Beginning to Enlighten the Heavens After Pulling the Coffin in Kowloon

The most embarrassing thing about Zhutianliu is that he has traveled through multiple worlds, lived for hundreds or thousands of years, and come back to compete with young people who are dozens of years old in the main world. Staying in the low-level world for too long is a waste of time. The plot can be longer, but the time is better to be shorter.

Chapter 300: Dao Palace, Chapter 600: Transformation into a Dragon, Chapter 800: Entering the Secret Realm of Immortal Platform, I won't tell you what the content is, right?

Zhe Tian went to Datang Shuanglong to be really talented, and he could still have more than 30,000 fans, 6.

The Jidao Great Emperor is considered to have weak single-body cosmic combat power, and is in the realm of Xuanxian. The combat power of the three true immortals in the single universe, the realm of golden immortals. The Red Dust Immortal is a weak super-single cosmic combat power, and is in the realm of Golden Immortal Dao Fruit. The Immortal King is a super-single cosmic combat power, in the Taiyi Golden Immortal realm. The quasi-immortal emperor has weak multi-level combat power and is quasi-Da Luo realm. The Immortal Emperor is a multi-level cosmic combat power, in the Daluo realm. Ji Dao (Transcendent Half-Step Immortal Emperor) is an infinite and diverse combat power, the realm of Hunyuan Golden Immortal. The transcendent Immortal Emperor has the combat power of the infinite omnipotent universe (infinite box) and is close to the realm of the great road. This is a comparison of combat power and realm that I think is reasonable and acceptable!

Is it the Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty again? The two dragons are too weak, and they don't even have Shattering Void (the evil emperor is not counted, he is a character in the legend of Borderlands). The Sanren Ning Daoqi can't compare with the Heavenly Master Sun En, and the evil king Shi Zhixuan can't compare with the magician Pang Ban, let alone the original protagonist Double Dragon. The two gangsters are incomparable with other protagonists. Both the evil way and the righteous way are too weak.

With more than 1 million words, he has transformed into a dragon and has been wandering around in the world of low martial arts. Others go to dungeons to level up quickly, but you go to dungeons to gain achievements.

This book is not popular, mainly because your biography of Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty took too long and wasted a lot of readers' enthusiasm. If you had just written about ten chapters and then ended it immediately, you might be able to regain some of your popularity.

Chapter 250: Cultivation of the Wheel Sea, plus Dao Palace, Level 4, Dragon Transformation, that is to say, it takes 1000 chapters to cultivate the Immortal Platform, another 200 chapters before killing the Dao, 300 chapters before the Great Sage, and 300 chapters for the Quasi-Emperor Ninth Level Heaven. In other words, it takes 1800 chapters to become a great emperor? What a bullshit, get out of here.

Did the author write that martial arts was born? Zhetian, what's the point of wearing Ssangyong? Smelly and long, abandoned

Hey, I really don't like to watch the trend of opening high and going low now.

As expected, the combat power collapsed. The Dacheng Hegemonic Body is as great as the Dacheng Holy Body and can fight the Great Emperor. The Great Achievement means becoming a quasi-emperor in the Ninth Level. Now a quasi-emperor in the Ninth Level can fight the Great Emperor, but he can't defeat a Sage King. Does that mean that the current protagonist, the Sage King, can fight the Great Emperor and the Ancient Emperor? Then after the Great Sage, the supreme beings in the restricted area will be slapped one by one.

Did you make Zhu Xian's power level too high? The original work of Zhu Xian is essentially a romance novel with a very low level of power. The so-called cultivators can't even do Bigu, and they are the only cultivators who will starve to death.

Go back quickly, the dungeon is meaningless, no one likes to read it

Speechless, too watery, the martial arts novel Zhe Tian Qu is so hilarious that it was written so many years ago. He started running before he even learned to walk. What a talent.

Don't write too long about Double Dragon. I feel like some of them are pretty good. 1. Fengyun, Dragon, Phoenix, Turtle and Lin, Divine Stone, Tianxin Jue, Moko Wuliang 2. Demon Sword Life and Death Chess, Demon Sword, Heart Sword (Nine Dragon Stone), Four Symbols of Heaven's Will, Innate Gangqi, and Lu Ziqiao's 5 arrows. 3. Fighting for hegemony (not Fengyun), the four unicorn jade and the four great magic arts, the magic sword and the magic sword technique 4. The Young King (Wesley), spaceship, alien bracelet, alien ring 5. Shuiyue Cave, dragon magic, Tong family magic, dragon sword, Netherworld sword (time is too long), Xue Ruyi (a pair), Xue Ruyi's heart, blood python, spiritual mirror. 6. The Legend of Sword and Fairy, Xiansi, Wuling magic, Qionghua swordsmanship, Qionghua weapon refining skill, Wangshu sword, Xihe sword (a bit difficult), demon world amethyst, Shennong legacy, sun-shooting bow, Wulingzhu (specialty of Xianjian) Xiansan, Shushan swordsmanship, magic sword (😍), Holy spirit bead, Tang Xuejian (God) Tree fruit), heart-protecting lotus, five poisonous beasts, Tianchi water Xianyi, Dionysus curse, sword control, unicorn horn (can only be wronged to hit it twice), phoenix, thread of lead, Nanzhao magic, scientist magic, small stone, demon-eating Gu, five-spirit magic, Kuafu (god of snake manipulation) 7. Zhuxian, Qingyun sword technique, Qingyun magic. The Heavenly Book, the Zhuxian Sword, the spells of various sects, the unique skills, and the Heavenly Emperor's treasury. 8. Dragon clan, a bunch of dragon bone crosses, Lu Mingfei, Lu Mingze, Yamata no Orochi (don't ask why it's not the White King 🔪), and the Seven Deadly Sins. (Except for Eriyi, everyone who can use the sword has been killed. It's best to kill the author as well. Xia Mi? What Xia Mi? Ionia is high-spirited!) [It is recommended that the author not write like this, there is a high probability that many people will lose fans 😏] 9. The King of Fighters 97, a bunch of fighting skills, Austrian righteousness 10. The War of the Three Kingdoms, the Book of Heaven's Escape, the Book of Earth's Escape, the Book of Human Escape, Taiping Qingling, Taiqing Alchemy, Immortal Pen, Zhao'an Zhuan, Zhang Lingjian, Yitian Sword, Qingzhi Sword, Ganjiang Sword, Tai'a Sword, Invisibility Cloak, Huang Shigong The above are purely imaginary and are for reference only. Ssangyong really don't write too long.

Isn't it just a half-ancestor who can't handle a monk who isn't even an Immortal? The ancestor gods of the Immortal Realm can open up the world, and the half-ancestors can at worst break through the surface of the earth. Smelting the planet. In the trilogy, the worst is the Immortal Ancient Supreme. It is already the backbone force in ordinary cross-border wars. Lan Nuo had just gone to the center of the sun to train his troops when he became half-ancestor. The Sendai monks couldn't even break through the earth's surface and cross the stars. You are not a good person in Sendai, how can you be evenly matched by He Banzu 😓😓. According to your theory, ancestor gods are worse than saints? The Ancestral God is a long-lasting existence that can wander around the sea of ​​​​the world and survive alone when the world is destroyed. Crossing borders is a basic operation as long as there is no one to stop it. Even the emperor can't compare with it. Even if lifespan is not discussed, the Nimbus Ancestral God at least corresponds to the Ancient Immortal, and the Supreme and Stoneman King at least correspond to the Immortal King. The Sky Covering Technique may be invincible at the same level, but its essence is so different. Are you going to fight the Half-Ancestor with your head? His combat power is so high that it's nothing to look at.

I feel like I've been stuck writing about low martial arts planes. Except for Zhu Xian, who has a little bit of stuff, nothing else works. When the cultivation level is low, the combat skills and martial arts in the small world can still be used.

I have to say that the author has unique taste, and even an old woman in her 60s or 70s has slept with her. . . Zhu Yuyan is over seventy, and Fan Qinghui must be sixty according to age. This kind of taste was more common more than ten years ago, but it is rare in recent years Datang Juan is crazy about sleeping with women, Dugu Feng, Li Xiuning, and Shan Meixian are over forty. They are really hungry ghosts 😅😅😅

I feel like it's a bit poorly written. If you want to travel through other worlds, just travel through them. The key is still the world of low martial arts. It feels like going from the world of high martial arts to the world of low martial arts is like going to a latrine to touch something. In an instant, I no longer have the desire to watch.

I can't stand watching anymore. After more than 300 chapters, it's okay to forget that the protagonist hasn't broken through and become an emperor. Even if he hasn't become a great sage, it's a no-brainer. You might as well give up.

Just take a look at the table of contents. The chapter titles are all rubbish, without exception.

The protagonist's outlook on life is so fragmented, it's even more disgusting than Tang San.

This fanfic is not as good as other Zhetian fanfics.

I took a look at the table of contents and saw that more than half of it had passed, The Fourth Transformation of the Dragon. I don't know how the author managed to pull it out of my rhythm.

In the original work, Ye Fan has been going straight to Sendai for 10 years. If you waste 10 years in a small world, it is just a source of life. Forget it. Since your setting is the martial arts intention in your small world, it has laid a foundation for you. If you practice casually in Zhetian for a period of time, you will be basically invincible in all small worlds, let alone reach the Tao Palace. Even if you cultivate a life spring, you can't say you are invincible, at least no one can kill you. The life spring can fly. In a place as big as the small world, you can directly travel to Mu Cangwu, the North Sea. Do you have to play house with people in the small world? Not to mention that you have obtained a psychic weapon from the Qing Emperor's tomb. You can't hit anyone with just one move? It's really funny to see the protagonist and the people in the small world playing house with him. Are you creatures from the same world? Having a harem in the small world is more exciting than training. You also fight with a group of people in the martial arts world. Wouldn't it be better for you to steal their martial arts and go back to Zhetian to practice? You also talked about the experience of fighting in the small world.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. I'm suffering from embarrassment.

I just jumped on the street and stayed in a high-end fantasy world for 10 years. I always skipped it.

I didn't grasp the pacing well. I was always in a small world. In your small world, it would be fun if you just pretended to pick up girls. You could do some hard training in the big world, which would be helpful for cultivation as the main line. Is there a small world that would be more fun but I didn't write it out. It's really unnecessary. Moreover, the pace was a bit slow. There were more than 900 chapters in total. I was halfway through, barely reaching Sendai. 930 Chapters were just about becoming a saint. The next 60 chapters were directly from becoming a saint to being an Immortal Emperor.

Does the latest novel have multiple female protagonists?

I was a little impressed when I started talking. With both hands open, I am very productive every day.