The King's Avatar: A Fresh Start

The relationship between Tao and Su really fell apart. No matter what, Tao's kindness to the Su siblings was immeasurable! Su and her sister were taken in by Tao after leaving the orphanage. When Su and Ye wanted to pursue professional gaming, Tao sold half of his internet cafe to support them.

After reading two chapters, I have a few thoughts. The first chapter felt a bit inexplicable; I think it's unnecessary to explain things that aren't related to the game. Well, there are two ways to write fan fiction. The most common way now is to incorporate the original characters and follow the original plot; the other, less common way is to completely abandon or minimize contact with the…

The protagonist you wrote has absolutely no resemblance to Su Muqiu.

I almost lost my composure in the first chapter; please, author, do some research on the military. It's commendable that a PhD student wants to join the military, but you actually want to enlist? And what's with the special forces? Do you really think special forces are some kind of high-class elite?

Although I also dislike Tao Xuan, I personally think that Su Muqiu wouldn't target him like that. Just like Ye Xiu, even though he and Tao Xuan parted ways, they didn't completely break off relations. People's feelings can't be black and white. No matter how bad Tao Xuan was to Ye Xiu, at least he was very kind to the Su siblings and didn't wrong them.

I only start writing after I get home from get off work each day. I wrote 6,000 words in one night, scheduled the post to be published at midnight, and then went to sleep. I was in a rush, so there were often typos and awkward phrasing. It usually takes until daytime to make changes. I apologize to readers who read this in the middle of the night or early morning.

Keep writing! The day will come when you finally see the light at the end of the tunnel. My book, with 600,000 to 700,000 words, was signed with a contract and received 20 first-day subscriptions. Now it's almost a million words, but only has a little over 100 average daily subscriptions. But just keep going, don't give up on your dreams.

The current pace and daily routine are quite comfortable for me. Let's keep going!

As a skilled gunner in the game, would retiring and then serving in the military necessarily affect the dislike of fans of the game? I'm asking this question in advance. Readers are welcome to participate and share their thoughts.

Is this a procedure performed during paternity leave?