Master Zhang Zhenren

I have read Ark of Ark before. To be honest, it is one of the best among the two-dimensional light novels I have read. Although it is not a type of fanfic like The Missing Ship Girl Next Door, but looking at Ark fanfic, Adancha's work can be regarded as a masterpiece. However, when it comes to this book, I have read the first 9 chapters and now I have written Chapter 9. Maybe it's because I didn't get into the main plot, but I felt that the first 9 chapters were very bland. Some places feel unexpanded and the writing is too thick. Chapter 5 Zhang Wen and his party came to the backyard of Baiyunguan. The description of the abandoned backyard, Taoist priest Gao's embarrassment, the ensuing cleaning technique of spreading beans to become soldiers, and Douding's behavior, always felt like they just slipped away. Isn't it too bland? I know it's taboo for readers to dictate how the author writes a novel, but I didn't want to do that. I just thought it was too bland to read, like eating white rice. The rice is dry and hard, without its own fragrance, and most importantly, there are no side dishes. Chapter 9 Zhang Wen calculated the acceleration of the escape of the spiritual energy of heaven and earth through the number of plum blossoms. This book is a fantasy of cultivation, right? How to manifest it? Is it the four words "plum blossoms are easy to count"? Are there things in the book "Easy to Count Plum Blossoms"? Symbols, more symbols. What would you say is the difference between the aura world and real life? With the presence of spiritual energy, what will become of plants and animals? I can't understand what Baiyun Temple looks like from the author's description? I can't imagine it. Characters appearing on the scene: Ying Hanye, Zhang Wen, Zhang Xiuying, Gao Ruming... Wait, we have all finished reading, what do they look like? What temper? No, only nine chapters have very few words, but nine years have passed. I always feel that a lot of things have not been explained clearly. Nine years have passed, and we have gained a little understanding of the characters through a specific incident. It was too fast, too fast. Now they are like human-shaped wooden signs. Their names are written on the wooden signs, and nothing else can be seen except their gender. Nine years, nine years, how much will a person change? How many things have happened in these nine years, how many things have happened to Zhang Xiuying, how many times has Ying Hanye visited Zhang Wen, how will she live? Where is Zhang Wen? How has his state of mind been during these nine years? How could you let these nine years pass with just a few words? Rely on future memories? "Hey, how did the protagonists live their lives before they entered the main plot? Did Xiuying act like a child? What would happen if Han Ye knew that Zhang Wen had found a little girl to take with him? What was Zhang Wen thinking?"

Coming, coming 😍

Byd, secretly publishing books? 😳

When will the author write about Ark again?

Byd publishes new books without making any noise, right?

Normal update?

I am coming! Auto-subscription is on...

Return to Rhode Island is a good read. Is the author still interested in writing a book like this?

Zichuan ➕ What are you thinking about, the author of Quit Team? Although nostalgia can also be said to be romantic, it's hard to say how many people in the early fantasy style still follow this style.

Mao's novel has already exploded. It's a bit difficult to bring this novel back to life I think you can finish that novel as soon as possible. Start a new book.