Fall in Love After Marriage

I think the author has multiple female protagonists or a tendency to speculate in stocks. My suggestion is to have a single female protagonist, otherwise it will be easy to start high and then go low.

Just post a short long comment. First of all, to summarize this novel, I can say that it is quite excellent We can see the first three golden chapters. In order to attract readers, the author writes about the existence of the system and introduces the early plot of the story: it is this variety show, and the male and female protagonists are explained at the same time. He cleverly used the genre of this variety show to weaken our sense of God's perspective as readers and replace it with the audience's sense of expectation. At the same time, he grasped the core competitiveness and sprinkled a lot of sugar to reduce conflicts. Coupled with the skilled narrative rhythm, before the 30th chapter, the reading was quite slow, with a strong sense of substitution, and there were many excellent descriptions. I think this is a typical and classic way of writing pure love. After Chapter 31, the author may gradually add conflicts, break the shells of the male and female protagonists step by step, and then conduct a period of sugar-spreading. This period is in the style of a light novel. I personally feel that the previous part is carefully crafted. This part is more relaxed, which may be related to the author's mentality. It seems obvious but not abrupt. The quality of this paragraph can basically be guaranteed, because the author's status will last for a period of time at least. If the author can perform well after this, it is not impossible to write a lv4 book (see daily life, by the way, the author can go and read the later part of that book, which is of some reference) Also, this book should not be too long, it ends where it should, and intentional delay will seriously reduce the perception Final PS: It is recommended to delete the sentence about feeding the kitten, which will affect the coherence.

The writing is good, and it doesn't look like a newcomer at all. The author should tell you honestly, is it some veteran who created a small account to fry fish?

The front is very good, I've seen Chapter 78, but that's it! To be honest, it was a natural thing, but the author deliberately pushed it. It is really disgusting. I deliberately went to the back and made an initial order just to comment on it. I really don't like it! !

I really don't want to complain, let's briefly talk about what I feel is the poison in Chapter 78 To put it simply, before and after Chapter 78, it mainly tells the story of the female protagonist taking the initiative to express her affection for the male protagonist, and then being politely rejected by the male protagonist knowing full well. The problem is that a normal love relationship requires timely feedback and maintenance by both parties, rather than one party taking the initiative and being politely rejected, calming down and then trying again... This is called stalking at best, but at worst...Isn't that a licking of a dog? And after this layer of filter is broken, if you read the original text again, you will find that: the male protagonist knows very well that they are only married by contract, and its essence is a working relationship. To put it bluntly, they are just colleagues, and they will be strangers after filming. The heroine seemed to be stuck in the situation and couldn't get out. She really took the gentleness and thoughtfulness shown by the hero in the movie as that he liked me. To put it bluntly, the heroine has very little contact with people and has few friends because of her high degree of mysophobia, so she quickly falls under the male protagonist's acting skills and is given up at the speed of light. You must know that it was only seven or eight days since they met! The "cold goddess" that the author strives to represent has become a "love-starved girl", and I ask you if you want to be slapped in the face. After the heroine finished speaking, she looked at the hero. He declined the heroine even though he clearly knew that she liked him. The reason was that he "didn't like her enough to spend the rest of his life together." To put it simply, he was "more than a friend, but not a lover." Uh... What's the difference between this and "I only see you as my brother"? Why does it smell like green tea? If you say no! The male protagonist's kindness to the female protagonist is all work and is arranged by the crew. Then we have to talk about Li Zimei. During the filming and broadcasting of the show (and it is also a marriage and love show), the male protagonist goes out to eat or watch movies alone with other women at night. What kind of behavior is this? Even if you don't like the heroine, can you have some professionalism and respect the crew? Do you really not know what the consequences will be if your behavior is filmed and posted online? Will it have any impact on the reputation of the crew? You know very well. But after the female protagonist reminded her, the male protagonist's attitude was still disapproving and indifferent. To put it bluntly, he doesn't care if the crew's efforts will be in vain due to his personal reasons. This is the male protagonist: just a refined egoist. This is the problem with Chapter 78. It is not that there is shit hidden in the honey, making it difficult to watch. But suddenly the sweet filter broke, and people realized: the whole text is not a golden boy and beautiful girl, which makes people envious; it is just a scumbag and a bitch, lock me up quickly. Speaking of which, this actually makes the male protagonist and female protagonist more compatible (laughing)

I haven't watched it, but I've watched it several times. Is there really a variety show where two people who don't know each other directly get married, kiss and sleep in the same bed? I read the reviews and many people said it was good, but I just thought it was weird and too fake, so I didn't have the desire to click on it. Can anyone objectively tell me how this book is?

Single heroines remember to interact more and don't listen to them. It's easy to give up if the harem has no future. Just insist on learning from each other's strengths

With your attitude, children will be abandoned like this 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

How dare the author take a break? Now is the age of struggle, shouldn't it be updated 24 hours a day?

It looks good, it must have a single heroine! Beg on your knees! ! !

The author stopped writing due to work reasons!

This is actually the first book? Does the author have any other vests? I want to read other books, but this update is too slow.

It was well written, but it was a pity that it ended so suddenly.

Don't have an affair with Shen Liyue! ! !

You won't want a eunuch 🤐

Spend 10 to tell the newcomers, you will know that this book is a bit disgusting when you read Chapter 78. That's it. I saw a lot of comments saying that Chapter 78 was abandoned. I understand.

Who is this big guy who opened a trumpet 🙂

What 78, I don't feel it, I think the author's writing is quite good. It is about daily love, not so bloody, and gives people a touch of warmth. It is worth reading. Highly recommended😍😍😍

Md, the writing is so delicate and good, 🌿

It only costs ten yuan to order the whole thing, can you do that, Xigou?

What a pity, I suddenly remembered this book today

Just keep it up and finish the book...

I am a pseudo-single heroine➕eunuch, I suggest you quit. It still looks good from the front, except for the character collapse.

I don't know if anyone has read it, but it's really a pity that the author made this book 📖😭😭😭😭😭😭

This is an article that I am willing to pay to read the genuine article. Does the author have any other novels?

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The front part is really beautiful, both the heroine and the hero look very sweet,