I Build a Spaceship in the World of Martial Arts

Is there any relationship between the content of the book and the introduction? The introduction is a bit attractive.

Third person, speaking in vernacular, the early practice is okay, but the next chapter is a short story

I have seen the world of cultivating immortals build spaceships, but I have never seen the world of martial arts build spaceships.

The writing is inconsistent. Long Jue said that it took more than a year to reach the third level of perfection, but in the end, one year passed and the second level failed to reach perfection.

There is something wrong with this book The exercises are divided into nine levels. As a result, when you get to the main character panel, you only have one experience. Once you upgrade the exercises, the experience will be reset to zero, and the display will be the same as if you have not practiced before.

The male protagonist obtained a skill that could extend his lifespan, and his lifespan was increased to tens of thousands of years, but his cultivation level did not increase much. Then a woman was seriously injured and her lifespan was about to be lost. She had no choice but to use the secret technique of living and dying on the male protagonist, robbing him of half of his lifespan. However, he did not expect that many years later, this woman would survive one after another of her old opponents and she was still alive.

Is this martial arts? It's time to catch up with Xiuxian!

At first glance, this subject matter was thought up by a newbie, not for old bookworms.

I can't understand it. The writing in Goldfinger is vague, and there is no explanation of any changes in the techniques and skill upgrades. I don't have the patience to read your book.

The instructions on Goldfinger are not detailed and make you confused. 😵😵😵 The original version of Dragon Transformation Kung Fu is 1.0. After adding points for the first time, it becomes version 2.0 Of Dragon Transformation Kung Fu. I don't understand the following related questions: ①After adding points to the skill for the first time, does the protagonist need to practice the first level of 2.0 Again? ②The protagonist himself has "completed the first level of 1.0". After adding points, will he "completed the first level of 2.0"? ③After adding points, does it give "special effects" to the Dragon Transformation Kung Fu? ④ Or after adding points, the first three layers are all version 2.0?

The upgrading of the protagonist is ambiguous. There is no difference just by looking at the panel. Why not make it simpler? Energy points directly upgrade the layers of exercises or skills. When you upgrade to the highest level, you can use energy points to evolve. Now the upgrading of the protagonist seems to be a headache and meaningless.

Is the author prepared to give it for free? 300,000 Words will not be published

Where does the energy come from? I'm a bit speechless. I couldn't write it clearly, otherwise it would greatly affect this book.