My Doomsday Begins in the Middle Ages

Thoughts after reading, or questions after reading, suspected spoilers 1. Basic setting of the worldview This book currently does not follow the explanation of magic in other mainstream medieval novels to explain how people in the Middle Ages resisted zombies. Instead, it chooses to change the basic natural laws, such as "time". Although I don't quite understand why the growth rate of crops becomes faster after the time change, while the growth rate of human beings becomes slower (shown in the longer life span), this unconventional setting is still relatively fresh although there is a threshold for understanding. 2. Points of incomprehension, or poisonous points 1. Scientist Why can the soul of that scientist enter the system and have certain permissions (referring to changing the so-called system space, scanning specific materials, and organisms). Of course, this can later be explained by the fact that when the time machine breaks through the dimensional wall, the scientist's soul is infected with certain traits br>2. System Space and Protagonist Permissions I have not seen the protagonist actively entering the system space. It seems that the protagonist cannot actively enter that space, nor can he actively scan a certain creature. All these must be achieved with the help of an assistant. So if the protagonist has not met that fellow countryman, what position should this system space play in the system? Is it a bit redundant, as if it was born for that scientist. 3. Plot (0) Identity of the protagonist When loading the horse-and-blade game (Chapter 17), the system integrated the game with the world and completed the basic identity for the protagonist (the son of a certain baron who escaped, and later inherited the family territory of Greystone Town) But in the latest chapter, he faked his identity when entering the city. Identity is a branch of the Fayed family (currently it seems to be an extremely powerful business family). It would be fine if the forged identity was the protagonist's own idea, but this identity was thought up by a scientist who has lived in this different world for more than twenty years. Doesn't he know the strength of the Fayed family? I really can't understand using a fake identity that carries great risks when you have an identity. Or is this just to easily exchange the gold tickets in your hand for gold coins? 4. Plot (1) Meeting the locals for the first time When you don't know what the situation in the other world is like, it would be too reckless to kill the caravan in one go instead of imprisoning it for information. At least one person should be left alive to interrogate the information. Of course, from a plot perspective, this is to introduce the first SSR-level character, but it is a bit of a forced intelligence 5. Plot (2) Basic Setting of the Protagonist The protagonist in the book is set as a senior doomsday believer. He has stored a large amount of supplies for the possible arrival of unknown disasters and spent millions to build a safe cellar in the world before the time travel. He also has specialized training in wilderness survival skills. However, the protagonist's force value (physical fitness) is written as being unable to defeat an old man in his 70s or 80s. Does outdoor survival training not exercise physical fitness, or does the protagonist believe that a healthy and strong physique is not important in a disaster? 6. Plot (3) Games included in the computer The protagonist is a doomsday and disaster believer, but there are few games on the computer with the background of post-apocalypse and survival after disaster. It seems that only one game called Billions of Zombies has a similar background (I haven't played it, so I'm guessing). There are no games such as "Forest" and "Resident Evil" that are similar to wild survival and zombie backgrounds. Instead, they are all rts fps RPG games. Of course I know that the embodiment of the game I proposed will not be of much help to the protagonist, but the system does not list it in the list of embodiments, which has a slight impact on the protagonist's image 7. Basic setting lifespan The book is set to be one year old after ten years, and the appearance is synchronized with the age (as it should be), which involves an experience issue. Even a young man who appears to be in his twenties has spent more than two hundred years, which is enough for him to experience a lot of things. In other words, the people in the book should be more mature and sophisticated compared to people with normal life spans, because of their different experiences, but this is not reflected in the book 8. Plot setting Scavengers (evolved) The description in the book of the two scavengers (Lilith and Lilia) that I have come into contact with so far is that their agility and strength exceed 2000 points. I remember that the strength value of a normal person is 1, so is the value of this scavenger too abnormal? If such a creature exists, how did human beings in the Middle Ages manage to remain alive? 9. Plot setting Human Strength In the latest chapters, the protagonist encounters a great general. The power that the general exudes when angry directly scares the protagonist (the protagonist has been strengthened by the mounted slashing system, and his vitality value has reached 6 points. The author commented that his strength is comparable to two or three Tysons). However, this kind of strength is only average combat power in the description of the system. I don't think so. I know how strong the human beings in this world can be, but it is definitely much higher than the earth. 9.'S addition: The generals around the protagonist can easily kill the bodyguard team that the protagonist has formed before with their bare hands. Those are real elite soldiers, and such generals need to use knives to fight against serious generals. This should explain the general's combat effectiveness. 10. I can't remember, I will add it later 3. Summary 1. The writing of this book is good, but it is a little immature in the transfer of some plots, but it does not affect the writing. 2. The basic world view setting is interesting, but every time a game is introduced into the system, the world will be transformed, and it is unknown what the subsequent world will become. What does it look like 3. There are loopholes in some parts of the plot, but if you don't think about it carefully, it will not affect the reading. It is not a flaw, and it is a good thing worth reading Additional: I don't think it is strange that the scientist chooses a female when he is reborn. I have lived for seventy and eighty years, and I have experienced everything a man should experience. It is understandable to want to change my identity and live. As for some people in the comment area who said that a man's dream should not be to be a woman but to have a harem, etc. Before the scientist traveled through time, he was a boss of the Chinese Academy of Sciences. It was easy to secretly build a harem and keep a sister-in-law. He said that he had experienced it and it made sense. But although his behavior makes sense, there are many shortcomings in the psychological description of scientists in the book, which leads to many people not understanding his "transgender" behavior.

In fact, too many and too many things are not good. The first three chapters of this book are said to be a hodgepodge of various game elements, and I feel that it will be difficult to write in the future. Don't believe it? Have you seen North American animation? Now these classic comic characters all come from the past. Their characters were all shaped in the era of stand-alone comics. And now? American fantasy hero blockbusters are gradually declining. Why? Apart from excessive political correctness, the biggest problem is that it is too complex and difficult to grasp. After a long period of comic and animation polishing, the first two Marvel Women's League films managed to bridge various conflicts, but later it was too late and chaos appeared frequently! Do you know how confusing the logic in the comics is? If nothing else, why did they introduce a parallel universe? Why do the same heroic stories keep re-opening? Is it really just to "let today's teenagers accept the tradition"? ! Are you still fixing bugs? Such a big company, so many people, all thinking together, but after a hodgepodge of various heroic stories, problems continue to arise. If we want to produce a truly high-quality product, it would be impossible to make comics and animations without trial and error for ten or eight years. Internet article authors rely on themselves, or at most a few more people. Are you better at editing than Marvel and Marvel? None of them can solve the problem of too many different elements contradicting each other. So, for example, if you Red Alert and Lord of the Rings fly together, the result is unknown. It doesn't mean that you can't introduce multiple elements, but you have to control them. The less you introduce, the more control you have. The more relevant things are introduced, the less likely they are to collapse. For example, the title of this book is based on the background of medieval Europe. Then, if you cannot collapse, you must make the protagonist's power (individual and power) roughly match the era for a long time. It is appropriate to introduce the first element is a fortress. But after that, you have to follow this tone and you can't jump away from it. To escape your rewrite, set other, more open backgrounds. According to this tone, for example, chapters 50-100 of fortress development will initially establish a territory, which is a sustainable small-area safe zone in the medieval zombie apocalypse. Then as the plot progresses, other elements that do not destroy the general environment are introduced as plug-ins. For example, some elements of Mount and Blade. Let the protagonist continue to fight in the surrounding areas, develop his power and his own force, for example, add some battles between survivor camps, and plots such as the rebellion of the refugees collected by the protagonist. It will be another 100 chapters, and the end will be to unify the xxx Islands and the xxx peninsula. Next, what if I want to continue writing and introduce elements without destroying the tone of the medieval era and the zombie apocalypse? Easy to handle. For example, introduce other elements that cannot change the overall environment. For example, introducing elements from action games, such as some elements of The Elder Scrolls. The protagonist can use spells to mutate zombies. The protagonist gathers a group of human evolutionary powers (witches?) To fight monsters, upgrade, and magical development for another 100 chapters. Just make it up like this, never overdo it, and just have an unexpected ending at the end. Chapter 500 of the online article, take the money to pick up the car as a down payment.

When you wrote about a scientist, I thought you were going to leave the main plot, and then killed him😓. Why would a person with high IQ and ability who was born in the same camp be killed by the system because he was afraid of finding out? It depends on how powerful the system is?

It's so damn toxic. Dead people can still get into the system and try to seize the protagonist. You might as well not write it.

Not to mention anything else, the protagonist in Chapter 11 kills a fellow academician of the Chinese Academy of Sciences whom he just met. Then the author seems to have very little sensitivity to numbers, and many numbers seem to be written as soon as they come to mind.

The author's writing is generally good and in line with my taste, but some of it is quite poisonous. For example, the fellow who was a young assistant suddenly turned into a woman. The assistant's words made me a little uncomfortable. The later transformation into a woman is even more poisonous. I suggest that the author change it or write less in the future. There is no woman in his heart, and the code words are naturally divine

He actually wrote a transformation story, and didn't write it in the first three chapters from the very beginning? You're awesome, brother. I can't stop you even if I use poison every day. If you're a poisonous assassin in a novel, it's more ruthless than an ice cream assassin! 😏

The first three chapters are so outrageous that even a doomsday fan wouldn't be able to survive in the woods. If nothing else, I would say that I would be so thirsty and starved to death by the lake that I would be in a state of confusion. How many days have you been hungry and you just eat cheese when you have something to eat? ? At least I'm writing this background with some common sense in the wild.

The first three chapters of this book are going to poison me to death. I very much doubt whether there is something wrong with the author's common sense. First point, the protagonist does not eat or drink for three days and three nights, and he can move rocks to build a wall and chop down trees. Where does he come from as Superman? A normal person will be so hungry that he has no energy to go without eating or drinking for one day. If he does not eat or drink for two days, he will be so hungry that he has no strength to walk. If he does not eat or drink for three days, he can only lie on the ground and wait for death. The protagonist can actually walk through the forest in this situation? Awesome! Second point, the protagonist walked barefoot in the forest for three days and three nights. I seriously doubt that the author has ever been to the wild forest. In the wild, if you dare to walk barefoot, your feet will be full of wounds for ten minutes at most. After walking barefoot for three days and three nights, his feet should have turned pus and rotted, right? Except for these two extremely serious poisonous points at the beginning, as you read further, they become more and more poisonous. It really makes you sick.

Now I have published more than 50 chapters and it is almost 200,000 words, and I still have more than ten chapters left in the manuscript. When I was writing about the subcontinent, I was already worried that readers would not be able to bear the abuse, so I deleted ten chapters. It happened that I had not started writing during the Spring Festival these past few days. I read it from beginning to end several times. There were indeed too many poisonous points. Before it was too late, I decided to completely overhaul the story and start over. This book is the first time I seriously want to write about it, and I really can't bear to give up on it. For those who have read the previous content, I can only say sorry. After the revision, the overall story has changed, including the setting of the world background.

I've only watched a little bit, and it's quite interesting when the protagonist casually names himself Zhang San. There are magical science fiction bases in Goldfinger, and the gap between the upper and lower limits is ridiculous. You can choose at will from the beginning, but the protagonist chooses a medieval base with the lowest level of technology? The peasants given to the interstellar human base at the beginning are all Gundams. No matter how many people are built in the medieval base, they can't beat an interstellar peasant... I'm afraid that the resources are insufficient. The Warcraft undead are invincible against zombies. They are not afraid of infection. They are here to send troops as many as they come... I suggest that the author set the optional bases according to the technological level to be slowly unlocked according to the development of the protagonist's power, otherwise the book will collapse more and more...

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I feel like you wrote it casually! I started watching You Enter the City without even thinking about it, but I couldn't watch it anymore after the city was massacred. Farewell!

It's a waste of time. One sentence can fill a whole chapter. If you jump to eight and still introduce the rules of the game, the old bookworm will quit after just one glance. As for the newbie, the newbie will come to read the new book. The ranking is no better than this.

If one caravan is killed, all the people covering tens of thousands of square kilometers will be killed, leaving no chickens or dogs behind. This is too outrageous. This is still an ancient society. There are no guns or cannons. How can we easily massacre tens of thousands of square kilometers of people? Assuming that the caravan died across time and space in southern China, doesn't it mean that that country will defeat the entire southern China army and then kill all the people in the southern China? How can there be so many troops to carry out orders? Speechless

Killing decisively does not mean killing people on sight. That is called suspicion. The protagonist is like a fool.

The beginning was good, but later on it became more and more poisonous, and the poisonous points outweighed the pleasant ones.

Question, a book looks like an outline, smells like an outline, and feels like an outline, what is it?

Is it another trick of transforming a living person into a living person, or is it the kind where loyalty is locked?

Yes, this book is worth pursuing, and the recommendation index is five stars.

The description of the development of the territory in this book may not be very detailed compared to other lord novels, and some places are briefly mentioned At first glance, you may think it is a lord development series, but in fact it is not. The focus of this book is on describing the story and characters This is a story that takes place in a different world with a similar medieval background, where a zombie apocalypse breaks out. There is no magic here, there is no golden finger that defies the sky, only the story of the protagonist slowly growing up with a little effort This is also the main reason why the protagonist's system is not integrated with him, but just a computer The protagonist is set to be a retired e-sports player, who has no shortage of money before time travel, and is a doomsday survival maniac. Subjective by nature, afraid of death, willing to give up any bottom line in order to survive, he is also older than the protagonists of ordinary novels, he is 35 at the beginning This is probably the information that can be published so far The author is not a professional writer, but fortunately he has a lot of free time, and the updates are fast and slow, but at least he can guarantee one update a day, please feel free to consume it If you find any unreasonable or poisonous points in the book, please pay attention, I will go to the comment area every day to read the messages, thank you all

You copied it, it was reported! ?

What's going on? Can anyone tell me?

At present, it seems that it is indeed possible. The overall logic is smooth and natural. Although the writing style is a bit immature, the author's personal experience and overall detailed presentation dilute this point. Anyway, there are not many books nowadays that are well-written, logical, and palatable. I personally like them.