Detective Conan: The Dark Age

After basically finishing it, let's talk about some pros and cons. The author has been talking about why so few people read it. After reading it, I felt that it was mainly because of the author that this book was too bland. Let's talk about the advantages first. The logic is self-consistent and not childish. The story is very complete and it can indeed be said to be a Conan for adults. But the shortcomings are also too obvious, which makes it extremely difficult to enter. The relationships between the characters are complicated and there are many personal settings, but there is no further explanation. There are too few inner descriptions of the characters, and the whole story is just reporting, resulting in unclear character characteristics. I didn't feel the climax after reading the first volume. It was like someone was just telling you what to eat today, what to eat tomorrow, whether the food is delicious, without mentioning any characteristics. Logically speaking, Scotland's death should be regarded as a flashy one, but the result is still mediocre. When people take photos, they will highlight the layering and priority of a photo. The same should be true for novels. You have to use words to describe the layering, catch people's attention, and outline the story in the reader's mind. However, the author estimates that it is just a messy puzzle with unclear story lines and unclear character outlines. Even Gin and Belmod, who are familiar to everyone, have become like template characters. This is not a problem that can be solved by just giving a character relationship diagram. Give me some advice, the author, you should build a template for the character, that is, perfect the character. It is actually difficult to write the daily life of the black side. You can make the daily life of the red side warm and funny. On the contrary, the black side can resonate much less. The protagonist is pure black. As the author, you should think about how to arouse everyone's resonance with the character, how to identify with him, and how to discover his bright spots. These must be described by you, not summarized by you.

The author actually writes very well. The reason why so few people read it, I guess, is because the author didn't follow the plot-following style of a fan. People who read fan fiction often feel a sense of relief that they know the plot in advance. What they usually want to see is how the author "adapts" the plot. They actually don't want to waste their brains. The author basically did not write any original plot, and judging from the current development of characters and story, even if we enter the timeline of the original plot, the story will definitely be completely different. It's normal that few people read it, because this book is not a fanfic at all. Except for some character backgrounds, this book is completely original. The author actually wrote really well, but maybe he put the book in the wrong area.

I didn't figure out how to include illustrations in the article, so I'll put them here first. The compression is too blurry!

According to my little personal understanding, such a structure has been established for those people in the grassroots organization (without the wine name). Applies to Volume 2 C14 onwards. I hope the way the chart is made can help you understand the current plot better.

I haven't seen it on the shelves so far, but I feel that it is well written. Only in the author's writing can we really see a huge and complex transnational criminal group, rather than a black organization like Qingshan who plays house. By the way, Qingshan has really done everything to make money in recent years. Not to mention the various main plot conflicts, it is like squeezing out toothpaste, and the publication is suspended at every turn. 🙂🙂

Happy New Year to everyone reading this book

The writing is very good. A pure black Shirley has always been relatively rare, not to mention an online IQ. The development of the plot is full of twists and turns.

It seems that everyone has a pure black dream 🙂, come on

From what I saw in the new book, I am a little interested in pure black.

Let me ask, since it is pure black, is it the kind of cool story that kills the characters on the red side indiscriminately? In the ending, will the protagonist win and kill everyone on the red side Or will the protagonist be defeated as a boss and then be taken to prison and sit back and watch the organization be disintegrated? (This question may not be answered to prevent spoilers)