years. The Holy Body was completed at the age of less than 4,000 years old. After that, there was a series of divine battles that were engraved in ancient history. The first battle was to survive the Dacheng Holy Body Tribulation while killing a Dacheng Hegemon in his prime who came to block the way. The starry sky was shocked at that time. Soon after Dacheng, he went to find the Hegemon Ancestral Star to settle the cause and effect, but was unable to find it because the Hegemon Ancestral Star was hidden in advance. However, in the later years of the first life, two more Dacheng Hegemons came to the door. One of them was killed again, and the other Hegemon Ancestor escaped in hiding. Just based on these two divine battles, you will know the gold content of this Dacheng Holy Body. After he completed the Holy Body, he was going to avenge his master who was besieged and fell. He first went to attack the underworld. The Supreme Lord of the underworld broke the seal and went to fight. In the first battle, both sides were injured. He retreated to recuperate. He reached his peak state when he was more than 6,000 years old in his first life. He wanted to fight the underworld again, but the underworld actually ran away and hid. He then began to fight in other restricted areas of life. During this period, he killed an alternative enlightenment-level restricted area with great cultivation, and forged many grudges with the major restricted areas of life. When he was more than 8,000 years old in his first life, he killed a Dacheng Perfection Holy Spirit who was born to cause trouble. When he was 10,400 years old in his first life, he was approached by two Dacheng Hegemons. He defeated the opponents one against two and even killed one person. The world thought that he would end there, but he actually died and was reborn, transformed from Nirvana, and lived out his second life. In the prime of his second life, he broke into the Divine Ruins and forced the Forbidden City Supreme to extort a flat peach elixir fruit. In the second life, he lived fifteen thousand years. When he was more than 9,000 years old in his second life, he dragged to death an extremely sublimated Supreme who was born to cause chaos. His energy and blood fighting power was extremely close to that of a genuine and normal enlightened person. He was able to fight back and forth with the Extremely Sublimated Forbidden Supreme. Then he waited for the Extremely Sublimated Forbidden Supreme to fall out of the imperial realm due to his old age and blood exhaustion. When his opponent looked desperate, he started to fight back and completed the counterattack. In the later years of his second life, he was seriously injured in a sneak attack by an immortal Taoist armed with an immortal sword. A fight ensued. In a desperate situation, he was forced to take the elixir of flat peach hundreds of years in advance during the fierce battle to survive the third life. After that, he injured the immortal Taoist and forced him to retreat. He originally wanted to kill the Immortal Taoist completely, but he allowed the Immortal Taoist to escape and hide. He was so furious that he could not be found anywhere in the sky, on the earth, or in all the worlds. He broke into the Immortal Mountain without mercy and forced several Supremes of the Immortal Mountain to surrender. After a fight, he retreated with minor injuries. In the third life, he really came to dominate the universe. Although he still did not achieve enlightenment in the third life, his weapon, the divine halberd made of Dao Tribulation gold, transformed into the ultimate imperial weapon before him. In the third life, he lived a total of 16,000 years, which was no shorter than the normal life span of the ancient emperor. In the middle age of the third life, another golden age came. The eighth generation of the Dacheng Holy Body was born. The Wushi Emperor also attained enlightenment in this life. He then completely retired to seclusion and proclaimed himself the source of immortality. Seventy thousand years ago when Ye Fan appeared, that is, in the post-desolate ancient era after the traces of the Great Emperor Wu Shi were completely gone, he broke out of the seal and wanted to cut off the origin of the holy body and turn it into a mortal body in order to live out the fourth life and at the same time prove the Tao and become the emperor in the fourth life, but he failed. He failed to live out the fourth life, but died on the spot. His cold remains were put into a coffin by the golden-haired Dacheng Holy Body that the empress in the ancient forbidden land had sealed in front of the imperial palace. She was buried deep in the ancient forbidden land. The story of the seven generations of Dacheng Holy Body came to a complete end. ………… The above is an outline of a pure Zhetian fanfic (not involving Perfect World and Holy Ruins). What is the outline of the author's storyline? Please help with a review, please.

I can't stand it anymore, the sentences are always followed by ah, yo, hee hee and so on.