I Can Unlock the Hidden Traits of Cards

I can't stand it. The premise is great, but the plot is a complete mess. Danger is always linked to the protagonist; even when he goes back to get his money, he gets assassinated. He's supposed to be instantly killed by the enemy, but he manages to turn the tables every time. Once would be enough, but he keeps doing it multiple times. It's ridiculous.

What's frustrating is that the premise of a wish-fulfillment story combined with a pretentious, artsy plot makes it ultimately unenjoyable, leaving it in a limbo. The artsy plot itself is one thing, but the artsy elements aren't profound; they just jarringly come across from me from time to time. The two conflicting elements are sandwiched together, pleasing neither side.

Is the author planning to write about high school students saving the world? I've read over seventy chapters, and it's still about high school students doing side quests, mini-dungeons, and fighting evil organizations. I'll add it to my favorites; I'm in a reading slump, and hopefully things will change later!

The subject matter is good, the setting is decent, but the plot is incredibly toxic. I'm also an author... My only suggestion is, could you please read it yourself...?

The premise is good, but the writing is terrible. The protagonist perfectly embodies the phrase "Death is like the wind, always by my side." He's always on the verge of death, making it incredibly depressing to read; it would have been better if the protagonist had just died already. The writing style gets worse and worse; the beginning was passable, but the later parts are utterly toxic.

Keep going, author! Don't give up. This is how it is with your first book. As a seasoned reader, I think it's alright. There are definitely some minor flaws, but none major ones. Keep writing slowly, author, there's still a chance. Think back to *The Legend of Lingxi Empire* and *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality*, they only became famous after 300 chapters; before that, hardly anyone…

I hate this kind of writing the most. They can become a god by developing their own skills, but they insist on going through all sorts of troubles for a little bit of advantage. It's awful.

The writing is terrible; it's a waste of such a good subject matter.

The beginning was okay, but it got worse and worse as it went on. They inexplicably added a new crescent level, and the whole power system felt broken. What star rating is the protagonist's crescent level equivalent to? I completely don't understand it.

It's tasteless to eat, but a pity to throw away. The beginning was alright, but after it was released, the protagonist started acting up, mindlessly arguing, self-harming, destroying his own card slots, pretending to be a saint and savior, and putting on a show that nobody knows about. The female lead? She was clearly saving him, but the protagonist childishly wanted to die with her, just because he couldn't stand her. Ugh, I dropped it after reading this.