
The Beginning of Douluo Breaks with Tang Hao
斗罗之开局与唐昊决裂
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- 3y ago
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Chapter 44 written by the author and the route of Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue are really impressive. If you think about Wuhundian from the perspective of a modern country, Bibi Dong is in the Cao camp and his heart is in the Han Dynasty, and Bibi Dong also puts The theoretical secrets of the ancestors of Wuhun Palace were all shown to Yu Xiaogang. Bibi Dong did not think about the consequences of running away with Yu Xiaogang, which led to Qian Xunji raping Bibi Dong. Judging from the result, Bibi Dong was entirely to blame. Furthermore, After Bibi Dong was raped by Qian Xunji, she began to deliberately destroy Wuhun Palace, which is Qian Renxue's home. If Bibi Dong went to other sects, then there is no need to think about Bibi Dong's fate. Bibi Dong is Qian Renxue's home. Death while blocking a knife is also a shining point, but it cannot change the fact that Bibi Dong is a white-eyed wolf. Although Qian Xunji's methods are dirty, his qualifications and experience are definitely worthy of being the Pope of Wuhun Palace. I only express my opinion, please don't take it seriously.
In fact, Tang Hao doesn't care about his son's life or death at all, which can be seen from the original work. If Tang San hadn't been a time traveler, and with the help of the villagers from Holy Soul Village, he would have almost been saved from death by Tang Hao. Later, when Tang San was four years old, he kept drinking there and let Tang San go free, letting Tang San take care of him and ignoring Tang San at all. To be honest, if Tang San didn't have the Xuantian Technique, if Tang Hao trained him like this, even a genius would be useless!
Those who don't like to watch double heroines, either single or in a harem. Two people feel like castration. Say you are dedicated, but you have two. Say you are carefree, but you only have two. And it's basically the same recipe as in this book, just change the soup without changing the medicine.
I feel like this book is not as good as the previous one, and I don't like the character of the protagonist. Flender Zao Wou-Ki and Oscar lived together for a period of time, and he taught Oscar as a student, and they developed feelings for him. The protagonist killed his teacher and recruited him. But a normal person would not accept it and would feel hatred towards the protagonist. If he accepted it, he would be a white-eyed wolf who betrayed his teacher and accepted him as his father. The protagonist is also a bit self-righteous, doing things based on his preferences, and acting so strong even though he is weak. If Qian Renxue didn't have the aura of the protagonist, he would have been killed for blaspheming others.
It would be better for the two brothers to join forces and both be abandoned by Tang Hao! Tang San's character should have improved now, right?
This book feels a bit nondescript. The system clearly gives the mission to overthrow one palace, two countries, and three sects. But what are you doing with Qian Renxue? Qian Renxue is from Wuhun Palace, and her dream is for Wuhun Palace to dominate the world, and the protagonist's mission is to overthrow all the six forces mentioned above. In other words, the protagonist will be hostile to Qian Renxue in the future. I don't understand how you can marry Qian Renxue in this case? Are you thinking of starting a fight with Qian Renxue?
Isn't this hard black? Only one explanation In Tang Hao's original work, it was discovered that Tang San was a time traveler. If Tang Hao didn't care about Tang San at all, why would he take Tang San as a burden and run away from a few titled Douluo in Wuhun Palace? He was very self-reliant at a very young age and practiced several special techniques. Tang Hao was not a fool, but he was still a titled Douluo. He must have been able to see that his son was no longer inside the shell. His son was gone, his wife was not much different from dead, and the sect was in retreat. If he couldn't find any helpers, a mere low-level titled Douluo went to fight Qiandaoliu's Spirit Hall. It's hard to describe how desperate he was, but he was determined. After Tang San inherited the Clear Sky Hammer and Blue Silver Grass, he dispelled this doubt and believed that his son was indeed a gifted cauldron and not a different person inside the shell. What if he used Ah Yin as a tool and kept a hundred thousand year soul bone without using it and not giving it to the Clear Sky Sect, so he just kept it there as a family heirloom? He may not be a good person, but all the black points are hard black. The protagonist occupies the magpie's nest and the shells of other people's children. In turn, he demands that others treat you with all their heart and soul, otherwise they will kill Tang Hao. Not killing you to avenge his child is already considered a very kind person. He is not as knowledgeable as modern people, but this does not mean that he is stupid. He is the biological father of "Tang San" and "Tang Han", not the biological father of Tang San and Tang Han. In other words Why should we raise the protagonist? Shennong has fallen. This book cannot be read with the mind and three views. It can only be used as a regular Internet cool article to vent.
Break? It's ridiculous that your body of flesh and blood was given to you by others. How do you have the right to say this? Unless you learn like Nezha and commit suicide by cutting your flesh. This is really inhumane!
It's not as good as the previous book. There were many reasonable things in the previous book, but none of them are reasonable in this one. . . . (You killed those two guys and then went to collect the Oscar? You wrote about him as a white-eyed wolf in the previous book, but you want to accept it in this one? So what if he is born with full soul power? The practicality is really not as good as that of Jiuxin Haitang, let alone a white-eyed wolf)
Destroying Bibi Dong is as disgusting as Ning Fengzhi, the shit-troublemaker.
In fact, the author also has double standards. Bibi Dong traitor, black. Qian Renxue traitor, wash. Gu Yuena traitor, wash. Ning Rongrong is a traitor, black. Hu Liena traitor, black. Oscar is obscene, washed. Actually, it just depends on the author's preference. If you like it, find reasons to wash it from multiple angles. I have to throw the blame even if I can't find any reason. Anyone who doesn't like it will find excuses from multiple angles. No need to look for reasons, they are all written in the original work. Just retell it if you want.
I haven't seen any major bad points yet, but there are quite a few minor bad points. The language is confusing, the protagonist is too slutty, and the interaction between men and women is unnatural.
There are many pure black Tang Hao. Ah Yin was only level seventy-nine at that time. Because he was kind-hearted, he couldn't level up without killing soul beasts. But Tang Hao was level eighty-nine. If he really just wanted soul rings and soul bones, he could just kill them with a hammer. Is it really necessary to cheat? If a child is born later, it will be abnormal at first glance. It will look like an adult. It is good if he is not beaten to death like Li Jing chopped off Nezha.
Did Shen Nong test poison? ? ?
I was so speechless when I saw your villagers. It's so embarrassing. You are not as generous as you in treating inflammation.
No wonder you opened a new vest. It turns out that you are offending both sides if you don't please them. Cut it quickly
The strongest force of Douluo is Qian Renxue, and the strongest resource of Douluo is Dugu Yan. One of these two women has to live a hundred years less, and both of them have to directly ascend to godhood.
Author, I like your book very much, give me a hard time torturing Bibi Dong😁
I think the author is still a bit lacking in terms of readership. Almost all the fans who originally chased Douluo and Dou Po are now married and have children. Of course, relying on current anime fans is not excluded, but the author still has to consider fans of the original works. Most of these men are now married and have children. This category of people includes me. However, it is really difficult to accept this kind of plot that directly expresses the slaughter of young children. It does not need to be said that the fantasy world is cruel, and it is not unacceptable to eradicate the roots. After all, there is no shortage of history buffs who see it at every turn. However, some content can be ignored, but it will change the flavor if it is pointed out.
Changing the soup without changing the medicine is no different from being abandoned by Tang Hao at the beginning. The plot is like a copy and paste, not as good as that one 😅