Recasting the Dragon's Glory

It's rubbish, I mean the dragons in the book Western dragons are legendary when they reach adulthood, but that's not the case here. You can beat any country here, and the protagonist, a special dragon, can't even beat a small noble. I have read a lot of books about transforming into dragons. The dragon in other books can be compared to an adult dragon here. The protagonist has always been a poor time traveler. This identity is of no use at all. The author wrote that letting other players come in is redundant.

Thoughts after watching: I have been subscribing since the first chapter. From the first sensory experience to the present, my overall score is 8 out of 10. Because looking at all the dragon novels I have read, including red dragons, black dragons, white dragons... Even the dragon novels written by the author before, all dragons highlight the ferocity, coldness, and greed they should have... I feel like the protagonist has been assimilated by the dragon soul, becoming decisive, cold and ruthless, and even passionate. It is very consistent with the characteristics of the dragon, and it is also very common. So, when I read this dragon novel, my eyes instantly lit up. I have never seen a dragon novel that retains so much humanity and is decent in terms of plot. It can be regarded as a work that stands out among today's dragon novels. The protagonist is not only a profit-seeking beast, but also a person with emotions and self-worth. The combination of the two characteristics is what I think of the alien beast time-traveling flow. After all, I'm not here just to see animals, nor just people. This is what attracts me. Content evaluation: Although I think this book is quite excellent among Long's novels, there are also many flaws in the book. The first is the issue of the dragon's combat power. Many book friends have mentioned this issue, and I also think it is a bit poisonous. In common dragon literature, giant dragons have great power. When they reach adulthood, they can usually pose a huge threat to a city. They can almost crush humans or other creatures of the same level, and can leapfrog challenges. They are the well-deserved top of the food chain in fantasy worlds. In this book, an adult dragon cannot even reach the so-called hero level. The elite combat power of the human country is stronger than most of the dragons around the protagonist. Facing the "genius level" adult dragon, there is no need to use legendary powerhouses. It seems that dragons are just relatively powerful high-level monsters, and humans are the rulers of the food chain in fantasy worlds. I am more curious here. If the true dragon is of this strength, then the dragon beasts under Abel's command can actually completely defeat most dragons with ordinary talents, because they are all over ten levels. There is not even a difference between the dragon beasts and the true dragons. Is it just a matter of living longer? However, this can also highlight the protagonist's rapid progress with the help of the system. It's just a bit bullshit overall. There are also some poisonous points that have little impact on me, but have a greater impact on most readers, and that is that many chapters are about being a dragon breeder in order to make money, and a lot of daily driving. I think proper description can make the article more interesting, but there is too much about this in the book. I don't mind it, but the audience dictates that it's not desirable. On the other hand, maybe it's to highlight the dragon's extreme greed for money? Putting aside those poisonous points, daily farming is actually pretty good. There are also some minor pitfalls, such as the protagonist's enemies sometimes wearing wisdom-dampening halos, the protagonist's younger brother being useless most of the time, the dragons other than the protagonist being more "human", and the wits fighting scenes are more embarrassing... I won't go into detail one by one, and everyone will understand. After talking about its shortcomings, of course, we must also talk about its advantages. I think the descriptions of the characters in this book are quite vivid, and the personality characteristics of each person and dragon are relatively distinct. The intelligence lady and Titan in the King's Ring, the dog-licking green dragon Coraman in the protagonist group, the arrogant and powerful Gordon, etc., The character descriptions are still quite good, but they are a bit inconsistent with the racial characteristics. It may be that there are more "human" factors, which have advantages and disadvantages. There are also some plot foreshadowing and details worth mentioning. For example, on the eve of the battle with the Titans, Shiloh hunted sea fish on a large scale in order to collect a large number of souls. As a result, the Titans were severely injured but did not have enough life energy to absorb, thus delaying the recovery and comeback of the Titans. In short, this book has a trend of going high in the early stage and going low in the later stage, but it is now a little relaxed. Many readers can't stand the poisonous points and abandon the book, but in my opinion, the poisonous points in this book are quite few compared to most other books of the same type. There are also some flaws and exciting points in the content. It can only be said that there is a lot of room for improvement, because the entire macro world view is being improved, but whether it can be written well depends on the author's performance and whether the level can be restored to the peak period before it was put on the shelves. I hope the author will not mix things up with water, the essence is the most important thing. I also hope that this book will grow into one of Long's outstanding works. (By the way, I heard that the author never seems to read book reviews 😅, but it's understandable)

Personal opinion, worth a look. The latest plot is not a question of water or not, but a question of tension in the main line. The protagonist is so smooth that there is no external pressure, and many conflicts can be handled without any tension. The author writes that personal development and farming are both good, but there are some problems when combining the two. Take this recently updated plot as an example. The protagonist promotes a magic battery car. The protagonist collects materials used for upgrades to increase blood concentration. The author's writing method is that elves secretly charge and earn the money that the protagonist should earn. The protagonist detains them and then starts a battle to verify the strength of his upgrade. Is there any problem? It's not a big problem either. But my impression is that it is a bit funny, that is, the contradiction here has not reached the intensity that is about to explode. The protagonist can completely revolve around magic energy, battery car patents, piracy, and the difficulty and resistance encountered in promotion. As for the elves, it is entirely possible for the protagonist to be a time traveler and win over groups of them. In Longwen, the content before it is put on the shelves is given 9 points, and the content after it is put on the shelves is given 7 points. I hope the author will think about it carefully and try to restore the level before it was put on the shelves.

Dragon: Glory? I'm sorry, I'm sorry!

It was released too early, but the book didn't have the explosive appeal to attract people, and the story hasn't even started yet.

Hurry up, the donkeys in the production team don't rest like you!

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I've read it, and there are a lot of dragon articles. Including Black Dragon, Red Dragon Emperor, Time Dragon, Frost Wings and many more. But this book is the most uncomfortable I have ever read. I didn't know why I felt uncomfortable at first. Now when I look at the comment section, I realize that this is not Longwen at all. Think about it, as a dragon, it took several times as long as a human to grow, but the result is that your combat effectiveness is about the same as that of humans at the same level. The protagonist is a dragon genius who only meets ordinary human geniuses once in hundreds of years. This is the first novel I've seen where dragons are worse than humans. If this were to be the case, humans, tens of thousands of times more numerous than dragons, would have wiped out the dragons long ago. Author, would you like to read what you wrote?

Yes, as a giant dragon, aside from other things, the size is there. If you don't become a saint in the early stage, you will definitely be affected by the size and race. For example, as an adult, can an adult fuck a tiger or a lion? Even if they are underage, normal people cannot do it. They are completely tortured and killed. Like an elephant, if you stand there and let you hit it with your bare hands, you won't hurt it, but if it touches you casually, it will kill someone. So when I write this, it is unreasonable to only look at level in the early stage. Unless it is in the later stage, when the two sides are otherworldly, it is reasonable to not look at things such as body type at all.

Why are you so stubborn in repeating the mistakes of your last book, kid? It's like you caught the code of wealth but didn't notice that your money bag was leaking What are you trying to do?

The dragons here have their crotch stretched out. The author keeps saying that dragons are as awesome as they are, but in a duel they can only draw a tie with humans of the same level. With a few younger brothers, they can abuse dragons at will. Is this still a dragon? There is no problem replacing dragons with humans. The so-called five-color dragon is not impressive at all. How did it grow up? They should have been killed long ago

With a little bit of logic, humans who can fight dragons are either elites among humans, or they start a team and fight with human lives. It would be outrageous to have a boss template in itself and a profession superimposed on it, and be beaten by a human being by one or two levels.

What are you doing with those weak human beings fishing for so many colorful intestines? Within a few years, I felt that I had no need for them. Later, when it develops, it directly suppresses the strong and launches wars in the divine world, and plunders materials from other places for its own use. The huge difference in strength has already determined the difference in human class. They are not qualified to negotiate. As long as the protagonist is strong enough, isn't it? She cares so much about the life and death of She people. Just behead those who dare to extend their claws. A dragon, cunning and cunning, extremely powerful, violent and greedy, how come there are so many nagging people, do you really think of yourself as a human being?

I just don't accept that the 16-meter behemoth is only reduced to level 12. Adult dragons are level 14~15. My CPU is burned out. I just don't accept it The gatekeepers of the Church of Human Wealth are all paladin level 15 (elite+) What a small, unpopular church. I have heard of two factions that believe in justice and evil. The Holy Light and Evil God inside. I have heard of belief in elements, ocean, lava, church of storms I have heard of belief in war and death, God of War, God of War. I heard that the orcs and elves believe in nature. The elven racial heroes are all gods. Druid, Shaman. —— The Church of Fortune is a neutral god in every aspect. Never heard of it. Become a weak and insignificant god. —— It is okay to have more than ten churches. It is said that there are dozens of chambers of commerce and various aristocratic forces. —— I randomly pulled out thousands of level 14 and above...... This giant dragon has reached level 14 as an adult. . . . It's better to throw away the hierarchy. It's easy to dry out people's CPUs. The dragon is just a big fat lizard, hey, a big fat lizard with wings. Looks like a level 14 big yellow dog. . —— I thought that an adult dragon... Could destroy a kingdom, or if it failed, it could destroy a city. How to know. Entering the city, the gatekeepers in any of the dozens of small churches in the city have level 14 [Elite+] and level 15 [Elite+]. I couldn't help but think of... A level 14 adult dragon entered and found a guard soldier with level 15. Even I was embarrassed to go in. —— I seem to feel that this 16-meter behemoth feels like a bubble when entering. I suspect that all the big yellow dogs at the door are level 5, and I suspect that the dog king inside is level 10. I doubt a big yellow dog can ride a green dragon. I suspect all the goblins in there are level 10. —— My CPU is dry burning due to level or something. Let's first clarify what level of destruction the adult dragon belongs to in this book, whether it is the top of the food chain or the bottom of the food chain. .，                               ——223

This book extremely looks down on martial arts, it can even be said to be contemptuous. It talks about how to hang magic and how to hang it, and then it can't describe where to hang it. You said it would be fine if you were a human. Are you a blue dragon or someone who plays with thunder? Do you understand the perversion of magic and martial arts? I was beaten once by magic and martial arts in the Dragon Soul Arena. I don't have a long memory of it. I accepted it. As a dragon, both physically and magically, he is top-notch. He is definitely a hexagonal warrior. However, you are playing him as a partial subject. You have already cheated, but you have not done anything with magic and martial arts. This achievement has been in vain, and the dragon's body has been cheated. Moreover, you are not happy with the dragon writing, and you also write it in a verbose and clumsy way.

Although you have changed it, the rationality is still basically not there. It does not take into account the territory of powerful creatures, the hunting range, or the safe distance of powerful creatures. Basically, it does not take into account. It was less than 20 kilometers from the territory of the hydrangea to a level 14 creature territory and 30 kilometers away from the kingdom. The young dragon ran 80 kilometers (the speed is probably about the same as that of a small electric donkey, and it has been running for a long time). There are already three major forces in this small area. There is really no safe distance at all. I remember watching the White Dragon Lord before. The young dragon ran away from the territory of the adult dragon for several days. The speed must be faster than this, and it was far away from other powerful creatures. Not easy to contact

Racial disparity. For example, they are both level 10. Humans and dragons. Human extraordinary abilities cannot be explained by the idealistic world. But after all, it is limited to the body magic storage unit 5 The dragon body magic storage range is 800. —— Not much to say about the body. Each human level increases by 5 attribute points. The power of the dragon. Each level up increases physical attribute points by 200. Magic 100 —— The dragon is the boss template. Humans are the soldier template. Even if the level 10 BOSS in the early game has 50,000 blood. In the later dungeons, level 70~80 miscellaneous soldiers also have tens of thousands of blood. But can level 10 and level 70 be compared? . —— Race itself is cheating. There are different levels of life. Give an example. Ant-Soldier Ant-King Ant Jump three levels in a row. Even if the ant king is rampant and domineering in the ant colony, he is invincible and invincible, and he charges recklessly in the ant colony and is invincible. Not an ant in front of human babies. We humans are destined to be giants in the eyes of ants. World Titans. Ants have to jump to level 20. Level 30. Only then can it be compared to a domestic cat. —— Attribute point relativity. Human jump level strength +0.5. Agility +0.8. Intelligence +1. Magic +0.1 Dragon template. Dragon jump level 1 strength +100. Magic power +30 This is race. —— Both are level 10. The difference may be between heaven and earth. Anyone who has read fantasy novels should know this. The protagonist is invincible at the same level. The higher the level, the more you can fight. You can fight hard if you cross 2 large levels. It can run over 3 large steps. Even Chen Pingan, the protagonist of "Sword Comes", shouted "I have a sword that can move mountains" in the 4th level and killed Du Feisheng in the 13th level to escape for his life. Cross 9 great realms. —— I want to say that the dragon takes the boss template. Protagonist template. Humans take the minion template. There may be hero templates favored by the gods Human beings are embodied in wisdom and artifacts. Whether it's a dungeon. World of Warcraft League of Legends. Monsters cannot avoid the word equipment. You can jump to level 15 even if you use the hero template. In terms of attribute points alone, I wear the Outlaw Armor and the Endless Knife at level 1. Far higher than your HP attack. Of course. Skills = martial arts also affect combat. —— The light explosion spell cast by humans is a big light ball explosion. The giant dragon casts a light explosion, which is a small sun lighting up the entire forest. Big Bang —— The last thing I want to say is that even a dragon slayer must have a magical dragon-slaying knife. The legendary level 20 human being with bare hands has a physique that is not even as good as a baby dragon. Whether it's high-speed healing. Still strength. No way. The racial gap is just that big. Dragon protagonist template. Far beyond the human heroic template. If there is an artifact, the Endless Blade, it can be swung to tear the world apart. Then regard the dragon as a miscellaneous fish. —— Dragon boss template. The protagonist template has 50,000 health at level 10. In the later stage, the high-dungeon minion at level 70~80 has tens of thousands of blood. But the minion needs to be level 70! ! Level 10 Dragon Flesh 500 points. Magic power storage: 800 points Level 10 human body: 10 points. The magic power is stored at 50 points. No matter how you look at it, there is no chance of winning. The above personal opinions are made up. A personal comment. If you don't like it, just row away. There's no need to scold me.

I can only say that the beginning is plagiarized from Blue Dragon and then slightly modified and thickly written, and it is very good. Once it comes to the original plot, it is Laqua.

This reader has no money to rebuild your glory.

It's really disgusting to use debt to provide natural elves with a channel to sell sex, and under the guise of voluntariness. For example, your family owes a huge sum of money, and I tell you how much money you can sell the women in your family at a time. You can just sell them voluntarily. Are you angry? My outlook on life is not very positive, but I don't want to force girls into prostitution, and I still feel very happy. Who doesn't have a female at home?😅

Brother, please understand at least the biological level, professional level, and challenge level first. Is this the right way to write dragon text?

Chapter 85: It's too frustrating, isn't it? You really don't want to watch a group of people co-write it to make you look like a dragon, right? Forget it, I can't stand it anymore, just do whatever you want

The author really has no concept of distance. There are no large wild animals within ten kilometers of human cities. Most of them have been converted into farmland. Cattle and sheep will be grazed on land that is not suitable for farming. There are no groups of carnivores even further away.

The most taboo things about Long Wen: 1. Not knowing his own camp, acting as a nanny for humans. () 2. Various virgins () 3. Transforming into a human to live in human society. () 4. The protagonist loses his IQ after transforming into a dragon () 4. Going around committing suicide before he is strong enough () 5. Adding two brothers and sisters to increase the difficulty ()

So far, I have never seen a dragon text that surpasses the "Black Dragon Code"

After seeing Chapter 180, I am ready to give up. What kind of settings are there to persuade me to quit?

Sure enough, 9 out of 10 DNF dragon essays about four-legged lizards are appendix-related, so I'm at a loss for words. This book comes and goes because my bloodline fusion spends money to improve, and those who are purely professional are useless.

What is the use of adding finesse? What does injecting essence mean? 😌

Although I wouldn't call it plagiarism, it's too much.

This author got on a blind date, stopped writing books, and didn't need to make any money anymore. Don't fall into this trap for newbies. After tens of thousands of years, it ended inexplicably 😰