I Am a Gold Medal Coach in Football

It's normal for your book to get poor grades. Your topic selection is inappropriate. There's really nothing to write about about men's football. Everyone knows that men's football is bad, it is almost inevitable. There are very few people who read sports. In addition, the men's football team is not up to par, and even fewer people read football articles. On this basis, you still have to lead a foreign team. This is simply screening in disguise. Readers know it! I clicked in excitedly, and when I saw it, the good guy turned out to be a foreign team. I saw more than 20 pictures, and my interest was completely lost. For sports novels, the most important thing is never the plot, but the sense of immersion. It's the feeling of putting yourself into the role of an athlete. The spirit of striving upward step by step from the lowest level is the charm of sports competition. The key is that the author writes about foreign teams from the beginning, which directly destroys his sense of involvement. If you say you are writing about the national football team, I might take a look at it. If you are writing about foreign teams, then you really don't have a sense of immersion. Most of the people left now are looking at the skill data. You must grasp this aspect well. Once this place collapses, your book will be completely finished. I see that your plug-in is a football simulator, and point distribution is a big problem in itself. And are fancy things like club skills really useful? 100 Adds 10%, which is 110. 10 Points adds 10%, which is 11 at most. With 100 points, you can come up with dozens of different ways to divide the points. With 10 points, there are only three ways at most. When one's own strength is not enough, no matter how exquisite the tactical arrangements are, the most that can be achieved in the end is two or three sets. So sometimes when the gap is big enough, the protagonist's team can lose, but it must lose meaningfully and reflect the competitive spirit, but it must not win in a rigid way. In this case, it would be really boring, you know! Having said so much, let me summarize for you some of the core points of your book! As long as you continue to maintain these core points, it is a bit difficult to become popular, because sports novels are already very unpopular, but it is still okay to have enough food and clothing. The three supporting points of your current article must be maintained. The first plug-in, this aspect must not be opened too large. All skills are best controlled within three. If there are too many, problems may arise, such as inconsistent logic. This situation is often found when writing about getting high! I was scolded by readers because I was so excited about my writing, and I was insulted because my IQ was unreasonable! It's best to check the existing plot after writing it to see if there are other ways to solve it to ensure that there are no problems with the logic. The second support point, I call this support point team spirit. You have to know that those who engage in sports without team spirit and collective consciousness will not last long. You can show the sacrifices a team member makes for the team. This can deepen the team spirit, but don't overdo it. If it is too much, it will become personal heroism, and the degree of this aspect must be grasped well. The third support point is that you can't just write about the game, you know, you must have a plot transition. Just writing a competition can easily lead to a situation, ups and downs... An excellent novel must have ups and downs. But don't write emotional dramas. You know, in sports novels, if you write emotional dramas, you are simply blocking your own path. Nowadays, it is difficult for ordinary authors to handle emotional scenes well. Because I have no emotional experience, this is a very scary thing. It is easy to take things for granted, and then be slapped in the face by readers. I have experienced this kind of thing before, and it is really difficult to write emotional scenes. If you write it well, you won't make a penny more, because your subject is sports, and people come here for the competition, not the emotional story between young lovers. Once the writing is bad, the style of the entire plot will completely collapse. The difference in income between the two is really too big. In general, it is better not to write. A novel I wrote had more than 1,000 subscriptions at its peak. Ever since I wrote the emotional drama. There are just over 50 subscriptions left. After that, I was hit hard. If you don't have any life experience, you really can't write emotional dramas, you know that! The investment and expenditure are completely out of proportion. If the whole book collapses, it will be completely finished.