Devouring the Starry Sky, I Have the Jade Disk of Creation

What the hell did you write on the jade plate?

The first two chapters were such a big mess. I remember that the giant ax would go to the earth to go back in time and see the formation of the earth.

There are mainly two situations in swallowing. One kind only likes to read the Earth chapter, and there are those who don't like to read the Earth chapter. They don't like the Earth chapter because they are all badly written. Not to mention that there is no opportunity. The only opportunity that is possible is the inheritance of the Ink Star. There is no other use. The earth is exerting its power even though it is known. It's wrong to practice as if you have acquired a treasure, and they are all time-traveled and not born on the earth. Not to mention the effect is mainly concentrated on the Three Musketeers of the Earth. Without Goldfinger, it is nothing, and the achievements are limited. Anyway, there is nothing interesting about the Earth chapter. I don't think there is anything interesting anyway.

This is so embarrassing to watch. I feel like there is no difference between a pig's feet and a fool.

At the beginning of the game, I persuaded you to quit. Talk to Babata about the continent of origin. You are taking advantage of the original will. The original book clearly stated that in order to protect the three thousand universe seas, no one can say anything more than a true god.

Don't use the name Good Fortune Jade Disk! When will you be able to speak on a jade plate made of good fortune like this? The ability is the same as that of the portable old man before. It is better to convert the fragments of the jade plate into something that can increase the ability of enlightenment or deduction.

None of the Swallowing Stars fans became popular because of the Earth chapter. Among the more popular books, the Earth chapter of Lord of All Creation was written more, but that book also became popular due to the Universe chapter. It is true that the Earth Chapter of Devouring the Original Work is very good, but that is the original work. Except for the love between children and intrigues (which are not needed for Devouring Fans), there is nothing to write about in the Earth chapter, because it is too easy for the cheating protagonist to break through to the planet level, and adding any pretense and slap in the face is actually a poisonous point.

I have tried the poison and it was poisoned to death in a few chapters. Can I practice swordsmanship to become the Lord of the Universe? The first level corresponds to a warrior? This swordsmanship has 9999999999 levels. The first level requires cheating and practice.

Is Chapter 49 funny? It is impossible to say anything about the continent of origin. The rules of the original universe

There is a Jade Disk of Creation. It is not an exaggeration to start with a planet. No matter how frustrating it is, there is no need to write about the earth, because the speed of understanding the laws is too fast. Maybe one can understand a law in one epiphany.

I'm sorry that I asked you to quit at the beginning. I can't stand it any longer.

After reading a few chapters, I felt that the writing was too casual and not rigorous. What is the purpose of creation? What is the effect? Isn't the cosmic sword technique a secret attack technique? How can I improve my level after practicing it? How much content is there in the secret method that leads directly to the realm of true gods? Can the brain capacity of an average human be accommodated? In the neurological response test, shouldn't the result be that the junior fighters are excellent and the intermediate fighters are excellent? Good or average? Why is there an incredible level? Full of flaws! Can't you copy the settings of Devour?

IQ online? Ah, that's it?

Do you know why the earth chapter you wrote was so popular? When you wanted to write the earth chapter, did you take into account that you were a newcomer? And you and the original work, do you think it can surpass the original work? I really like watching Devouring. Do you hope to have a heroine-like drama? Is it possible? It just proves that the male protagonist is normal. If you are like the Lord of All Things, you can write about the military, or you can write about the Great Nirvana. If you don't rush into the street in this earth chapter, don't be too ambitious. If it doesn't work, just write the universe chapter honestly and give it more room to use. If you are a novice, it's okay.

He obviously had a grudge against the God of Thunder, but was forced to give up revenge and escape in embarrassment. However, he won the battle and let him go easily... I wonder if the author is too smart to spoil the plot or because his thoughts are different from ordinary people's?

I know the protagonist is not well portrayed, so I can accept complaints, but don't use bad words. . . This is my last bit of stubbornness. . . Newbies, new books, writing and learning at the same time. Please still try your best to complain in a civilized manner. . .

After reading a little bit, I can only say that it is a composition written by an elementary school student! This is no longer a piece of writing, it's just boiled water!

Author, have you read your novel carefully? Isn't it embarrassing to read...

It is impossible for the original universe to let you tell the continent of origin. Those strange objects are the proof. I have read a lot of them, but I felt that it was not good, so I stopped watching it. Because there is an original work somewhere, I prefer the protagonist to have a higher level in the early stage and occasionally help the three-person group 🙂

It's really embarrassing, the protagonist is too novice, and the system is probably a martial arts version. .

In the original work, Babata has never even heard of the Lord of the Universe. How can he hear of the Cosmic Sea here? All the information above the True God is blocked by the will of the original universe. Can the protagonist still talk to Babata about the Origin Continent?

The beginning is a bit poisonous. This is the first book that can start well and be poisonous.

The first chapter directly persuades people to quit, what the hell is that written about?

If there is anything unreasonable, feel free to complain. If three or four people complain, I will correct it. With an outline, the overall story will not fall apart, and short-term plots can be modified. If you like to read it, there are also the Continent of Origin and the Ancient World, such as why Nuwa left her soul body and where did Hongjun go.

Why did the author write this book? I really can't figure it out, the results are not ideal, and book friends are disgusted after reading it. What is the picture? The setting of Nuwa and the idiot-like character of the protagonist two, who can read it? The Taoist friends who can read it are all awesome Klass👍

Not to mention in the original universe, when we went to the Cosmic Sea and even the East River, they said that the continent of origin was called hometown and ancient civilization. On Earth, the protagonist can clearly say that the God King originated from the continent, but he can only say 666

Can Babata know the cosmic sea?

I don't know about you, but I haven't even finished the first chapter. . Slip away😥

I was so addicted after reading the second chapter that I couldn't stand it any longer. I'm curious about how those people felt after reading it.

The full text of "Swallowing Starry Sky" can only be seen on the earth, and the rest are just floating clouds, which last for tens of thousands of years. The exercises are too profound. To upgrade to a higher level, you have to train your heart and become a saint. According to the logic of the original work, the strong ones will all be saints in the end, and they will all lose their humanity and their true self.