A Wonderful Life in the Siheyuan

It's awesome. It only took about 20 days to write 900,000 words. I don't feel watery yet. If you write it like this, it won't be finished in more than 100 or 200 million words.

Overall it looks pretty good. The only thing I disagree with is the relationship between the protagonist and Yu Li. In a village, you can't hide the relationship between men and women, let alone in a courtyard. It's reasonable to go into the protagonist's house to have fun and get excited. It made me frightened and disgusted. The rabbit didn't eat the grass beside the nest. I don't know what the protagonist was thinking?

There were no families in China in the 1960s, and the theme of the Shen family simply didn't hold up.

This book is a spy war story written on Siheyuan, and it's very disgusting. The author gave the pig's feet a golden finger, and then forcibly reduced his intelligence and downplayed the role of the golden finger. According to a normal person's thinking, it would be very insecure to travel back to that era. When there is a cheat cheat, the first goal will definitely be to think about how to improve one's sense of security, which is to improve one's strength. The first choice is definitely to upgrade the mall of Goldfinger and look for super powerful methods, instead of participating in dangerous things like pig's feet. Moreover, he also thinks that he can buy food in the mall, and then upgrade the mall to have high-tech weapons that are useless to him. After more than a hundred chapters, he can't remember that he is a time traveler with cheats, and he goes to compete with others for brains and power.

I stopped watching after seeing the part where Yu Li slept with her. It was so poisonous. You can sleep with a widow in a courtyard, but you, a married woman, can't sleep with her too. I wanted to create an image of the protagonist who has both big virtues and small virtues, but this is the result? The widow Xu Meng thought it was nothing. You slept with a married woman, so why not write a chronicle and write a pornographic novel? You said it would be no big problem for you to sleep with Qin Huairu. After all, you are a widow, but you slept with a married woman? Really speechless, poisonous

Why should this kind of period writing have space? It's the same space, it's cliche!

After reading half a million words, I discovered a very scary thing! ! Has the timeline in it only been more than ten days? Fourteen or fifteen days, oh my god! Author, do you plan to write this until 1966? There are still more than a thousand days left... After more than ten days of plot, I still don't think it's watery. . Magic!

Just a Siheyuan fanfic. The content style inside. Anti-gangster spy war. Undercover anti-corruption. Betray. As for this? Author.

Other authors should also read the books about the courtyard house that make money out of excrement. Wouldn't it be nice to hang up a courtyard house and write about things from that era? 99% Of the time, you have to write about something that is just a waste of money.

It looks so tiring. The period novel has turned into a detective novel. Is this appropriate?