The King's Avatar: A Fresh Start

The relationship between Tao and Su was really broken. No matter what, Tao's kindness to the Su brothers and sisters is not an exaggeration. Su and her sister came out of the orphanage and were taken in by Tao. Su and Ye wanted to play professionally and Tao sold half of the Internet cafe support. After breaking up with Ye, Su Mucheng went to help Ye every day and didn't say a word about her own guild Tao. No matter what, she couldn't be like the enemy you wrote.

After reading Chapter 2, I have some thoughts. The first chapter feels a bit inexplicable. I don't think I need to explain things that have nothing to do with the game. How should I put it? There are two ways to write fan fiction. Nowadays, the common writing method is to bring in the original characters and follow the plot of the original work; there is also a less popular writing method that is to completely abandon or have as little contact with the original characters as possible, only retaining the entire world view, and the plot and characters are completely original. When I started reading the first chapter, I thought it was the second way of writing, but when I read the second chapter, I realized that it was not. In my opinion, this is completely unnecessary to explain. Reborn into another body, I also think this setting is a bit unsatisfactory. It would be better not to be reborn, and just set Su Muqiu not to die, but to become a vegetative state, sleep for a few years, then wake up, resume training, get on track, and then get to the point, so as to avoid embarrassment. This kind of setting where people are fighting for their lives in this world, if it is not a fantasy and suspense work, the most taboo thing is to meet an old friend. It's hard for me to find a novel that I can read. That's not to say it's bad. The simplest logic can't be handled well. Personally, I really can't continue reading.

The protagonist you wrote has no trace of Su Muqiu at all.

I almost couldn't hold my breath in the first chapter. Please let the author know more about the army. Doctoral students, it is encouraged to want to go to the army, but you actually want to be a soldier? What kind of special forces are you talking about? Do you really think that special forces are so powerful? Even if you have been a soldier for fifteen years, you are still just a soldier. There is a huge difference in military and administrative status and treatment from an officer. Even if you see a young second lieutenant who has just graduated from the military academy, you must salute with a question mark first. If you have the qualifications for a doctorate, why don't you take a special recruitment? After the assessment, you will be an officer. If you really like the special forces, you can serve in the special forces after wearing four pockets.

Although I also hate Tao Xuan, I personally feel that as Su Muqiu, he would not be so specific. Just like Ye Xiu, he and Tao Xuan did not completely break up in the end even if they parted ways. Human feelings cannot be black and white. No matter how excessive Tao Xuan was to Ye Xiu, at least he was very kind to the Su family brothers and sisters, and he did not feel sorry for them.

I only learn to code when I get home from get off work every day. The code was 6,000 in one night. After posting at 12 o'clock, I went to bed. I'm in a hurry, and there are often typos and incoherence. Generally, it will be modified during the day. I would like to apologize to the readers who read this in the middle of the night or early in the morning.

Come on, as long as you keep writing, one day the clouds will clear away. My book has six to seven million words, and 20 of them have been ordered. Now it's almost a million words, and only over 100 have been ordered But just stick with it, don't give up on your fantasy.

I feel more comfortable with the current rhythm and daily life, so let's work hard together!

As a game gun master, if he goes to serve in the army after retiring, will it still affect the resentment of full-time fans? Let me ask in advance? Readers are welcome to speak enthusiastically.

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