Zhan Chi, Was Carried Home by Little Esdeath at the Beginning

In fact, emotional drama is easy to write. As long as you write the female character as a man, interact with the protagonist in the early stage, and experience more plots, the heat will be almost the same later, and you can just show off your cards and be done.

Looking at the title of the book, the heroine sees that the red used to kill Chi is red pupils, so the heroine has red pupils, 🐷

Woohoo, I need to catch up on reading! Boss(♡⌂♡)

The author should not give away girls, and don't give out supporting characters with red eyes and black eyes. You can have a single heroine, but don't write emotional scenes between supporting characters and women. For example, when Tazmi and Ma'in are together, you can default to them being together (don't write it out). Try not to mention the emotional interaction between the two of them. This will cause some readers who like Ma'in to abandon the book, and it will make some people unhappy. You can eat the protagonist's dog food, but you don't want to eat the supporting character's dog food.

Esdeath blew me out

Don't know how to write emotional scenes? If you want any kind of relationship in a comprehensive comic, it will be finished with bulldozers.

Variety comic single heroine! ! Retreat

It's okay, but it just doesn't feel right to have a single female protagonist. Look at which of the Heavenly Bulls has a single female protagonist.

Single heroine, single heroine, if you only love one, then accept the others as needed. Taking them as maids will not delay your single heroine.

After reading more than fifty chapters, I felt lonely. I think there is a main plot, but the writing is boring. I think there is no main plot. It seems that I have written a little more. In the fog, the golden finger of the character is vague, and the lottery draws loneliness. The improvement of strength is also a mystery, it can be solved in one stroke. Not to mention updates, self-congratulations?

Pig's feet are the same as retarded, not to mention Esdeath, they are just a person with the same name, the second change makes them mentally retarded

Those who are attracted to Esdeath don't want to watch it anymore if Esdeath is gone or there are fewer scenes. There are many such articles.

Are you using BBK to read the characters in the machine code?

Awesome. I just wanted to read the summary of the results and write it for fun. It disgusts me.

Does the heroine read the title of the book? It means that no girl in Zhanchi can escape the grasp of the protagonist. Esdeath is the eldest wife, which is a perfect explanation. 🤗

I suggest that if you really want to read this book, keep it for a few months. Depending on the updates, the author might give up on it in a few weeks. Anyway, new chapters will be picked up from the old ones first. If it hasn't been updated after a long time, there is no need for us to continue reading.

With the protagonist's "nonsense" chuunibyou appearance in Fairy Tail, calling him a sage is too much. After all, it would be more appropriate to refer to the emperor, or delusion, or something like that...

Keep books! Everyone, the reading experience is indeed not good...

Brother, that's not what you did when you were working as a Qin Qin, right? I see that you have become a eunuch after completing your full-time work this month, so you slipped away.

Due to lack of time, basically the second chapter will have repeated chapters from the previous ones... But basically I will complete the revision within an hour. If you have a bad reading experience, you can watch it the next day. Please be considerate! I also want to code on my days off, but unfortunately I want to play games once I'm not at work. I try to find time to save two manuscripts to solve this bad reading experience. I'm sorry for the slow code speed...

I feel that since the Inuyasha chapter hastily ended, the writing style has become very strange. Fairy Tail is so easy to understand that I can't understand what the author is writing.

I read the title of the book, so is the heroine of this book Chitong? Esdeath? Or the starting beast?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

My like quanyecha

Let's have a good one!

Very nice. I like it very much. Update soon, brother.

I knew from the very beginning that I couldn't write this book, haha

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Very nice, looking forward to further updates