Cheating Begins with Global Martial Arts

The prologue is a failure, there is no plot where the plot comes from, you can choose and change it and still lick it, "Warriors must fight" does not have a passionate feeling, this work does not have the "faith" of "fighting" to be invincible, etc. I feel that there is nothing to read. I only read 2 chapters and I don't want to read it. It would be better if you just follow the original work.

Awesome, the system copied Fang Ping's and used wealth points. At the beginning, he took a bank card, a Qi and Blood Pill and rushed to Yangcheng by train. Lu Fengrou also believed that Wu Kuishan killed his daughter and ignored the protagonist's son and did not give him resources. If the author writes directly without reading the original work, he should create his own original work! I especially hate the kind of thing that wants the popularity of other people's books while changing other people's settings.

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The previous part was too nonsensical. The good guy was punched by Wu Kuishan from Mowu to Yangcheng. If he didn't have the eighth-grade golden body cultivation level, he would have finished the game directly. As a result, the protagonist didn't care. A messy bunch.

The Eagle trilogy is really difficult to write.

Change more, write more specifically, go down to the dungeon more, and take on quests!

If you don't invest and he doesn't invest, when will the work come out? If you don't chase him, he won't chase you. All the burden will be on your back. I hope all readers will vote more and follow up every time. Thank you ๑•́₃•̀๑ {"NickName":"Saiya Fishbone","UserId":397920619}

Prologue: A little poison, the book spirit is extremely poisonous, the two book spirits are poisoned and die☠️

Is the heroine Fang Yuan? ? ? What do you think? It's such a weird idea.

If you change the first few chapters, more people will read them.

Lu Roufeng is the most protective of shortcomings. How could she not care about her own child?

Come on 😡

This kind of time-travel flow is so interesting. Come on, the author, keep updating.

Additional refinement😰

It's better to make less changes, otherwise how can you take it back if it deviates from the main line? The only way to correct it is to correct typos. How do you know if you are making progress or regressing if you don't finish it?

What is written in the book spirit at the back? It's a mess. I really don't know what the book spirit is. It's of no use to the protagonist. I don't know why I keep it. From other people's perspective, I feel that the book spirit is controlling the protagonist.

Add some juice?

I remember these two people must be daughters, right?

? Starting from a few pictures, I can see it normally. That is to say, there are no such two garbage book spirits.

What I hate the most is Global Gaowu. Where is the one about killing wanted criminals? The protagonist uses a color to kill people and has delusions of persecution. He kills people and then makes up a wanted criminal to give money. It's a bit funny.

? I read a few more pictures, and I felt that the protagonist now is Shu Ling's dog. Although people can't kill him, they can slowly turn it into a dog they raise, just like Dou Er. . Anyway, I see a trend in this regard in the current content. After the other person's goal is completed, he can kill the protagonist with one move. I feel like it would be unreasonable to develop in this way.

Let's take a look🤭

Look at your Douyin, aren't you still posting this work 25 years ago? Why was this work completed in two or three years?