You Play Your Cards, I'll Fix Mine

6. Your plot makes me stupid. Your early achievements are all due to your subject matter. It has nothing to do with your writing and plot. When people leave, it is all because of your plot.

It's poisonous, but not completely poisonous. It has a weird freshness, retro-style writing style, retro-style pretentious slaps in the face, retro-style collective intelligence, retro-style rich family plot, retro-style... Well, I can't make it up, but it's quite fresh in a word, and it belongs to poison therapy!

Apart from some beggar protagonists, this is the worst start. The turning point is a bit embarrassing. Who would help a stranger out of nowhere? There are so many miserable people, so why would you help the protagonist?

I admit there is no system, no plug-ins, what are the cards in the introduction?

The smell started to feel wrong at the beginning of Chapter 2. Shennong said that I was too familiar with this smell.

The protagonist has been deflated, let me emphasize that he has been deflated.

The poison test is completed: the plot is too cliche, the protagonist has little motivation, and the plot pushes the protagonist to move throughout the whole process.

Are you afraid that this kind of opening is not enough?

It's not wrong to help others and it's not wrong to repay kindness. What is wrong is that you do not improve yourself while helping others and are pushed away. What is wrong is that you do not have the power to sympathize with others but indulge your own arrogance. I don't have the heart to cultivate immortality at all. Seeking the Tao is difficult and requires constant persistence. If you don't have the strength, just practice honestly. If you don't have the strength, you have to make do with other people's things and not practice. It's really stupid.

The protagonist has a good mentality and a sense of responsibility. However, he is too weak and not very smart. He does not have any ambitious goals. Improving his strength depends entirely on luck. He is a pure tool man.

I really don't know how this kind of book is recommended.

"Humanity Continent" is too difficult for newcomers! Please support me.

The world background seems to be only the academy now. It seems that there is no one outside the academy. The whole world is concentrated in this academy, just like a copy, which is a bit small. The protagonist clearly realizes that he is not the protagonist of a cool novel, and the Virgin does not express it, but more like a passionate protagonist who sneaks into a suspense novel and is deceived into pretending to be intelligent. A reckless person will turn over the table. The Virgin has the power and will act, but the protagonist will say no and wait for others to let others go. He is not courageous, especially when the author writes Ming, all the supporting characters have finished their work, and the protagonist has been clearly pointed out the problem. After the character of Youlong appears, the protagonist is still repeating mistakes, not borrowing external forces, and fighting against the air. People will grow, and no external force can save the protagonist (Youlong, another self, is currently in an erratic position). It is recommended to start watching directly after Youlong appears.

This plot of yours is really poisonous. I really get it.

This book is very, very good. It is like a fairy grass in the book. It is not poisonous at all. Everyone is welcome to read it.

You reversed the plot and then Long Yuan came out. There are also many details in the story, such as inexplicable violent thoughts and so on. I can only say that the hole is dug quite deep, but it is too far back. The previous chapters have lost a lot of my interest. The protagonist has always been frustrated and played like a fool.

Listen to me, stop looking and leave!

Listen to my advice, it's not too late to run away now. By the way, I jumped to see the second picture and ran away.

After reading Chapter 40, each character has a distinct personality, but the plot logic seems to be pieced together. The protagonist has a low IQ and has no idea of ​​his own. He just goes where he goes. The combat power is vague and the output description is inexplicable.

I wrote this at the beginning, but it slipped away after reading two pages.

Author, don't listen to what those trolls say, just write according to your ideas, stick to it and sooner or later one day you will become a master platinum gold medal

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Hey, I heard it's a retro poison... Let me try it... Hehe

I was poisoned to death, I couldn't stand it anymore, and I slipped away. Come on, author.

It's very well written, good luck to the author!

It's so damn poisonous that I can't stand it.