Reborn: I Really Do Have Someone I Like

The writing is quite good, but I feel that joining the student union is unnecessary. Saying that I have become very busy, but joining the student union is of no use to me.

I suggest you change the name to another one. The name Cup 1 is too rubbish. The thief is out, and can this trademark be used? This is also a problem.

It feels lifeless, there is no psychological description, and the facial description is not very clear, but the emotions cannot be read.

Are you new? It is recommended to strengthen the description of the character's expression and appearance. It is too bland. The emotional description is only about falling and falling, but not rising. It makes the reading boring. Come on. Support newcomers and hope to bring good works

The author describes a young man with the mentality of a middle-aged man, who looks like he has no interest in anything he is reading, has seen everything through, and is very sad.

Very well written. Why are there so few people?

I wrote 460,000 words in 160 days, an average of 2,874 words per day. What else should I write?

What's wrong with you as an author? You like to start a new book so much and then become a eunuch. You can never write a good book like this.

I haven't read it yet, so I'm blindly guessing that this is some kind of ambiguous eunuch story, and the main character can't even get into any of the 500 chapters.

Aunt Fish