Reborn: I Really Do Have Someone I Like

It's well-written, but joining the student union seems unnecessary. I say I've become very busy, but joining the student union wouldn't really benefit me.

I suggest you change the name to something else; "The First Cup" is terrible. It's so distracting, and besides, is this trademark even usable? That's another question.

It feels lifeless, lacking psychological description and clear facial expressions; you simply can't sense any emotion.

Is this a newcomer? I suggest strengthening the character's facial expressions and physical descriptions; they're too bland. The emotional descriptions are just a series of ups and downs, lacking any real emotional development, making the reading experience dry and uninspiring. Keep it up! Supporting newcomers, hoping for great works from you in the future.

The author portrays a young man from the perspective of a middle-aged person, who seems to find nothing interesting and has seen through everything, appearing quite dejected.

It's well-written, so why are there so few people reading it?

I wrote 460,000 words in 160 days, which is an average of 2,874 words per day. What else is there to write?

What's wrong with you, author? You love starting a new book and then abandoning it. You'll never write a good book if you keep doing this.

I haven't read it yet, but I'm guessing it's a story with all sorts of ambiguous and unfinished plot points, and the main character won't even get a single chapter in the 500-chapter run.

Aunt Fish