This Wizard Is so Fierce

Let me tell you, because I am listening to a book, it is very clear. I feel that the author is still very good, but there are two problems One is that the protagonist is essentially a civilian, but in the article it is almost like the reincarnation of an old monster. It's difficult to put oneself in. The protagonist is very ideologically placed on the reader. But the problem is that when reading, it is the reader who takes on the role of the protagonist, not the protagonist who takes the place of the reader. The second is that currently, for the protagonist's relationship network, in a simplified way, it means those who are standing by the protagonist's side and those who are not. At present, it seems that there are almost no friends, and the only girl has no pretext, just a good impression out of thin air. In other words, there is no one standing beside the protagonist, and there is also the quasi-wizard, who was good at first, but then a deus ex machina appeared out of thin air, and the opposing villain appeared out of thin air. A suggestion: for wizard novels, because you are from a commoner (the adoptive father feels there is a problem), you must have that level of world view. For example, when you meet a noble, you are not afraid of anything. You can say that it is young and knows nothing, but it also feels very mature, which is very contradictory. . In addition, for the relationship network, the more friends the better, try not to have villains in the early stage, or don't be so profitable for villains, because after all, the protagonist will grow up, and it is not very good to have a villain after growing up. It is recommended to connect the villains in the book later. The author usually has a manuscript, and it is recommended to add some big villains in the middle to upgrade the small villains and connect them. Let me talk about what I think is the best wizarding novel. It should be the one with many friends in the front, but just like reality, friends will gradually become fewer and even become enemies. Stop talking and go to work.

Seeing that the natives don't have a sense of representation, it's better for newcomers to just follow the crowd.

You have a woman before you become a wizard. Do you want to write about a harem?