Guide to Developing an Interstellar Overlord

Learning knowledge for players is not very good. It is easy to collapse when writing this. Players get technology and it is proved to be true in reality, which will trigger a series of things. If you don't write about these things, it will not be very reasonable. If you do, it will feel out of touch with the main line. It is best to cultivate your own team in the game world. There are some things that are not suitable for players to know. Players are better suited to fighting and can be treated like clones.

Violent soldiers, violent soldiers! There are not enough players to play the fourth natural disaster. The player population is in single digits. The author is making a fool of himself! How many chapters are there! They say it's the fourth natural disaster. What if the male protagonist is playing Wushuang alone?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​In addition, the development of the plot is relatively slow. Now after more than 80 chapters, the protagonist has reached initial production capacity. Slowness is not a problem. It is understandable for the smooth advancement of the plot. There is almost no connection between the protagonist and reality, and there is very little mention of the changes that have occurred in real life after players play the game. It can even be said that this line is somewhat carelessly handled. I have some opinions on the plot. If the author has his own considerations, they can be ignored. The protagonists are on a waste planet, right? It's a garbage planet. Just like when we found the tank before, the protagonists can search for treasures in the garbage and reverse engineer it, or find some NPCs to jointly develop tools with the players. In addition, how does the author explain where the first batch of airborne pods came from? Where did the base's initial resources come from? How does the base relate to reality? Why does the protagonist come back here? If these are not handled well, the whole book will be difficult to be logically consistent. In short, I am still very optimistic about the development of this book, and I will continue to order it in the future. Come on, author!

Come on, it's pretty cool

I really can't understand how a group of uncontrollable players can be more efficient than a robot that only consumes basic energy.

The technological level of the world the protagonist travels through doesn't look very good. It doesn't even know how to recycle the most basic resources. Is it really a civilization capable of interstellar colonization? With such a thing, what kind of treasure like the base center is there for the protagonist to pick up? The technology of traveling through time, space and the universe... Just this one shortcoming will scare off a lot of readers! You said that Golden Finger who travels through time as the protagonist is better than writing it like this. It really can't be written as the legacy of a super civilization or something like that!

. . . Originally, this type of novel was meant to be read by a large group of players, but as a result, the number of players increased like squeezing out toothpaste. Who would read it? Didn't you really think that your book would write millions of words and then become popular? It was not attractive in the early stage.

There are too many flaws at the beginning. The protagonist travels through time and picks up a base on a garbage dump planet with people? Can the base be connected to Blue Star? Can it also transfer items to Blue Star out of thin air? Can it also know Blue Star's time network and other information? 😅 There are too many loopholes, you might as well just come to a system See the author's homepage to join the starting point. More than three thousand days? That's it? Too careless. No wonder my grades were so low

It's really a petty thing. After so many players, a woman was introduced in the middle, and the protagonist suddenly turned into a licker. The score of this book is not good. It's because the author doesn't know how to write science fiction and is afraid that there are too many supporting characters. If the score is not good, the suspicion of appendix eunuchs will be high.

"Today's dessert tutorial is a red velvet cake. The raw material of the cake base is sour cream - 260g light cream, 20g lemon juice, 130g butter, 140g sugar, 3g salt, 20g cocoa powder, 3g baking soda, 270g low-gluten flour. Two eggs - don't use high speed, 10g of red velvet liquid, 15g of white vinegar. When preparing the sour cream, let it sit for half an hour before stirring. If you are too anxious, you will not get a thick liquid. You cannot replace baking soda with baking powder because the fluffiness will not be enough. , Then process the butter, add sugar and salt to the butter three times and beat until the whole thing is a little swollen and white, then you can add the egg liquid. The egg liquid should be divided 4-5 times. Beat it until it is full each time before adding the next pinch, and then add Stir the red velvet liquid until it is completely uniform, until it is almost glutinous and sticky. Then mix all the powders evenly with a spatula and sift them three times. Mix the flour and yellow butter evenly and then add sour cream. White vinegar is added last, but the action Be quick, mix evenly and then add it to the cake mold. Finally, use a spatula to slightly smooth the surface of the cake. Put it in a preheated oven and bake it at 150°C for about 50 minutes. That's it. Next, the raw material for the cheese cream is - 160g of cream cheese. 260G butter, 160g light cream, 60g sugar, 15g lemon juice, beat the butter, add the powdered sugar all at once, beat evenly; add half of the light cream, about 80g, into the butter in batches, beat evenly (it is best to warm the light cream, if it is too hot The water and oil may separate when cold), beat each time until completely absorbed and then add the next whipping cream; beat the cream cheese in warm water until very smooth, add the remaining 80g whipping cream in batches; beat the cream cheese and butter together evenly, finally add lemon juice, beat evenly, milk Freshly whipped cheese tastes the best, and that's the end of today's tutorial!" After finishing the video recording, Han Mengzhou curled up on the couch and asked, "When will this garbage MMORPG stop serving, and when will the Age of Stars stand up!" She pulled her hair back hard with both hands as if it was blown by the wind. The vastness of the galaxy was the reason why she was lost. The dull, boring and boring life could not be saved even with desserts. ———————— Go up the dusty concrete stairs to the left-hand door on the second floor. After opening the third room at the end, the rusty lock looks like it has been broken for a long time. There is a hole in the door that can be drilled out, and there is a hole in the ceiling. The lamp was shaky, the sheets were torn everywhere, and there was no trace of the birdcage. A pile of unnatural dark red porcelain and glass pieces were placed at the head of the bed. Squatting down, if your vision was good enough, you could see a knife lying at the bottom of the bed, with three words carved on the foot of the bed facing out.

The plot is very stiff, and every time the player does something, they feel that the protagonist will take care of it. Don't forget that for the protagonist, this is a real world. Failure often means that the layout is disrupted and death. However, the protagonist does not take any actions to stop it or take preventive measures. I don't know what to say.

The mecha controls the keyboard. I wanted to complain many years ago

I originally wanted to check it out, but the player gave it up and gave it up.

Newcomers and new books deserve encouragement! But I don't understand the logic and I feel so uncomfortable. First, I don't understand why a base center in a garbage dump can directly communicate with the earth, and why a complete base appears in a garbage dump. I think the author is powerful. But why not just give the protagonist a system? Second, why did a space capsule really come from space when you summoned the player? I thought it was the CG that the player watched. Let's not mention how the space capsule came from. For this thought implantation, I would rather you be the system than just something from a garbage dump.

I just saw that the construction of the protagonist's base was improving, but then a solar storm came and the protagonist was so panicked that he even ran away from the base with his spaceship? This kind of early development is not a lonely development! This wave of cleaning by the author is really awesome.

It's not popular, this is the definition I made after reading it. Recruiting only a few people, it smells like a small family.

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Players are always causing trouble. This is a normal thing, but the protagonist does not ban the account but supports the players to cause trouble. It is obvious that steady development can lead to dominance. Why does he always like to take unnecessary risks?

Can I add some sperm

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