Gu Zhen's Journey to the Heavens

Obviously we can solve the problem of food and drink in Ranch Story, and then improve our strength in Diablo. We have to bring Huashan with us, and Huashan is okay, but we bring someone who is stronger than the protagonist. The uniqueness of the protagonist is broken. Logically speaking, there is even a risk of being replaced by Feng Qingyang. In an instant, I no longer have the desire to read. It is a pity. It was originally a good book. I have read books for so many years, and this one is the only one that is so bold, alas.

There is a plot that is poisonous to some people, taking people through time travel

Are you used to being alone? Traveling alone? You are creating a copy in a group! ! !

Watch it well. Chapter 18 suddenly gives me a chance to take people through time. Alas😰

To be honest, I saw the chapter Returning to the Ming Dynasty. Let's talk about my feelings. I feel that the writing of Diablo at the beginning is a bit verbose. I suggest that the upgrade of Diablo's monsters be simplified and the protagonist be written as a reborn Xiaoao. After all, the dialects in ancient China are very different. As soon as you travel through the past, there will be no spoken language, clothing, and road guides. Just ask for directions when you come up. See if someone turns around to report to the official to receive the reward. The subject matter is still very interesting to me. The development of druid, martial arts, farming and chicken raising is still interesting.

It's complicated. You can't just use a system. It requires both darkness and martial arts power. It doesn't look good at all. Why drag people when you can have just one person. Can't you just use the ones you cultivated yourself? Why are you in such a hurry? If you bring in powerful people, then whoever decides next will have to follow the arrangements. There's something wrong with the logic. When something good like this happens, why not treat the protagonist like a pig? As long as you take care of yourself, who will cooperate with you?

The writing is quite good, but don't insert some children's games randomly. Photovoltaic Huashan will understand when you upgrade and form a team. After playing one game to practice, it will be less messy to play other games.

I would like to ask why the protagonist came back to Swordsman? Isn't it good to upgrade multiple times in the dark world? Is it because the equipment is no longer good or the power system is not high enough? It's better to upgrade more in the dark world. The world of Smile Jianghu is like picking up sesame seeds and losing the watermelon. There is also druid transformation. If you are so afraid of being regarded as a monster, then don't choose the druid way and directly become a mage to increase your combat effectiveness. Why do you care about his mess? The most important thing is to save life. Are other people's opinions useful? Can it be eaten? And what's the use of going to Mount Huashan to learn martial arts? Druid is a profession that can be regarded as a legal system. It can be used in melee combat, long-range spell attacks, and can also be used as a summoner. It is not as powerful as martial arts. I feel that this routine is a bit familiar to you. You were a time traveler in the past, and then the first world was the world of martial arts. This is simply a routine. Moreover, learning martial arts requires diligent practice and use, related information, and memorization of Taoist scriptures and related terminology. You have no chance of learning martial arts for three to five years.

Is Master not good? Why choose a Druid? What's the use of respecting life if you don't have the strength to face danger?

I searched and found that there are very few dark-themed books nowadays and even fewer good ones. It doesn't matter that many people criticize you as a druid, this is a profession that exists in other people's games. If you want to go to the natural department, I respect and understand it, so don't worry about whether they must choose Master or something. Not to mention that multiple accounts can be created for one game. You can practice both German and French. But the prerequisite is that you have written Darkness well. Search for more combinations and data of Rune Words. Write more about equipment amulets and so on. You can mix in a lot of words. You are entering the world of Anhui directly, and there is no difference between easy difficulty and hell difficulty. You can kill any elite monsters, and the best equipment is reasonable. You can be bolder. Just put three broken emeralds on the whole garbage weapon, and you can easily clear the first world. It's a bit slow to level up when four people play together. You have to be level 16 after playing the first world, otherwise you won't be able to beat the second world after it's released. Even if you don't get good grades, you can still make a lot of money. What's more, if you write well and use Braille, you may not be able to make money. Come on, author.

Taking people through time travel is actually nothing. A master is a teacher for one day and a father for life. There is nothing to guard against between family members. But the unclear main line and inexplicable branch lines make people confused. The farm branch can also be said to provide resources. What is the Three Kingdoms branch? There is no image anymore. Also, Diablo is a world of high demons, filled with angels and demons. How can you use the skills to defeat demons to defeat the nameless dragons in a world of low martial arts? Still need to chase and escape. Are you still using Druid's fully automatic baby? Does the author think the two are comparable?

If you have written this far, why? If you don't involve the court, the people and experts of the court will not do more than you. Just say that you discovered the ancient Cave Tian Er and pull out some things that do not exist in this world. You can also use immortality as an excuse to give these radishes to this world for planting. It will not be more than you can harvest.

Ah~ Why did you arrange to travel around the world with Huashan? Didn't you agree to be alone, alone? This is a bit hard to accept, but there is a story about a person. For me, this novel is quite good. Let's see what happens next. Ah~ I came in after seeing the introduction, but when I saw someone wearing it, I felt a bit cheated~

Have you considered the readers' feelings before you are so slow?

So if I were Yue Buqun, I would kill the protagonist and occupy his computer. Everyone should be okay with this. It's a childish way of writing.

The flowing water of the heavens is irreconcilable

The subject matter is relatively novel, and if your writing skills are not broken, it is still worth reading.

Alas, I have to give up writing a book. Taking people through time travel is the biggest pitfall... Not many people can accept it...

I don't know if the author did it on purpose or if he really doesn't understand. If you ask the protagonist to ask Nibel if he understands Chinese, it's almost as stupid as asking them if they know who their biological father is.

Let's see how we write it in the future. The most fatal problem is that the protagonist is a disciple, which means he is a bit controlled by others.

I remember that there was a book with a similar plot to this before, but the name of that book was orientalized when it transformed the abilities in Diablo into Swordsman.

I wipe. Look at the chapter title. The combination of martial arts and Diablo 2? Very novel. Collected. Come on, author

In addition to the author's thoughts, I feel that I also see some metaphors and in-depth novels through the novel.

Not bad, not bad, very interesting writing. Monthly tickets are given, come on

Updates resumed? I thought it was a eunuch

I will follow you when you have written 300,000 words. I am going to follow you to read, I am afraid you will run away first.

The plot is novel and very interesting.

Fortunately, the protagonist's growth is too slow. As for the author, do you want a martial arts ending or a fantasy ending? For the martial arts ending, the power system of Diablo 2 is okay, but for the fantasy ending, the power system of Diablo 2 is a bit weak. And the protagonist's golden finger is not written clearly. Can he only travel to the game world? Or as long as you have it on your computer, you can travel through movies, novels, animations and games, and the work is just a coordinate information for retrieving and filtering the world? Also, if you travel to the modern world, can the games and other works downloaded from that parallel world be used as coordinates to travel through the world?

It looks good. Please keep updating the author. Everyone has different preferences. Don't worry too much about other negative reviews.

You can try the Legend of Sword and Fairy series, Golden Book of Legends, and Legend of Wulin heroes.