Mecha War: Starting from Gundam OO

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White Tiger-class cruiser,,, flagship of the Federation's next-generation fleet

Let me start by saying that not all of them were booked, and most of them were viewed outside. Moreover, I gave up the book for a while after finishing the first 00 chapters, but I came back to read it later. Fortunately, I didn't miss a book that was actually good Generally speaking, although the beginning of this work is "childish", the progress in writing becomes more obvious as it goes on. The author states that he has experience in the army. The description of battles, tactics, and relationships between comrades in the article seems to me to be accurate. At the same time, it not only describes the protagonist, but also portrays the people in the protagonist's team. Insisting on the importance of the team rather than playing random individual heroes is more in line with the physique of Chinese babies (although in fact, the protagonist in the article is already too powerful to be played without cutting it, or the enemy must be made stronger in the later stage to defeat the protagonist) There is also a lot of writing on various original machines and expansions and upgrades of the original machines. The only regret is that there are only text descriptions and no accompanying pictures. It is difficult to imagine what the protagonist machine looks like. Maybe the author can try to draw a sketch by himself and let the AI ​​generate and refine it with the text description? It may not work, you can try The first 00 chapters, although the description is relatively immature, you can continue to read it, the story is well arranged, and there is nothing shocking about it. But there are two reasons why this game was abandoned for a time. One is that after the end of 00, there is an infinite flow in one turn; the other is to open a harem. Because I was introduced to the book with the 00 expansion, after the story of the film was completed, the attraction for me was greatly reduced. At the same time, the very abrupt arrangement turned into an infinite flow. Under the double "strike", and in conjunction with the harem's debuff, I naturally gave up the book. However, because the story of 00 was well written, I didn't delete it and kept it on my bookshelf. After I ran out of books to read, I picked it up and found that the subsequent unlimited streaming arrangement was reasonable, and I gradually became able to accept it. As for the harem, since it basically has no impact on the plot, I automatically blocked it. But it has to be said that strong women from all walks of life (after all, they are all heroines and important female supporting characters of various works) can come together harmoniously and without jealousy. From this point of view, it seems that the power of the author is indeed distorting the personality. In my mind, I automatically separated them from the protagonist, looking at them as comrades-in-arms. Except for the harem problem, I don't think there are any fatal flaws in this game. It's just that after traveling through many worlds and collecting a lot of technology, there are too many things added to the car of the protagonist's team members, and there is no choice. Although you can use the excuse of miniaturization so that it can be installed, the more complicated something is, the easier it is to break, and the more complicated the thing is, the more difficult it is to balance the operation. Not to mention the cost increase caused by miniaturization. From my personal point of view, it is more reasonable to add and subtract (because if the technical level of a certain work is low and not used, it does not count as a subtraction). Only when there are trade-offs in a single player can the importance of the team be highlighted, and plot conflicts in a single player can be better arranged. In addition, the current plot is generally "family fun". There have been bumps along the way, but so far, there has been no obvious damage to the protagonist's core team. Of course, as a web writer, I don't blame this too harshly. It's just that because of the author's infinite flow design, the protagonist's team has grown too fast. If there are too many people, it will be difficult to describe. Otherwise, let's arrange an opportunity for some personnel to log off reasonably 🤐

Dear author, I haven't read it yet. Will the Vortex God of Destruction make a guest appearance?

What is a Gundam fanfic? The author doesn't even understand the essence and core of the Gundam world. Gundam is an anti-war work, and the emotional drama is only the smallest part of it. The male protagonist of the fan work making a humanoid self-propelled cannon is simply an insult to Gundam

Celestial Being's battleships are so rubbish. In two TV animations and one theatrical version, their battleships are not good. Get some heavy firepower. Get ten or eight of the large ones used in the pseudo-solar furnace battleship. How can the ultra-long-range beam cannon be only used by MA (Alvatore)? Also, you must use a shielded bridge for the bridge. The shielded bridge of the Goddess of Wisdom in Seed is good. In the second part of Gundam 00 and the theatrical version, the Allied Forces have a pseudo-solar furnace battleship, and they can also turn on the three reds for ultra-long-distance navigation. Look at how big the pseudo-solar furnace used on that battleship is. Here I want to strongly condemn the small missiles made of solar furnace particles. Even if you can extract unlimited particles from the solar furnace, the problem is that the missile shell containing those green particles is made of ore, which requires material. Those missile shells need to be smelted, shaped, and precision machined. Only turners, fitters, millers, and planers can be used to make a missile shell? Instead of saying that you cast a missile shell and then pour the particles into it, the casting is not precise enough to seal the particles. It is not possible to just cast a shell to make a missile shell. Also, what does the guidance of the missile rely on and what does the missile's boost rely on? If you say that the missile's boost relies on the GN particles in the missile, then your missile cannot hit far at all and consumes its own particles. If the missile is too small, it will have no power and cannot even fly very far, and there will be no particles. If it is too big, the enemy will easily avoid it. In a word, if you want to use your solar furnace, you can just make a beam cannon. The physical weapon is limited to ammunition. No matter how much your warship carries, it will be useless when encountering aliens of that kind of metal

I have thought about it all. The special training for the top gundam soldiers is that the supply equipment they are given is a sniper for melee combat, and a beam dagger and a solid sword are given for long-range attacks. Let the fool do the sniper battle, and let Lockon do the melee combat. Anyway, it is definitely the opposite of their specialties. When they become apprentices, these people will be invincible.

Knowing the plot direction of Seed, he hired Gai as a bodyguard, and then during the battle with the advance team, he exposed his own Gundam trump card. How could he still be playing tricks with his IQ? Very poisonous

How is the plot now? It feels more and more wrong. One of the points is that Cagalli grew up with the protagonist. She also said that apart from her father, the protagonist can control her, so it has no influence at all, right? It still follows the original work, and it is even more stubborn. The author also plans to write her as a villain. I can only say that the crime is not that serious.

Basically nothing was changed in the first part of Seed, except that the protagonist and his gang were added. It can be said that the presence or absence of the protagonist does not affect the plot of Seed.

The Seed world should be written in front of Gundam 00, just like when you play Legend and get the Dragon Slaying Sword, then seal the Dragon Slaying Sword, and then go to a low-level dungeon to get the Saber Sword,

Anyone who wants to read it, please note that this is a harem story, and the three heroines in the introduction are real. Moreover, the author's writing style is not good, and the emotional scenes are very difficult to handle. If there are people like me who don't like this kind of plot, there is no need to watch it. (I hope the author will not delete my comments. After all, this will reduce unnecessary arguments caused by some people who don't like harems.)

It might have been a good book ten years ago 🙂 (the protagonist Jiuyou's hellish eyes scared me away)

I think in fan fiction, the background settings that have no impact before the protagonist enters cannot be changed. If he participates later, it will change according to the development. It is completely consistent with the plot and nothing has changed except for the multiple characters. It is better to watch anime. What's the point?

There was a scene that was very uncomfortable to watch. The general content is that the Tianren Organization suffered a setback during the mission. Tizi blamed Miss Huang and said it was all your fault. Miss Huang said, yes, it is my responsibility. The protagonist stepped forward in a menacing manner, probably meaning, this is my woman, it's not your turn, kid. I didn't see much of it after that. I don't know what happened after that. I can only say that it has a good framework for the story, but it will be hard to get entangled in these details.

The Asuka family lives in Orb. When will you mention this? Are you waiting for the plot of the second part? Symbolizing a stupid bird like Asuka, if you didn't brainwash him and control him earlier, would you still leave him in the hands of PL like in the original plot?

Machine War Joke

I saw the author talking about the decline in the performance of the novel, because I have personally watched the performance of the one next door go from being far behind, to tying, and now surpassing it, so I would like to express my personal views on this novel off the cuff, because I wrote it casually without a draft, and some of the prefaces did not match the afterwords, and even Even some of the words are not pleasant to hear, but please believe that there is absolutely no malicious intention on the part of the individual, so those who see it should just think that they are talking to themselves in a daze and laugh it off. Let me talk about these three points: 1. The characterization of the characters; 2. The characterization of the team; 3. Portrayal of the opposite sex; Let's talk about the first point first, the portrayal of characters, maybe because of life experience. The protagonist in the author's works occasionally shows the kind of "iron-blooded" feeling that is very conscious when using swords, which cannot be felt in any other similar works. It looks very... Comfortable (such as Chapter 1174), this is the author's biggest feature and greatest advantage. Please write more about this aspect in the future, but the portrayal of other characters is quite uninteresting (such as Chapter 657). I have also seen the original animation, and I really can't believe it. Uncle Xiong, who can calmly push his son away when facing death, will say that kind of words and do that kind of actions to the protagonist who returns home. This is fan fiction. The plot can be more imaginative than the original work, and the character's experience can be very different from the original work, but only the portrayal of the character's personality is different from the original work. The work cannot be too different, otherwise the sense of tearing off from the original work when reading will be really uncomfortable sometimes; Then the second point is the portrayal of the team. I personally think that the protagonist in the author's works is an unparalleled warrior, an excellent squad leader, and a newly qualified platoon leader, but as a The company commander made things difficult for him, so the description of leading the Celestial Team in the opening 00 was very smooth, but when leading the protagonist group to clear the large dungeon, some of the plots were really unbearable. For example, I wonder if the author likes the character Yitzhak very much, and I feel that the protagonist can tolerate him very much ( Such as Chapter 837), when I saw that, I really wanted to ask the author: Do you dare to speak to the company commander like this when you were in the company? Where is the protagonist's control over the team, and where is the discipline of the team, so that an organization where superiors cannot establish absolute authority over subordinates can form combat capabilities and fight on the battlefield? What I can't stand the most is why everyone in the protagonist group is included, such as Ofer Ram Thao. In reality, I am just a common man, and I really can't share the love of a high-ranking person like him. In the original work, this bastard restarted his destiny plan and launched military campaigns for personal affairs, resulting in a large number of casualties and treating ordinary people's lives as nothing. He was killed by a thousand cuts, and he was included in the team. What kind of operation is this? Personally, in my opinion, the protagonist group is at most a Liangshanbo-style "gang" composed of green forest heroes. It cannot be called a "team", and it has nothing to do with the word "army". Maybe it is because I am a military fan, and the requirements for the depiction of the team organization will be relatively high. After all, After all, the PLA is the most well-organized and disciplined organization in the world, and its strong combat effectiveness comes from this, so in the future, we should pay more attention to the description of the team at this level; The third point is the portrayal of the opposite sex. Personally, I still think that 00 in the beginning is the best portrayal, because Kujo's feelings are a fait accompli, leaving a lot of blank space for readers to Imagination, while Wang Liumei is very negative. When I read it, I felt that readers would feel sorry for not accepting her. This is the best way for all authors who are not good at writing emotional dramas to deal with this problem. However, in SEED, the plot of seriously falling in love with the captain, deputy captain, and the demon was really awkward. When I accepted the emperor sister in Geass, I couldn't help but sigh - can this be done? Personally, I really feel that the author is not very good at writing emotional dramas. If he is not good at it, then he should use his strengths and avoid his weaknesses and write less, or refer to the 00 articles at the beginning. Isn't it handled very well? The writing route that I think is suitable for the author is: portray the protagonist as a "predator" with extremely strong combat power and high combat awareness, who can reasonably open an unparalleled "predator" in the dungeon, and travel to the mission world to be a lone hero. If you want to open a harem, try to keep their "beauties" in the original world as much as possible, and take time to go back to accompany them. Only take no more than 100 people with you. Three "wives" with the best relationship (Private goods: Please keep Shirley Lou with you, this perfect girlfriend, haha). If one person or one machine cannot support the combat power, there must be a protagonist group. Then portray the protagonist group as one who does not question the protagonist's orders and will execute them without compromise. A fleet of robots composed of ultra-intelligent AI and The machine clusters try to reduce the presence of "people" in the protagonist's group. If he participates in leading the team in the dungeon world, it also portrays the protagonist as a staff-type character who leads the team in a ruptured manner and whose combat awareness can convince the crowd. He only needs to come up with ideas behind the team's first leader. The protagonist only needs to be able to step forward at critical moments on the battlefield. Come on, author, as long as you still write fan fiction about robot warfare, I will always support you.

Just kill Cagalli, trap her to death, you'll be annoyed when you see her

The most interesting thing about this type of unlimited mecha combat is the fusion of machine technology from all over the world. Fortunately for you, the most important thing is to directly limit it. What else can be more exciting about this? Isn't the pressure too strong? If the core technology is not used, then why are you writing so many worlds? Still, Yizui's local battle is infinitely good-looking, and the technology from various worlds is integrated. It's so exciting to watch!

I remember why I suddenly stopped watching it last time... The writing was too boring, and all kinds of uncomfortable things were put together... The heroine is okay, but it's quite annoying that it can't be written well and it takes up a lot of space. I finally got through AGE and got to seed. It's okay at the beginning and the whole movie after. No one can believe in Indian infiltration... It would have been better if there hadn't been AGE. AGE responded to this paragraph once every once in a while to feel refreshed... Then suddenly I didn't want to watch it... The advantage of infinite streaming is that it can quickly switch worlds and end early based on readers' reactions...

The protagonist's character becomes increasingly unlikable

It's a bit outrageous. Every time I arrive in a new world, I recognize a new father and send him directly to a top family 😅

Those who come to see Gundam must be fans. Why should they dismantle such a good CP? It's not like there are no beautiful Flowers without Owners in Gundam.

Are VF fighters and battleships too old? I can't find anyone who wrote this. The so-called Gundam is not as handsome as the VF series fighters.

Is this a fan prequel to Unlimited Robot Wars? ? ? Prometh? Prometheus? Build a fortress and then build a zone, and finally divide it into real zone, super zone and fantasy zone? Then open doors in various worlds to attract people...

If you don't understand, just ask, is this book good?

Lin Mingmei, the original singer of Macross, won't appear anymore. After all, the technology is more advanced.

For example, Lelouch of the Rebellion, Revolutionary Machine, EVA, Archangel of Creation, etc.

Gundam AGE is really a boring work. Whether it's the character design, the R&D design of the technological route, or the machine design, it's just like playing house... Then the AGE system is even more of a joke...