The Legend of Zhang Tie, the Story of a Mortal Cultivating Immortality

A little personal opinion! The main world view of mortals is not suitable for adding tauren and the like (elements of the Western fantasy flow from another world). They are all excellent training materials for immortal cultivators. In addition, the style of the original text has been greatly changed... In addition, the recent chapters are too big and difficult to write in the middle and late stages. It will easily collapse. It would be better to write about entering Lijiazhuang. Someone got the inheritance of casual cultivators and practiced several levels of Qi to seek revenge. Later, he was attacked to death by Zhang Tie and got some opportunities. Doctor Mo might as well let him continue to live, kill the remaining children, replenish his essence and prolong his life. Better develop the Jiayuan City copy... If Han Li kills Mo Juren, how will Han Li face Zhang Tie. How does Zhang Tie deal with himself, and how can he talk about the deep love between brothers? It is easy to get hung up too much when playing a game and quickly lose the sense of experience. It is better to write (containers such as the Demon Refining Cauldron can refine and optimize blood, spirit, demonic energy, minerals, etc.). The randomness of the system is too high, regardless of whether you have heard of the techniques or items. It leaves readers without a sense of experience and participation (´~'*) zzz (When writing a fanfic, you must always write features within the framework of the original text to attract the original readers! If it is too detached, then why read the fanfic?)