Naruto: This Uchiha Was Born with Dual Mangekyo

Born with double pupils, four kaleidoscopes, the destined owner of the Eternal Eye, awesome!

I don't think the ancients would have used the word "double" to describe something like this, with two pupils side by side. This is quite bizarre.

The following is what double pupils look like; they're not exactly beautiful, but they're not ugly either.

The writing is alright, but I want to ask, does the author intend to portray the protagonist as an ascetic, a single female lead, a prime minister like Cao Cao, a harem, someone who plays with women and then discards them, treating women as dispensable commodities or consumables? Which one is it?

I don't understand what's so good about being a captain in the Dark Guard?

I don't understand the Uchiha clan. Why not just betray other ninja villages and become a harem member, or start their own Uchiha clan in another ninja village?

Throughout history, dynasties have often perished due to the incompetence of their descendants. It's clear that even if the world of Naruto were unified, it would still fragment due to various reasons. Therefore, Madara Uchiha might have been right; although he lived in a dream world, it was the most comfortable life for everyone. And then there's Sarutobi. The reason he made Naruto suffer so much might be because of his wife. After all, his wife died protecting Naruto.

Author, you correctly set the peak Uchiha population at only 300, right? In the Fourth Shinobi World War, the Allied Forces numbered 80,000, with most being Chunin or higher, and very few Genin, since all White Zetsu were Chunin. Konoha contributed around 20,000.

It's acceptable to write the relationship as complicated, but explicitly stating the distance between the woman and the gift is worse than not writing it at all.

An old-school Naruto fan-made cheat code 😅